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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesome Sangeetha..Really very nice..I loved this one-shot..😊

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Thank you so much for this, Di! I guess, this was much needed for all of us just to get into a better mood after all the drama.

I could totally imagine this happening in the show itself.

Kaash yeh Tanveer ka dram aur natak jald se jald khatam ho jaye, so that we can get back our old AsYa back.

Great imagination you have and wonderful dialogues.👍🏼 It's always a pleasure to read your OS and FF, it brings a smile on my face...

ALWAYS! 😃

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

nice one sangeetha...kash asad/dillu moma ek baar tanveer ko doctor se che up karva le...

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Excellent 👏! You made my day.

I didn't like start of the story with both Asad and Zoya acting nonchalant. Even though I am tired of seeing a moping Asad, I expect things to be extremely awkward given the gravity of situation. Chalo, koi nahi..later part made up for everything.

I absolutely loved Farhan-Asad-Zoya convo and how Zoya and Farhan took digs at Asad. I really really really do not want this guy to suffer for something that he hasn't done, but if he still keeps being dense, this is the way. Superb dialogues! Very logical, hitting bull's eye. Glad that you included that lost voice message.

Though I will be super angry, if Asad doesn't trust Zoya again. What could have a 10 year old Tanveer done that Asad has such blind trust in her? Saved his/Dilshaad/Najma's life by putting her own life in danger? Agreed a very noble of her - a person will be indebted forever, but still there is a reason we have been given an organ called brain..Asad miyan, when everything points against her, it is good to make use of that organ...phew...I am ranting.

And, thank you for giving this Asad some brains - at least he took some action.

Farhaan being a hired doctor was some twist. But, you know what I would have liked him to be a real doctor. Otherwise, Tanveer will know about this (of course) and will blame Zoya for everything.

Anyways, really good story. Would love to see this happen in the show. Sorry, just wanted to write about your story but ended up ranting about the show, too.

Edited by Noe123 - 12 years ago

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Sorry.. Duplicate Post..

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sujataraje
unres

hey sangi...🤗.have been waiting for it...and here it is
you write beautifully and that i have told you many times..
loved it to the core❤️...it is lighthearted ,simple and adorable OS...
i love how you pay attention to small details and leave no loopholes in story...thats your uniqueness..👏
here in this OS you explained and connected each and everything in very sensible and logical manner...i wish to see it happening in upcoming episodes(except asad taking care of tannu part)😆
now i really wish farhan entry news comes true...i am wishing for it even more than AsYa nikaah😆
zoe needs a support ( sensible and selfless one,so not ayaan)😆..and i wish like your OS zoe teams up with her bestie and reveal the real face of her love of life's bestie..
well done 👏

Thanks Sujata. I think we are all ready for a light hearted track in QH...hope this Farhan rumor is true and we get some respite from rona dhona

As I said yesterday, a jealous Asad will definitely start using his brain. Right now, he has been in the driver's seat in their relationship but once he sees Zoya slipping away, he will do anything to get her back. Even in my story, I made him think once he saw her with someone else. That's what I want in the show too- Asad to ultimately use his brain and bust Tanveer rather than be a passive observer. Zoya can collect all the clues or use someone to drop hints but Asad needs to make the final move.

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Starrydee
Res

Wooow di that was a perfect OS 👏
I loved Farhan Akthar 😆
And I loved the twist in the end of him actually being a actor
You have written it so beautifully 😳
I could imagine everything
From asads jealousy to zoyas pain

But tell me plz this is not the ending ?
You have one more part
Plzzz don't end here I want a happy ending
And not to be left to imagine one

Your OS and FF are a treat to read 😃
Plz try and continue 😳

Thanks Tanya. I wanted to purposely leave at this juncture so you all can imagine how the ultimate downfall of Tanu rani happens😆...if I have time I might write the second part😉

The final twist was done because we still don't know if Farhan is actually coming on the show or not😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Npdeepa
Sangi... Lets hope something like this happens in the show soon, I mean very soon...

I would be the happiest person in this world😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: braich_gal
please please please please tell me you are doing another part...i wanna see asad's reaction when he finds out the truth and how AsYa gets back together!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!

OMG...itne saare please. Zoya tho ek please mein hi maan gayi thi😆

Let me see if I have time...will def try to write part 2

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: aswini.achu
sangeetha di its awesome..😃i wish something light hearted like this happens in this show😆but that line asad taking care of pregnant tannu is making me😭and continue this pls😉

Thanks aswini...yeah, jammy taking care of Tanu is highly possible😕...but if you read it carefully, he was not enjoying it at all...that's why he sat around with Farhan-Zoya