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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow tis is superb...

totally luv it...

amazing...

beautifully written...

wow zoya manage to make asad confess his feeling...

thx fr the pm...

Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Nice one yaar, intense and emotional... Loved the assertive zoya :) 👏

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Really loved it! It was very emotional too! Tks loved it

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Woah, woah, woah, pal!!

Damn!! God damn! That was... Ah-mah-ZING!!!! Zing-a-didi!!

First of all, I want to ask how you didn't know what you were writing?? :O

The only thing that I understand is that sometimes when you start writing something with a concept already set in mind, somewhere in the middle or even in the beginning, or in the end the story changes.

You know, it has happened to me a lot of times! I sit down to write something, when it ends up being something else, but maybe on similar lines! 😆

Anyhow, this confession one shot was mindblowing! You captured his fear, and other emotions very well. And that particular part where Zoya's determination shot up to make Asad realise what he feels for her, was something I grinned at widely, still wondering how it would look like when something like it was shot for the show!

Thanks for sharing this, Mochhug!

Annie

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 44

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Brilliant OS! ❤️

Totally loved it! :)

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

AWESOME OS ❤️
beautifully written...

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Just one word 'Amazing' 👏

I loved it completely!!

You're too great Monica!!

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

That was good!!
Zoya was so determinant to get Asad confess!!
N the way Asad finally let go off his fears was emotional... he listened to Zoya, his heart!!