New York Se Aaya Mera Dost...OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: niki_12

Awesome OS! Loved it! You are a fantastic writer! If only you wrote QH!!!

I hope Asad gets his brain back in the show also, just a little bit of thinking is all he needs!

Once again, loved it!

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

That was amazing. LOL! Farhan was a guy Zoya hired??🤣 I would love to see something like this in show but obviously we won't:( I hope at least we get Asad yelling at Tannu! That would make me feel A LOT BETTER!

Originally posted by: webuser7

Arre yaar Sangeeta, you are awesome! Your OS rocks! You need to send this to Gul!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Where do I start?

As always, I'll start with the title! Purrrfect! 👏Bachpan ki yaadein taaza ki aapne! My cousin from Mumbai (now in CA) loved to sing this song at family events. His twist was a 2 stanza joke for every person and we had to guess who it was.

example:

Chorus: Bombay se aaya mera dost, dost ko salaam karo. Raat ko khao piyo, din ko aaraam karo.

Stanza: Dost ke liye maine Mercedes mangayi (sing twice). Paidal chalne wala dost. Dost ko salaam karo ... This was a dig at one of the uncles who refused to buy a car!! 😆

oh really? That's so cute...I am glad u could relate to the title. I was wondering if any of the new kids on the forum would have heard that song

Moving on ...

With the references you've made to movies in your previous posts, I take it you are a movie buff too. Is Bhaag Milkha Bhaag on your mind?? 😆 Farhan Akhtar?? I cracked up reading that! 😆 Don't tell me it was not intentional! 😉 The Bollywood actor twist at the end gave you away!! You are so creative and humorous!!

he he...yes, I love watching movies. haven't seen BMB yet but I do love Farhan Akhtar. I wanted to throw you all off with the final twist😉

How I would love to see something like this happen on the show! (Without the actor twist. I want a few episodes of the jealousy track with a real friend!!! Payback time!!) Zoya and her taunts: priceless! 🤣 The feminist in me loved it!! 😆 The jealousy track! Uff! Asad bitten by the green eyed monster! Yeah!! The not-so subtle hints that made Asad sit back and think and get suspicious! Finally, the Khan grey cells are back from a long hiatus! 🥳The sudden home ultra sound! Ha! Ha! Billi trapped!!

Too good!!

yeah, I feel that once Asad is jealous, his brain cells will finally wake up. Right now, he has been in the driver's seat in their relationship but once another man comes in the picture, I feel he will do anything to keep Zoya...i really want him to deliver the final punch to tanveer

Can we get another OS where I can use this emoticon ????

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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aww...people want part 2 of this. Let me think. thanks RK...loved your comments :) A big encouragement to write more

Originally posted by: anushka2112

Allah miya ur OS is Like saviour... jst two words for you... Love You...

very logical and wisely written.. really CVs should hire you as a story writer...

bas can't bear Asad taking care of tanu's part...
exact chemistry would like to see between zoya and farhan...

dear agar aisa sach m ho gaya to roz
chocolate tumhare liye 😊

and do continue pls pls pm me every your work... its treat to read

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

how did you think of this?this was just awesome diii!!!!!!!

u shud be the writer of QH...u write so so well😳

please write the second part...please!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: me2you

Thank you so much for this, Di! I guess, this was much needed for all of us just to get into a better mood after all the drama.

I could totally imagine this happening in the show itself.

Kaash yeh Tanveer ka dram aur natak jald se jald khatam ho jaye, so that we can get back our old AsYa back.

Great imagination you have and wonderful dialogues.👍🏼 It's always a pleasure to read your OS and FF, it brings a smile on my face...

ALWAYS! 😃

Originally posted by: Noe123

Excellent 👏! You made my day.

I didn't like start of the story with both Asad and Zoya acting nonchalant. Even though I am tired of seeing a moping Asad, I expect things to be extremely awkward given the gravity of situation. Chalo, koi nahi..later part made up for everything.

Thanks Noe. You are right but I wanted to show Zoya bindaas just to rub salt on Asad's wounds. later he did notice her tears and drank the coffee mixed with her tears😉...I don't know if everyone noticed that😆

I absolutely loved Farhan-Asad-Zoya convo and how Zoya and Farhan took digs at Asad. I really really really do not want this guy to suffer for something that he hasn't done, but if he still keeps being dense, this is the way. Superb dialogues! Very logical, hitting bull's eye. Glad that you included that lost voice message.

yeah, Zoya felt sorry for asad and the only reason she was sarcastic was to wake Asad's sleepy brain. I hope Asad does deliver the final blow in the show too

Though I will be super angry, if Asad doesn't trust Zoya again. What could have a 10 year old Tanveer done that Asad has such blind trust in her? Saved his/Dilshaad/Najma's life by putting her own life in danger? Agreed a very noble of her - a person will be indebted forever, but still there is a reason we have been given an organ called brain..Asad miyan, when everything points against her, it is good to make use of that organ...phew...I am ranting.

yeah, he just needs to start thinking...dimaag ki khidki kholkar

And, thank you for giving this Asad some brains - at least he took some action.

Farhaan being a hired doctor was some twist. But, you know what I would have liked him to be a real doctor. Otherwise, Tanveer will know about this (of course) and will blame Zoya for everything.

no tanveer is busted already. The ultrasound report will show she is 12-14 weeks pregnant! She can blame Zoya all she wants

Anyways, really good story. Would love to see this happen in the show. Sorry, just wanted to write about your story but ended up ranting about the show, too. Thanks noe...always a pleasure to read your views

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

I just loved it. Please find out the part where Asad finds out how pregnant Tanveer is and kicks her out! LOL