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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seera1382

Awww... So emotional!!!! I love the way promise to stay together!!! Just wondering wht made them hate each other???


😊 thanks updating soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 6

THE AUTUMN

Zoya jumped down to stroll on the concrete bridge. It was past midnight. The place was drenched in an amazingly serene silence. The silence which was dawning on her existence as it always did.

All of a sudden she lost balance and landed awkwardly on the concrete road. A shriek escapes her mouth muffling a louder-enough-to-be-heard hiss in the bushes beside her. She pulls herself together, positioning to sit straight; with hurt knees and palms with thick red liquid oozing out feverously. She stared back at her hands; indirectly staring back at her past.

(Flashbacks)

It was the final paper... Zoya and Asad walked out of the college amongst the shoving crowd.

"Finally i am free...!" Zoya exclaimed in relief and excitement, clapping her hands together.

"Yeah... feels like a prison break.." He added.

She giggled.

"No plans for tonight... i am gonna go in my coffin to sleep the weekend away!" Zoya declared her plans.

"I knew that was coming... but forget it girl... aj se no sleep wleep!"

"Come on!"

"Okay wait here... let me go get ma bike from the parking..." He said moving away.

"I will manage on my own..." She yelled back.

"Not today... stay put you!" He was pretty adamant.

She waited for him there, looking at the sea of students pouring out of the college, everyone had the smile of freedom plastered on their faces.

A heavy bike sped by her; turned back; started spiralling around her. Through the helmet she recognised the face- the face she wished not to see, every single morning. Her smile vanished. It wasn't Asad but Akram.

He finally brought the monster to a halt. Zoya stood there frozen to the spot.

"Oh no not again..." She didn't know why the guy gave her creeps, why she always felt an unknown jeopardy when he is around.

"Hi dear!"

She flinched; the two words clicked an image inside her already accelerating mind, pushing her beating heart to limits. The words brought the image of those obnoxious letters that were eating her up inside. The letters that were there just after two weeks of her relationship with Asad.

"Dont bother me Akram..." She said turning away to leave.

"Oh come on...just this once...listen to me!" he neared her just in time to grab her by her wrist.

His firm grip startled her for a moment.

"What the...Mera hath choro Akram...!" She tried releasing her wrist from his firm grip but it was too tough for her.

"Haath chorne ke liye nahi pakra jata..." he said flashing his peaky pointed set of teeth.

"Choro! Warna mein shor machaon gi..."

He smirked and then forced a fine snort.

"tsk tsk tsk! Same old dhamki..."

She felt his grip loosen a bit, taking the advantage of which she pulled away with all the might she had. Although successful in releasing herself, she lost her stability and awkwardly landed on the ground. Just in time another bike's breaks screeched. Asad jumped off his bike flitting towards Zoya, who by now had her palms bleeding.

"You alright?" he asked anxiously taking her hands in his to examine closely. In the process a low but painful shriek escaped her mouth. That was it to give life to the loin inside him.

He jumped n his feet grapping a startled Akram by the collars of his shirt.

"How dare you?"

Akram knew trouble had been invited. As he fought back to compete with Asad's intense glare and at the same time desperately trying to free himself from his grip; not wanting to invite any attention from around but failing badly; he knew some catastrophe was up.

Zoya pulled herself up, snaked he arms around Asad's thumping biceps, and pleaded.

"Leave it Asad..."

"Get aside Zoya... i am not going to leave this son of a..."

"Easy tiger..." Akram interrupted. "Kuch nai hua... she lost balance and fell...if you want i can apologise...but lets end this here..."

Zoya knew this wasn't enough to calm down the animal inside him, now that it was out; Akram wont be spared. She couldn't help but take a quick glance at the students who had circled around, with their tension filled faces and curiosity filled eyes.

"Apologise my foot... Didnt i already warn you not to linger around her...you paid me no heed... i swear i am not gonna leave you just like that this time... you wont recognise your face in the mirror after now...huh! not even your seven generations willt think of exploiting others..." he growled at full volume.

Saying so he pushed him away. The next thing Akram knew was a strong punch piercing in his nose and a think red fountain oozing out of his beak and lips.

He; taken aback; scanned the faces around him, students who were flinching and gasping. Anger flashed in his eyes, the sheer embaressment was too much for him to take. He neared Asad; who was continuously ignoring a pleading Zoya...

"Asad...thats enough...lets end it here..." She said breathlessly.

"Not today Zoya...this guy has been getting on my nerves since long...its time he learns his lesson..." he removed her hands from him.

Akram scuffed...

"We will see who learns his lesson today...haye! tiger tell your lamb to get aside... or you don't want to see her in the mess too..."

Zoya gaped at him and then felt Asad free himself from her.

"You bloody bas***d..." Asad slammed his fist on his face again; Akram repelled back hitting on Asad's face.

"Asad!" Zoya screamed.

He regained himself to hit him again. The two fought like wild dogs until Asad finally got the upper hand. He aimed at banging his head on a steel bench when Zoya rushed in to stop him...

"No Asad!...he'll die..." She screamed.

Akram; in a miserable condition; was panting for his breaths. Asad decided to let go of him. He slumped on the ground boisterously, his blood mixing with the soil.

Zoya pulled Asad away; she could feel the pain of those bruises on his body and couldn't bear it anymore. She was losing all her body's water to the tears, where her heart and mind had lost all wits and sanity.

"You are gonna regret this Asad..." Akram yelled from behind.

Asad stopped; clenched his fists; while Zoya tightened her grip.

"Not only you..."

Asad was about to turn back and finish off the rest of him when Zoya intervened.

"Leave him Asad...please..." She pleaded.

He finally decided to let go. Both left.

- - - -

'What was not there in our relationship Asad? Love? Care? Feelings? Or trust?'

She laughed wickedly... 'Nahi tha...trust hi tu nai tha...!'

She laughed hysterically, weeping at the same time.

Her cell phone beeped forcing her back to the reality.

She checked it sluggishly to find an e-mail awaiting her. The senders ID totally unknown, she opened it, realising the very instant who it was and seeing the content she lost track of everything around.

Two impatient eyes gawped at her, desperately waiting for a response.

o - - -

Notes:-

Okay now this is serious... i know how desperately you guys are waiting for the truth to come out... but tell me am i not playing my part?

I give updates as soon as possible, like every day to be precise! Still i don't get it why are you guys... you know!

I get it that waiting gets too nerving, but what do you want me to do? Cut it short and put that part here now? The story will lose all suspense and i will have to draft it again!

Im not getting aggressive here but i do request all you to have a little patience here. I am doing my best by updating ROZ! I cant help it more...your corporation is required here...phuleeez!!!!!!!

I love you guys for the response you are giving cant i ask for a little patience here?

Every part reveals a tiny bit... its you who has to point it out!... so please for the hard work im putting here... at least!!!

I still welcome any criticism by anyone who finds it rude!

Thankyou!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Take your time sweetie, i love the pace of the suspense 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its wao...fab update

M waiting fr nxt...wana knw hw dis story unfolds...bcz da way wrt...its jst awesome


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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok for my part that was a kick ass update I liked it. I must commend you only your ability to update so regularly. I know that at times it can be hard. I work full time, run my household and just finished off my first novel so I know how hard it can be, so whenever you update is ok by me. 😊 Going back to the update, loved the scuffle, that Akram is bad news and it hurts that Aysa were separated. They are meant to be together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing updates😊😊...loved them..loved the way they made promises❤️..waiting for the next update..continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is superb
cant wait to know how the story unfolds
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gud one..thnks 4 d pm dear

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
totally understand we cant spoil the flavour of ur ss but kya kare human nature cant change n awesome update

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