AsYa SS- Autumn To Ashes ❤️ Complete - Page 79

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Wow! You are brilliant! Beautiful!👏 I have no words to describe the story. I just read the whole story in one go. It was a wonderful experience.❤️ How did I miss out such an awesome story for so long. But I'm really happy that I came across it at least now. I would love to read More of your works. Great work dear!👍🏼 Keep on writing more of such mesmerizing stories. ⭐️

Thank you for reading😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey UJ
Did u read my actual comment in page 12?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey it was just fantastic loved whole story ayaan is jerk he got his punishment n d end was lovely akaram is not that bad totally loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-


yippeee !!!!
you finally updated :)!!!!

And yes i missed this sorry kiki! Meri jaan!

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

i have been stalking this thread for a long time and now when you finally came back , i'm late !!!
Geez man !
all the blame goes to my school ! 🤢


Its okay if i was caught up in work so were you. we are even. i got late in updating you got late in reading... 😆

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-



UJ ! i don't know whether i'll be able to comment soon !
will try to comment soon !
have a test tommorrow !
i'm so glad you finally updated !


Its ebtirely okay. I will be waiting for your YOU 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

i am so soo sorry for not unresing my post !
i got busy with life and forgot about commenting ! sorry :( 😕
i know it's been soo long !
sorry


Its okay dont be sorry. I should be sorry! i wasnt quite reading the comments here. I thought since i was updating after ages i must have lost all my good old readers. i was so wrong my kiki was waiting for this update of mine. Sorry for not being able to reply in time.

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

i don't remember where i resed so i am gonna comment here !


UJ !!!!!
i have no words to praise about this awesome ff !
everything is so carefully placed and amazingly portrayed !
the last chapter was a breath taker !👏

Neha's fiance was Akram ! you dont know how much i stormed my brain thinking about who is Neha's fiance !
about the stalker i thought it was Akram but it turned out to be Ayaan !


"Go... you are free... I forgive you... go find relief if life gives you any... I don't remember where and why you existed in my life... go... I don't hold anything against you." She said and saw his face change clour from red to white to something she couldn't understand.

when Akram apologised to zoya , zoya's reaply really hit him hard ! he never thought she will forgive him like this ! it's true that his apology doesnt really matter as it won't change what his actions did to her past !


"You know love drowns you in places where you don't even find water..."

i simply have no words to say to these lines except " WOW !!!"
simply " WOW " !!
the revealing about Zoya and Ayaan really shocked Asad and it filled him with enormous gilt !
he was ready to do anything to get her back !
i knew Asad would jump into the lake ! but what was unexpected was Zoya asking him to do so !

"If you really have to die... die with me then..."

these lines were so sweet and emotional ! :')

And who knew that there lived some Ayan, who had everything in his life but family and LOVE. Because he hd once snatched it from someone.

Who knew about the Akram who lived a life of isolation, somewhere in the heart of Europe; because no one wanted to stay more than a fortnight in his life.

Akram and Ayaan deserves their fate !

Who knew about the Neha who was married off to a gold-digger family who couldn't value her worth, because once she couldn't value the worth of true friendship.

and Neha too !


i loved the way how you portrayed how everyone's life turned out !
loved these lines !

Who knew that life could finally turn out to be so different in the end? Who knew?
Because the Autumn was gone and the Ashes settled...
👏

wow ! this story couldnt have an ending more perfect than this !👏👏


such an awesome and amazing ss !
loved it from the very first chapter !
this ss is a proof how splendid you are as a writer who leaves your readers demanding for more !
please do write more !
best wishes :)



love you loads !🤗
-kiki
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OMG kiki you are pure love! love you sooo sooo soo much! you know writing is fun for me but it goes on to a complete next level when i hear such huge comments from people like you! gives the extra spark to my smile when i read your review. feels like i made someone happy and believe me its the best feeling ever.

i wasnt writing for long long long time now and i missed ppl like you from the forum so very much. but now a story or two are knocking hard on the back of my head. i just wish i get the time to knock them out of my brain and into this forum. I will hopefully get some time out and pen down another story. you are going to read it na?


love ya! muah muah muah!


and again love ya kiki 😳😳


hope to hear from you soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey it was just fantastic loved whole story ayaan is jerk he got his punishment n d end was lovely akaram is not that bad totally loved it

Thank you so much 😃

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