AsYa OS: Boliye, Mr. Khan

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses

That was amazing! 👏
Do u ever write anything that isn't beautiful?
Don't think so! 🤣
God, I'm so jelly! 😆
Awesome job, as always! ❤️
-Fari 😳 ❤️

Omg Fari you're making me blush! 😳😳😳

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
Errm..

Res? 😳

Gonna comment in a bit.. I gotta get a big boy munch 😃

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This OS made me cry 😭
The way I would have loved to see this happen in the show itself.. Would have been great ..
Your choice of words was beautiful as usual 😃
My favourite part in this obviously has to be when he flung the door open and just hugged her when she threatened him to go to new York 😳 I could imagine everything.. It felt more like the scene when he imagined her after she had left the house 😳

When Zoya started talking about his pain.. It was so emotional. I felt like everything was real That's how sad it was.. Your choice of words just makes everything seem so real.. Just imagining Asad crying makes my heart shatter

Again when he hugs her and tells her why he's scared I swear it's like you're hell bent on making me cry even though this OS has a happy ending.. It still has a crying Asad all the way through.. But the star of the OS has to be Zoya and the way she compelled him to confess.. It was just amazing .. Why couldn't we av a confession like this in the show

Awww I'm sorry to make you cry. 😭 But I'm sooo sooo sooo happy that you liked it so much. Now after writing this, I kinda wish the confession was like this too. Or at least that one of them had dreamed this. But oh well. I wanna hear Zoya say she loves him now. She hasn't done it directly. She's almost said to his face twice, under extreme pain. But I want her to say once. Like with the pizza or something. Maybe when he completes Wishes 3 & 4

But thanks again for the BEAUTIFUL comment

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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awesome os...i love this one...but I would even like to read live wire incident starting story...[if you write something new,plz do pm me..] hehehe cat-fights over here too and thanxx for the pm!!!!!!!!

Edited by blasterrr - 12 years ago

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astonm

@astonm

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

AWWW!

This was adorable Monica! The pain we would not have to go through if this happened!

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: astonm
AWWW!

This was adorable Monica! The pain we would not have to go through if this happened!

Thanks! Partial credit goes to Kirann for giving me the idea of an angsty confession haha. But soo happy you liked it

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

I've been dying to read this one since you told me Kiran requested it.

OMG! The sudden hug was too beautiful for words. The thought of losing her once again. No! Ahhh!

I'm actually speechless! OH MY GOSH! This was flawlessly beautiful. Asad's inner turmoil so very beautifully written, certain parts gave me goosebumps! Damn girl damn, this was perfection.

WOW! I wanna kiss your gifted hands! MWAH!

LOVED THISSS! TOOO TOOO BEAUTIFUL!

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Loved the confession :-) especially how Asad overcame his fears just to be with Zoya

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

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Priyanka Chettiar

@priyachettiar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Why can't this happen in show I mean Y...?😆😆
It was sososo Lovely,loved it...❤️
It was typical of Asya to b stubborn...😉
zoya resolved to make him confess his feelings n he determined to b away frm her,amazingly written...👏👏
n yay zoya made Akdu confess...⭐️
p.s tht hug when she threatened him she wil go back. 😳😳

-Priyanka

Edited by priyachettiar - 12 years ago