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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

oh wow such a beautiful update after such a long gap. I though you weren't going to update it now,

I really loved the part, my fav being the kiss. oh how I loved it!

Thank goodness Zo eko yaad to aya abt the eng fiasco, I think there'll be some hurdle again to stop AsYa to connect with Ayaan, as now he knows a bit abt the real situation.

I'm glad Zoe has friends who are so sweet, caring

looking forward to the eve date. I hope Asad confesses this time.

love.

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zoyaah

@zoyaah

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

i like it waiting to read more continue plz

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Omg u finally updated am so happy
I jst hope Zoya wears the dress n pls try n upload the dress she's going to wear
Superb update

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

awesome update..really good...👏

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

awesome as always but don't make us wait too long for an update

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

It's about time you updated..

Made us wait a century for one update !!

RES .. I'll be back soon 😃

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1. Sorry for taking so long to actually edit my comment 😆

Anyway..

Firstly.. I couldn't help but giggle at their "kiss" 😆 Unique and very very enticing .. If I was Zoya, I would have also tripped after seeing him in front of me 😳

Asad in sweats and a wife beater and bench pressing! OMFG!! I would kill to see this come true ☺️ ☺️

I loved the whole head banging and screaming in unison 😆

To be honest, I was actually scared that Asad might read the letter and maybe get the wrong meaning out of it.. Luckily that didn't happen 😆 I thought that it would lead to another argument between them that was cause Asad's plan to patao Zoya fail 😆

Their argument about friends was so real!! Like seriously, it can easily be pictured like something that happened. The way you described it, I swear I felt like it was actually happening. Great job 👍🏼

And then again ☺️ his breath fanning her neck ☺️ made me blush while just reading this description of their intimacy 😳 Woah! "Aaj raat ko pata chalega ki main kitna boring hoon".. Are you trying to kill me?! Picturing Asad saying these words ☺️ Hotness!! 😳

Thank you for getting rid of my nervousness! Nothing went wrong and Zoya managed to sort out her visa complications and please tell me that Tanveer will be exposed soon.. Pleaseee? 😃

If I could find Neeru and Kareena I would literally hug them! 😆 ahh the way I'm happy they're helping Asad is a huge relief 😆

Well, now I'm going to read the next update and actually find out if she does wear the dress or not.. 😳

Edited by x_Mishti_x - 11 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
It's about time you updated..

Made us wait a century for one update !!

RES .. I'll be back soon 😃

😆

Sorryyy

I was waiting for your comment 😳

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Hey

Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up. Loved your update. Thank you for the PM

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

so zoya is on thinking mode again...and ahan!!! our detective is on the way to discover abt that bloody poison😉

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Res!

Unresd Finally!!😃

Fab Update!!

Sweaty Ahmed Khan is going to be the death of me😳😳..sorry of Zoya!!😆😆

Paper kiss??? 😲😳😳Who invented the paper hun?? 😡Jala do paper ko!!😡😡

Chitthi wala bahana zabardast tha.😆.Zoya teasing about him having only one friend was nice and what followed next??😳😳😳...I was in the pile of goo as you put it!!😳😳😳Asad is not at all Boring Ahmed Khan!!😳

Loved the girl talk at the end!! I think Zoya will wear the dress!!😃

*onto the next chapter*

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago