AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#2 ~ NOTE PG. 123 - Page 28

Originally posted by: webuser7

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Well well well! Wonders never cease! Look who updated!! I'll come back later after reading and comment then!

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Monica, lovely update! 👏 You just reminded me why I love this FF!! (after ur 2.5 month break, I almost forgot 😉) 😃 Well worth the wait!! Now don't be the Eid ka Chaand with the next update!! 🤣

LOL! I know I tend to disappear on sabaticals 😆

I just realized I hit the front row seat, 1st spot! Time for a dance! 🥳 🥳

You did!! I think this is the first time on any of my works! 😳

OK, can we get a pix of this dress? Sounds gorgeous!! Sleeveless?? A little black dress? Red? She can always wear a sweater!! It's no longer summer in NY but cool Fall weather. 😉 OK! OK! Enough of the digs about the delayed update! 😃

LMAO dig away 🤣 I really did take WAAAY too long this time. 😆 But actually in my story it's only been a few days since the whole Sagaai fiasco, so technically is the beginning of summer in NYC here 😉😉😉 But it will be sexy for sure 😳 And YES! I already have it picked out! Actually, I've had it picked out for 2 months 😆

"Zoya noticed a sweaty Asad Ahmed Khan dressed in sweats, and a fitted wife beater, walking towards the kitchen, looking like Hercules."

What? Wife beater?! Did your autocorrect play a mean trick?! 😆 I hate when that happens! All my "to" change to "yo". Don't ask me. Pls fix it before the forum erupts like it did after the slap. I am sure you meant wind cheater!! 😆

LMAO 🤣 Believe it or not, my parents and even my brother actually call it a wife beater. Wind cheater to them is that poofy jacket 😆

The "paper kiss" was hilarious! I wonder if anyone read the Wall Street Journal that "intimately" before!! You just made the boring newspaper interesting(I am ducking tomatoes from the financial folks) !! I need to go and get my copy now!! 😃

😆 I dunno where that came from. It just thought of her tripping on him while checking him out, and then I thought, what if her face lands on his 😉😳😆

Now why is Zoya hiding the visa letter? If you mentioned previously, I forgot. Oh shucks!! Sorry, I'll stop rubbing it in 😆 So, Zoya came up with a lame excuse about writing a snail mail to her friend. And Mr. Duh Ahmed Khan bought it? Knowing how technology advanced she is, he didn't question why she didn't email her friend? Never mind, he forgot!! 😆 No, no, no! Not a dig again, I meant the paper kiss ( I have heard of paper cuts, now paper kiss has made its way into my vocabulary!!) messed up his already messed up brain!! 😃

"Acha?" he whispered huskily into her ear. Asad raked his free hand through her silky tresses, pushing them to the opposite side of her neck. Zoya's breath hitched, his lips just centimeters from her ear, from her neck.

"Mein aapko boring lagta hoon? Hm. Aaj raat ko pata chalega, ki mein kitna boring hoon," he whispered again, while burying his nose in her hair, intoxicating himself with her strawberry scent. He smirked inwardly, feeling her go rigid against him, her heart pounding.

Well you see my dear she doesn't want him to know that she CAN go back. He still thinks she was deported. And she wants to make decision on her own. I mean she already got the visa, right? But she still doesn't know if she should go back. Cause she still thinks he doesn't trust her. 😊

LOL I know. Mr. Duh Ahmed Khan (🤣) is not questioning her because he's too preoccupied with wooing her 😉😉😉 PLUS! He's trying to trust her more, so immediately questioning her wouldn't really go too well with that, would it? It'll come up later though 😃

Phew, is it really cool Fall time in NY? Why did it just get warm in here?!

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Cut to Visa office: She finally got the Visa! Now, nothing to prevent her from returning to Bhopal with the Khans!! Can you get them married and then send back to India? I'd love to see the smirk wipe off from the cat's face seeing them married!!

Well as of now I have something else in mind 😆 But hey, the cat with certainly get the shock of her life 🤣

Zoya is finally questioning the poison incident! Hope Ayaan gets to tell her about Tanveer!

😃 YES! Finally! I know it's a little overdue 😆 But things will be kicked into high gear starting with the next chapter, as this FF will be ending soon 😭

SHH!! Don't tell anyone 😆 I'll be murdered 🤣

Zoya's friends are awesome. They are helping Asad with his date plans!! How sweet!!

Glad you liked that 😃 I really wanted to see more of Zoya's friends from NY, but sadly they didn't show it in the show 😭

Can't wait to see what he has arranged! What's the pizza alternative?! Pizza Canapes? I'll wait (cough cough I need some water 😉) and watch!!

Not Pizza Canapes! 😆 Not a bad idea though 😳 It'll be Pizza, but something else, that's really special for Zoya. And that's all I have to say about that (exaggerated Forrest Gump voice) 😆

Great job yet again!! 👍🏼 Update soon!! 🤗

THANK YOU!!! So glad you liked it 😃 This is BY FAR the longest comment you've left me. ANd I loved it!

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Originally posted by: mochhug

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

I read ur story in one go. Very beautifully written. Awesome. Update soon..