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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
d day i dont lyk ur work ...i ll accept m an alien ...

u can demand monica ...coz u make ur updates worthy of ur demands ...
anywaz update soon plzzz ...

You're sooo sweet! 😳😳😳 I'm seriously blushing so much right now 😃😳

Aww thanks! But I don't usually make demands for this FF 😆😆

I'll try to do it ASAP. But I can say for sure there won't be an update until at least mid next week. Midterms! But soon I promise! 😃

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: mochhug

You're sooo sweet!😳😳😳I'm seriously blushing so much right now😃😳

Aww thanks! But I don't usually make demands for this FF😆😆

I'll try to do it ASAP. But I can say for sure there won't be an update until at least mid next week. Midterms! But soon I promise!😃

awww midterms ...u people r just brilliant ...n take tym out of ur studies ...i to never commented on IF till i was studying ...anywaz xams plus its festive season now ...to it wud b difficult ...but do update MJ n Vaada both ...

n keep on blushing ... :$ ..

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

superb, marvelous, mesmerizing, amazing, fantabulous, rocking, incredible, etc, etc, etc...Girlll u can addd urself alll the adjectives and superlatives to praise ur talent here...This was the bestesttt and the most awaited part of this beautiful story...

Thoroughly enjoyed everything just like zoya did in this chapter...everything was so perfect, and the masterstroke obviously was the revelation of the scar...that scene be it anywhere, if it is in the show or in any scripts always steals the limelight...

And what a prettty dresss u chose for zoya...darling u r a sweetheart truly...

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Awesome udapte Asad is so romantic 😳

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

freakin awesome!!! the entire thing was beautifully written...the dresses were perfect...ambience amazing...her chariots mindblowing...all the setup was beautifully done!!!! afterall it's asad ahemad khan!!!!...dreamy date...(sigh)
continue soon...how will I wait to read further!?!?!?

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

this is simply perfect

kuddos to you

Awesome

Brilliant

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Kool

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Zoetic

can't think anything related to X... you tell me and I'll add it...

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Rattyswami

@Rattyswami

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

wht the!!!!😡 why did you stop there, she needed to say something back to him😉 ...pls pls pls pls pls update soon...I want to know her reply...she's Zoya Farooqui afterall her reply will be out of this world😆...and i love this Asad...he didn't get stuck with "woh actually.." or even the stupid, "Hum ek doosere se kitne alag hai"...or the classic, "Hum PLATE aur CHAMMUCH ki tarha hai, jo waisa toh kitne alg hai, but when they come together they COMPLETE EACH OTHER"😆 (🤣that was just to GOOD)

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Hey Monica... Loved this update...👏 👏👏

Loved the way the scar on Zoyas arm was revealed and how Asad confessed his love for her.

The kiss was sooo hot. Loved the detailing you made there.☺️ ☺️☺️☺️

All in all this chapter was a good read. Please update soon n please pm me for the next part.😃😃