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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very good! Intresting story! Please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-7

PRESENT (hope u all remember that asad was recollecting what happend a month before)

DILSHAD KNOCKS THE DOOR WHICH BRINGS BACK ASAD FROM HIS THOUGHTS

DILSHAD: ASAD TUM ABHI TAK SOYA NAHI
ASAD: BAS NEENDH NAHI ARI AMMI
DILSHD: (understood about what asad is thinking)PURANI BATOON KE BAREME SOOCNESE NEENDH KHARAB HOJATHI HAI BAS AUR KOI FAIDA NAHI HOGA...SO JAO
ASAD: JI AMMI

DILSHAD: WAISE B CHAR DIN MEIN EID HAI NA...KAL SE JASHAN KI TAYARIYA KARNI HAI TOH TUM THAK JAOGE AUR TUM ISS BAAR EID KI JASHN KO SPONSOR BHI KAR RAHE HO
ASAD: JI...AUR ZOYA BHI WAPAS A RAHI HAI PARSAO ( and bites his tongue) 😆

DILSHAD: HA HA AJAYEGI PHIKAR MAT KARO 😉
(teasing asad)WAISE NAJMA KI NIKHAH BHI KARWANA HAI USKE BAREME TUM KUCH SOCHRAHEHO YA PHIR SIRF JOLU KA GULAM BANNEKA IRADA HAI
ASAD: AMMI...TAMATR KI NIKHAH(thinking about something deeply)

DILSAHD: KYUN NAHI KARVAVOGI KYA
ASAD: ABHI ITNI JALDI KYA HIA EID KE BAAD HUM USKE BARE MEIN BAAT KARENGE
DILSHAD: THEEKE HAI ABI SO JAO
ASAD: JI
(thinking about najma ki nikhah..and takes his phone and calls to zoya...in India time was about 11:30PM {u can expect wat might be time in newyork}zoya shocked to receive a call from asad at that time)

ZOYA(lifts the phone and says):MR.KHAN AAP ABHI TAK SOYE NAHI?KYA BAAT HIA AAPKO MERI YAAD AARI HAI
ASAD: NAHI ISI BAATH NAHI ACTUALLY...
ZOYA: KYA AAPKO MERI YAAD NAHI AARI HAI??
ASAD: ZOYA BACHPANA BANDH KARO AUR MERI BAATH SUNIYE
ZOYA: (understood the seriousness of situation) JI KAHIYE

ASDA: ZOYA BAATH YE HAI KI ABHI ABHI AMMI NE MUJHSE KAHA KI HUME NAJMAKI NIKHAH BHI JALDI KARNI HAI
ZOYA: TOH ISME ITNI HIRANE WALI BAATH KYA HAI MR.KHAN
ASAD: KYA TUM BHOOL GAYEHO LAST MONTH KYA HUA..ISI MEIN WOH NIKHAH KE LIYE KISE MANEGI..ISILIYE MAIN CHATA HOON AAPK USE SAMJHAYE
ZOYA: DONT WORRY MR.KHAN ILL HANDLE THE MATTER
ASAD: THEEK HAI KHUDA HAFIZ (contented with zoya's answer) 😃😊

ZODA:ALAH HAFIZ (happy as asad believed her and gave her a great responsibility) 😃😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
continue soon
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
lovely ff
read all of it in one go
plz continue soon
plz plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-8

Zoya thinking about what asad told her and remembers what happend one month back
FLASHBACK BEGINS

The next day mrng Tanveer says that she had some work she come in a couple of hours as she wanted to meet imran. Zoya understood that she might be gng to imran and she thinks to follow tanver as she also wanted to know the truth that whether he is the father of tanveer's baby or not.
She tells to asad not to worry and she leaves to follow tanveer.

As zoya expected tanveer went to imraan's house. Zoya listens to their conversation.
Tanveer: Aaj mein sab ke samne kehdoongi ki yh bacha tumhara hi hai
Imran: Tanveer meine tumhe already kehchuka hoon ki ye bacha mera nahi hai.Kyun ki mein isa karhi nahi sakta kyun ki mein sirf aur sirf naj
Tanveer: ha mujhe bata hai kit um sirf najma se pyar kiya
Imran: Tujhe kaisa bata hai ki wo najma hai
Tanveer: meine uske ekbaar ek photo ko pakadkar rothe huae dekha baad meinmujhe bata chala ki wo tumhara tasveer tha aur mein samjgayi
Imraan: Matlab tum jis asad ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi us din wo asad bhaijaan tha
Tanveer: ha...lekin wo tumhara nahi najma ki bhaijaan hai

Zoya was shocked listnening to this.
and just then asad calls her to know wer she was.listening to a phone ring tanveer moves around and sees Zoya. But pretends as if she didn't see.zoya thanks god and fastly picks the call and asks asad to come to that place
Mean while tanveer thinks that asad dnt knw about her truth so if she kill zoya even now so that she can some how mange and marry asad as he is richer that imran
Tanveer says slowly to imran : mein tujhe akhari mauka de rahi hoon . wo rahi zoya use kidnap karo aur warehoyse mein bandh karlo
Imarn didn't want to do so as he now came to know that zoya is najma's bhabhi.But he planed something in his mind and with the help of tanveer he kidnaps zoya and hides her in the warehouse.
Tanveer warns imraan that if asad get to know wer zoya is by any means imraan have pay for it
Imraan comes out of warehouse and neglecting tanveers warning he calls asad and says about zoya
meanwhile Tanveer cuts zoya's nerve on hand
wen asad comes to warehouse he saw that tanveer was about to kill zoya he pulls tanveer away and takes zoya to hospital
Doctor says that zoya is fine and he says that he bought zoya in time or else it would be worse.Imraan comes to hospital and says that he is the peson who informed about zoya.before imraan was about to say regarding tanveer asad thanks him and calls police to come to the hospital
Dilshad and najma reach hospital.Najma was shocked to see imraan with asad but was worried for zoya.Meanwhile Doctor says zoya was conscious now they can go and meet her

Imraan sees tanveer in a corner signalling him to meet her.she did so wantedly as she saw data sad noticed herand was about to come to her.Asad saw that tanver signalling imran and think to follow him so he asks Dilshad and najma to go and meet and he leaves to follow imraan .meanwhile najma also saw this and she too thinks to follow him and makes an excuse of bringing water.
Seeing both asad and najma der tannveer thinks dat her plan has worked and blames imraan of being her baby's father and zoya's situation.She says to imraan that their plan didn't succeed as zoya was still alive.before asad bursts out with anger najma shouts at imraan and says that she regrets as she loved a person like imraan asad was shocked at this and consoles najma and will be scolding imraan and tanveer.
Police had reached hospital and asad informs abot tanveer and imraan.Tanveer didn't expect that asad had already called police.When imraan was about to explain to najma police will take them.
Hearing noise outside dilshad comes out and asks whats the matter.Wen asad was about to say najma speaks out saying tanveer kisi besharam aur ghatiya aadmi ke saath milke zoya par hamla ki and signals asad not to tell about imraan to ammi.Asad consoles her and asks dilshad to be with najma as she was upset for whatever happened and goes to see zoya.Zoya siting on the smile to him.Asad goes and hugs her and says "Itni bewakoofi harkhate kyun karti ho bewakoof..aap akale yun chale jathi hai harbaar"
Zoya : its ok mr.khan am fine lekin mujhe aapse kuch jaroori baat karni hai
Asad: Abhi nhi ghar jane ke baad mujhe bhi aapo kuch bata na hai
Meanwhile najma enters and hugs zoya
Asad was now worried for both zoya and najma
Asad fills the discharge form and takes zoya to home

At Night in asya room:
Asad says to zoya what happend in the hospital
Then zoya says that imraan is not a bad guy and says what she saw and says that he is a right guy but tanveer blackmailed him
Zoya: Aur mujhe e bhi lagta hai ki tanveer ki bache ki baap imraan nahi hai kyun ki wo najma se sacha pyar kartha hai...hosakta haiinraan ko tanveer phasari hai.mr.khan please imraan ko bahar ki jye
Asad: Theek hai mein abhi jata hoon
Zoya: mein bhi athi hoon
Asad: nahi zoya..tum aaraam karomein chaltha hoon
zoya: nahi mr.khan mujhe aana hai
asad: theek hai phir hum kal subhah chalte hai abhi aap aaram kijiye
The next mrng:
Asad and zoya leave for police station without informing to any one in the house
They reach policestation and says that imraan is innocent and tells that he takes hiscomplaint back on imraan
Police agrees and releases imraan
Imraan says to asad and zoya about every thing happend and says he dontknow whether he is the father for tanveer's babyor not but he knows that if sinscerely loved anyone means that is najma
Asad and zoya were convinced and asks tanveer for proof of imraan's being her baby's father
Tanveer says that it was none of their business and says that for sure am going to take revenge on zoya, hima and hi entire family
Asad was worried but says that she cant even think to approach zoya and leaves
Asad and zoya reach home along with imraan and asks najma to once talk to him but najma says no and runs to her room.

Asad says to imraan that he will talk to najma and asks him for then to leve and give najma some time.The next day wen zoya in najma's room tells najma once to listen about imraan najma pleads not talk about him.😭

FLASHBACK ENDS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The whole episode ends with a full flashback...
finally tanveer... is locked... but no idea
for how long... nicely written



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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love the story :)
If you ever continue it please pm me as I would love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
NOTE :
I am really sorry that i cant update now
Currently i am busy with all my exams
I exactly cant say when i am going to update

Edited by Zosad - 11 years ago

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