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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

That was amazing loved the confession thanx for the PM and update soon😃

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Ramlath

@Ramlath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

awesome update...tnks fr d pm...😃

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

really u left us hanging
and to hear I love u echo wow
continue soon

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

OMG Monica! DYNAMITE update!! You totally blew me away!!

The details leading to the date was too good! The limo, the chariot ride, cherry blossoms and the notes - MA!! The red dress was just WOW!! Drop dead gorgeous. The date was drool worthy!

The scar scene was very emotional. Didn't you write an OS on that scene too? Asad finally confessed! Brilliant! I wish I could write more but am exhausted after a long day of Halloween celebrations!

Here's a standing ovation for your brilliant update:

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Awesome chapter!!!! Can't wait for zoyas response!!!

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: webuser7
OMG Monica! DYNAMITE update!! You totally blew me away!!

The details leading to the date was too good! The limo, the chariot ride, cherry blossoms and the notes - MA!! The red dress was just WOW!! Drop dead gorgeous. The date was drool worthy!

The scar scene was very emotional. Didn't you write an OS on that scene too? Asad finally confessed! Brilliant! I wish I could write more but am exhausted after a long day of Halloween celebrations!

Here's a standing ovation for your brilliant update:

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳😳 😳

Seriously blushing like a fool Aww THANK YOU!!

And yes! I had done one on the scar revelation. But it was kind of a continuation to the one in the show 😃 This was more my version 😆😳

So happy you liked it 😃 And no worries. Your comment is making blush enough as it is. Haha. No more needed. But of course, if you feel the need to add more later, I will certainly not object 😆

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

wow, so romantic😳.. really lovely, you really nailed both the characters, perfect Asad and Zoe.. beautiful...eagerly waiting for the next one..

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lover1998

@lover1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

OMG loved the update. I can't wait to read about Zoyas reaction. IDK why but i have a feeling its not going to be gud and then Ayaan will convince her to give Asad another chance...idk thats just what my mind is predicting.

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: lover1998
OMG loved the update. I can't wait to read about Zoyas reaction. IDK why but i have a feeling its not going to be gud and then Ayaan will convince her to give Asad another chance...idk thats just what my mind is predicting.

😲 why would you think that??

😆 Well you're kinda close. But not quite. Good guess though 😉

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: fanraya
wow, so romantic😳.. really lovely, you really nailed both the characters, perfect Asad and Zoe.. beautiful...eagerly waiting for the next one..

😲 I nailed them? Aww thanks!! 😳😳 I was afraid it was little too out of character for Asad, glad to know it wasn't too much 😃