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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start to the story 😳 Continue 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it yr...good one..pls continue & pm me ankie...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i liked it.. Update it soon...
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NOTE-this update will almost in the POVs as it has not much of dialogues but hidden feelings in the couple which i want to express
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p.s.- for PMs buddy me
i could not reply all of u but i have replied to some of you
thank you so much guys
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Chapter 2
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zoya's POV
i went for the breakfast and wished I don't have to face him again
i am doing all this for him just him and still god is punishing me
What exactly my mistake is
i loved asad or i wanted my abbu back
i wanted my answer but my bad luck i can't even express my feelings in front of anyone except ALLAH
Now i was in the living room but I could not see anyone except phuphie
I asked her about everyone else she told me tanveer and najma had gone to market for some shopping and asad was still in his room he had not come out of his room yet
She asked me to call him for breakfast i didn't wanted to go but i had to
i went to found him still sleeping peacefully on his bed i tried to wake him up but he didn't
i touched him and found him suffering from fever high fever
Doctor was called he injected asad, prescribed some medicines and told us that nothing is about to worry he will be fine in an hour
i left his room
It was my mistake that he was suffering
i had swered not to meet him but i met
Maybe this is the warning by allah not to meet him again
i had to leave now
i packed my luggage by the time najma and tanveer were back home too I took all the memories of Mr. khan with me it was the last time i saw him I left his home leaving a note reading 'I am going back to new York'
asad had gain his consciousness back by the time
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asad's POV
everyone had come to me except zoya i know i had hurt her so much i don't deserve her anymore but...
i heard someone talking i could not hear properly what exactly the person was saying but i heard some words like 'zoya' 'sazish' asad'
i tried to listen to that carefully the voice was now clear it was tanveer talking to someone on mobile phone
she said "main janti huin bi maine tumhara razz khol diya tha par meri vajah se hi zoya ke abbu ne usse accept nahi kiya tum please asad ko us rat ke bare mein kuch mat kehna agar asad ko pata chal gaya ki us rat kuch nahi hua tha asad us vaqt behosh tha aur zoya bhi meri vajah se hi usse aur is ghar ko chod ke gayi hai to vo pata nahi kya kar dale ga"
so this was tanveer's real face which zoya wanted to show me from last few weeks
i went to her, slapped her tight and asked her to leave the house right now
i went in the search of zoya
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zoya's POV
i walked on the road alone
where to go i had no money and even not a shelter to hide myself but i had the tickets of new york but that too after 2 days
suddenly i felt a huge pain on my head
i had met with a accident i was now lying on the road
everything was going black in front of me

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so here is chapter 2

hope you liked it

Edited by hottytotty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Read both parts now. good...so
asad came to know Truth an din search of zoya and zoya met with accident... pl update soon...
Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Very nice..hope asad meats zoya soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice update
Continue soon :)
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Res!

Unres!

Nice job! Do continue soon and thanks for the PM!
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago

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