Asya marriage updated!!!!!! NOTE (14/03/14)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1:
As Tanveer pushed zoya from the cliff...the story begins

From asad's hand the green dupatta will flew due to wind before tanveer comes to him he will follow the dupatta and the dupatta will lead him to zoya.
seeing Zoya in that state asad was really confused and afraid.Zoya sees also sees him asad triesvery hard and pulls her up.
coming up Zoya will faint. Asad will hold her and take her to the car. Tanveer was really upset seeing it. but enacting as if she's worried.
They will begin their way back to Bhopal. Zoya still in asad's arms.
When reach home Dilshad and Najma were happy seeing Zoya but worried as she's still fainted.
Asad takes her to her room and place her on bed and sits beside her after calling doctor.
Doctor says othing to worry she's fainted just because of shock.
Later Zoya regains her consiousness and sees asad infront of her sleeping sitting in a chair and catching hold her hand
As she feels thirsty she tries to goes to kitchen to get a glass of water and tries to remove her hand from asad's. But asad will get shouting Zoya. .
ZOYA: IAM FINE MR.KHAN (with a fake smile on her face)
ASAD: AAP JANTE HAIN MAINKITNA DAR GAYA THA SEEING U IN DAT SITUATION.LEKIN AAP WAHA PAR GIRI KAISI
ZOYA: WOH...WOHH.. HA WOH MAIN WAHA SITE SEEIG ELIYE GAYI THI AUR GALTI SE GIR GAYI THI
But asad felt something strange in her voice but didnt stress on it as she's till weak.He gives her a glass of water and tells her to take rest
ZOYA: MR.KHAN MUJHE AAP KUCH BAAT KANI HAIN
ASAD: ABH NAHI KAL SUBAH BAAT KARENGE . ABHI AAP ARAM KIJIYE
ZOYA: NAHIN MR.KHAN AAPKO MERI BAAT AHI AUR ISI WAQT SUNNA HAIN.MAIN ISS BAAT KO KEHNE MAINAUR DER KARKE PHIR SE APPKE DOOR NAHIN JANA CHATHI HOON.
Asad surprised and trying to understand wat exactly Zoya wanted to say.
ZOYA: I LOVE U MR. KHAN
I KNOW MR. KAHN AAP GALTI SE BHI CHOT NAHN PAHUNCHASAKTE GALTI MERI HI THI JO MAINE AAP PAR BHAROSA NAHIN KIYA..USS RAAT JO KUCH BHI HUA MAIN WOH SABBHOOL JANA CHAHTI HU AUR EK NAYI SHURWAD KARNA CHATI HU
Asad was very happy to listen wat ever she said...he was feeling lyk he was the most luckiest person in the world
ASAD: MIS...ZOYA TUMNE ABHI ABHI KYA KAHA OH SAB SACH HAIN MAIN SAPNA TOH NAHIN DEKH RAHA HOON
ZOYA: ALLAH MIYA WATS WRONG WID U MR.KHAN MEINE APNI DILL KE BAAT APKO BATAY AUR AAP POOCHRAHEHAIN KI KYA YEH SAPNA TOH NAHIN
ASAD: NAHIN WOH ACTUALLY...KYA AAP MUJHSE NIKAH KARENGE
Zoya was shocked and blushed at his sudden proposal
ZOYA: OFCOURSE KAROONGI MR.KHAN
MAIN ABHI PHOPHI KO BATAKE ATI HOON
ASAD: ZOYA ABHI TOH 3 BAJ RAH HAIN. AUR AAJ SE RAMZAN SHURU HOTI HAIN TOH DO TEEN GHANTON MEIN SAB JAG JAYENGI. TAB HUM SAB BATATE HAI
ZOYA: MR. KHAN MUJHE AAP SE WOH TEEN SHABDH SUN NA HAIN JO AAPNE AJMER MAIN MUJHSE KAHA
ASAD: KYA...HAAN THIK HAIN WOH ZOYA...ABHI KEHAN HAIN KYA
ZOYA: OFFO MR.KHAN AAPSE UMMED RAKHAN HI BEKAR HAI
Zoya got angry and about to leave the room and
ASAD: I LOVE U ZOYA. MAIN TUMSE MOHABHAT KARTA HOON AUR AAJ MEIN TUMSE VADA KARTA HOON KI MEIN KABHI BHI TUMHE AKELA NAHIN CHODOONGA..AUR AAPKO ZINDAGI BAHR ISS AKDU AHMED KAHN KE SAAT GUJARNA PADEGA
Zoya smiles and turns back and runs towards him and give him a tight hug...

AAJ KELIYE ITNA HI HAIN
HOPE U GUYS LYK IT
MENTION COMMENTS
ITS MY FIRST STORY
GUD NI8

PART 1,2 - PG1
PART 3- PG 2
PART 4- PG 3
PART 5- PG 4
PART 6- PG 5
PART 7- PG 6
PART 8- PG 7
NOTE- PG 8
REMAINING PARTS CMG SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amaizing!! do continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing continue soon plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U pepole can even tell me how u want the next part of the story tobe and ill try to inculcate them
If i couldn't am sry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:
That night asad noticed zoya is happy but something is der that is trobling her.He couldnt see her lyk dat and asked her.
ASAD: ZOYA SAB THEEK TOH HAI NA. I HAVE BEEN NOTICING U THAT SOMETHING IS TROUBLING U. U WANT SHARE WID U BUT U R NOT SHARING IS EVERY THING OK
ZOYA: (little bit tensed ) JI MR.KHAN AAPNE THHEK SAMJHA LEKIN WOH BAAT MAIN AAPKO ABHI NAHIN BATA SAKTI HOON...BUT DONT WORRY AM FINE AUR MAIN AAPKO BAHUT JALD BATA DOONGA.(smiling whole heartedly as asad understood her)
ASAD: THEEK HAIN LEKIN AGAR AAPKO KISSI BHI CHEEZ KI ZAROORAT HO TOH MUJHE BATAYIYE
asad thinking: ISI KONSI CHEEZ HAI JO ZOYA MUJHSE SHARE NAHI KAR SAKTI...KAHI USNE UNKI CLIFF SE GIR NEKI BARE MAAIN JHOOT TOH NAHI BOLA

zoya thinking : MUJHE TANVEER KI SACHAYI SAB KE SAMNE LANAHI PADEGA...MUJE USKELIYE SABOOTH DHOONDNA PADEGA...EK BAAR SABOOT MERE HAATME AGAYI TOH MAIN MR.KHAN KO SAB KUCH BATA DOONGA..MAIN UNKE AAKHON MEIN OH GUILT DEKHRAHI HOON ...JO USNE KIYA HI NAHI USKE LIYE WOH APNE AAPKO DOSHI MAAN RAHE HAIN MEIN MERE MR.KHAN KO ISS HALAT MEIN NAHI DEKH SAKTI HOON MUJHE JALDI KUCH KARNA HAI
dekhte dekhte morning ho gayi
ZOYA: MR.KHAN SUBAH HO GAYI...CHALIYE SAB KO UTHATEH HAI (waking up asad who is sleeping in the chair and asad is acting as if he is in deep sleep)
ASAD: ZOYA AAP KABSE ITNI SUBAH UTHRAHE HAIN...
ZOYA: MR.KHAN MUJHE AAPSE BEHAS NAHIN KARNI HAI CHALIYE JALDHI HUM SAB KO BATATEH HAI KI HUM AAJ NIKHAH KARNE WALE HAIN
(blushing)
ASAD: AAJ???
ZOYA: JI MR.KHAN MAIN AAPSE EK PAL AUR DOOR NAHI REHSAKTHI HOON...MUJHE DAR HAI KI KAHI WOH PHIR SE...MERA MATLAB HAIN MEIN AAPKE SAATH HI REHNA CHAHTI HOON ...
ASAD:
(asad worried as zoya stopped something in between...he felt something is terribly bad and said)AAPKO KAY LAGTA HAI MEIN AAPSE DOOR REHSAKTAh HOON? HUM AAJ HI NIKHAH KARENGE...LEKIN PEHLE PRAYER KARENGE AAJ SE RAMZAN SHURU HOGI TOH PEHLE PRAYER KARENGE BAAD MEIN AAP BATADJIYE
ZOYA: MR.KHAN MEIN THODI NA KEHNE WALI HOON AAPKO BATA NA HAIN AKHIR AAPKI AMMI HAI
ASAD: TUMHE BATA HAI ZOYA MUJHE AMMI SE THEEK SE BAAT KI 1 MAHINA HO RAHA HAIN...NA AMMI NA NAJMA MUJHSE THEEK SE BAAT KARTE THE. EH EK MAHINA MERE ZINDAGI KI SAB SE KHATIN PAL THI
ZOYA:
(Controllin her tears and to console asad) WEN ZOYA FAROQUI IS HERE THEN WHY TO WOORY.MAIN AGAYI HOONA AB SAB KUCH THEEK HOGA.AAP JAKAR PUPHI SE BAAT TOH KIJIYE HAMARI...HAMARI NIKHAH KE BARE MEIN
ASAD: HA THEEK HAIN MEIN BAAT KARTA HOON LEKIN AAPKO MERI EK SHARAT MAANNA PADEGA
ZOYA: KONSA SHARAT MR.KHAN
ASAD: AAPKO MUJHE MR.KHAN NAHI ASAD KARKE BULANA HAI...AKHIR HAMARI NIKHAH HONE WALA HAI.NIKHAH KE BAAD AAP MUJHE THODI MR.KHAN KARKE BULATE HAI
ZOYA: ALLAH MIYA WATS WRONG WID U MR.KHAN...MUJHSE NAHI HOGA AAPKO ASAD KARKE PUKARNA...MEINNIKHAH KE BAAD BHI AAPKO MR.KHAN KARKE HI BULATI HOON
ASAD: THEEK MEIN AMMI SE BAAT NAHI KAROONGA
ZOYA: MR.KHAN...
ASAD: PHIR SE...MERA SHARAT MANO MEIN AMMI BAAT KARAT HOON
ZOYA: MEIN GUARANTEE NAHI DESAKTI HOON PAR I WILL TRY..THEKE AB CHALIYE
ASAD: THEEK HAI
NAJMA KNOCKS THE DOOR..AT THAT MOMENT ZOYA WILL JUMP ON BED AND ACTS AS IF SHE'S SLEEPING.ASAD SMILED . NAJMA ENTERS THE ROOM AND ASKS ASAD HOW ZOYA IS FEELING NOW ..HE SAYS SHE'S GOOD AND SHE WOKE IN THE NIGHT ONCE .AS HE IS CONTINUING ZOYA WILL INTERUPT SAYING
ZOYA: HEY NAJMA GUD MORNING
NAJMA: ZOYA AAP THEEK TOH HAI NA

ZOYA: MEIN BILKUL THHEK HOON..AUR MR.KHAN BHI TOH MERE SAATH HAI
NAJMA SHOCKED LISTENING DAT N UNDESTOOD THAT THEY BOTH TOGETHR ONCE AGAIN AND VERY MUCH HAPPY FOR THAT
DILSHAD: ALLAH KI LAKH LAKH SHUKAR HAI KI TU THEEK HO(Entering the room )
ZOYA: PUPHI AAP KAISE HAI
DILSHAD : MEIN BILKUL THEEK HOON TUM KAISI HO
ZOYA: MEIN TOH DOUBLE THEEK HOON PUPHI (seeing to asad and smiling...dilshad understood...tanveer enters the room)
TANVEER: ZOYA AAP KAISE HAI AB...MEIN BAHUT DAR GAYI THI AAPKO JAMY NE US SITUATION LEKAR AYA (SHOWING A FAKE CONCERN ON HER FACE)
ZOYA: MAIN BILKUL THEEK HOON MUJHE KYA HOGI...CHAHE KITNE KOSHISHE KOI KARE LEKIN MUJHE KUCH NAHI HOSAKTA KYUN KI MERE PAAS DONIYA KI SABSI TAKATVAR CHEEZ HAI MERE PAAS AUR WOH HAI MOHABBAT
DILSHAD: CHALO THEEK HAI AB CHALTE HAI PRAYAR KARTE HAI AAJ RAMZAN KI PEHLE DIN HAI NA (AS SHE'S TRYING TO CHANGE THE TOPIC)
ASAD: JI AMMI
AFTER PRAYER ASAD GOES TO DILSHAD'S ROOM AND ZOYA STANDS OUT PEEPING INTO THE ROOM.ASAD ASKS HER AMMI TO FORGIVE HIM AND TALK TO HIM...AS DILSHAD ALREDY UNDERSTOOD THAT ZOYA HAD FORGIVEN HIM SHE TOO FORGIVES HIM AND HUGS HIM AFTER A MONTH...SHE IS ALSO VERY HAPPY AS IT IS DIFFICULT FOR HER TOO TO BEHAVE WID ASDA LIKE THAT.
ASAD: AMMI MUJHE APPSE EK AUR BAAT KARNI HAI
DILSHAD: BOLO ASAD...WAISE MUJHE PATA HAI KI TUM KAYA KEHAN CHATEH HO YAHI KI TUM AUR ZOYA PHIR SE EK SAATH HAI
ASAD WAS HAPPY AS HIS UNDERSTANDING AMMI IS BACK TO HIM
ASAD: JI AMMI AUR HUM CHATEH HAI KI HUM AAJ HI NIKHAH KARENGE
DILSHAD: YEH TOH BAHUT ACHI BAAT HAI...AB TUMHARI BAAT KHATAM HO GAYI TO ZOYA TUM ANDAR ASAKTI HO
ZOYA RUNS TOWARDS DILSHAD AND HUGS HER..DILSHAD IS VERY HAPPY AS HER LOVELY ZOYA IS BACK INTO THEIR LIVE AND MADE ASAD TO SMILE AFTER A MONTH
DILSHAD: MEIN NIKHAH KI TAYYARIYA KARTA HOON..NAJMA...
DILSHAD THINKS BEFORE TANVEER GET TO KNW ABOUT NIKHAH SHE MUST SEND HER OUT FOR SOMETIME TILL NIKHAH IS COMPLETED..AND TELLS TANVEER TO GO TO DARGAH AS SHE ARRANGED PRAYERS FOR ZOYA'S COME BACK.SINCE SHE HAD SOME WORK AT HOME SHE ASKS TANVEE TO GO TANVEER OBEYS AND GO TO DARGAH...THE DARGAH IS 11 KM AWAY FROM BHOPAL CITY
DILSHAD TO ZOYA AND ASAD: MAULA SAB KEHRAHE HAI KI SADE 3 BAJE KOH WOH AYENGE KYUNKI SHAM KO UNHE AUR BHI KAAM HAI...TOH HUM TABHI AAP DONO KI NIKHAH KARENGE
ASAD AND ZOYA ARE HAPPY LISTENING TO IT AS THEIR WISH IS FULFILLING SO SOON...
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Edited by Zosad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab part
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i want more comments as i want to knw how the story is so all of u pls do comment and let me knw if u want any changes or is it gud or bad plss😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3:
ITS WAS ABOT 10'CLOCK TANVEER LEFT FOR DARGAH...AT 2:30 ASAD GOT A MSG SEEING THE MSG ASAD RAN OUT OF THE HOUSE AND WENT IN CAR.

AFTER A MONTH:
ASAD SITTING IN HIS ROOM AS USUAL WORKING IN HIS LAPTOP BUT COULDNT CONCENTRATE ON HIS WORK .
MEAN WHILE NAJMA ENTERS THE ROOM AND CALLS ASAD FOR DINNER.HE SAID DAT HE WASNT FELLING HUNGRY.
NAJMA: BHAIJAAN AAP PHIKAR MAT KIJIYE ZOYA I MEAN BHABHI JALDI AJAYENGI
ASAD: HA..MEIN UNKE BARE MEIN NAHI SOCH RAHA HOON (HIDING HIS ACTUAL FEELINGS) 😒
NAJMA: THHEK HAI PHIR AAP JALDHI APNI KAAM KHATAM KIJIYE MEIN AUR AMMI AAP KA INTJAR KARTE HAI
ASAD:THEEK HAI BAS 10-15 MIN MEIN AJAVUNGA
NAJMA: OK BHAIJAAN
WHEN NAJMA LEAVES THE ROOM ASAD IMMEDIATELY TAKE HIS PHONE AND CALLS ZOYA.ZOYA PICKS THE PHONE N SAYS
ZOYA:MR.KH...ASAD AAP ITNI SUBAH SUBAH MUJHE CL KARKE KYUN JAGATEH HAI
ASAD: AAP BHI TOH MUJHE ROJ SADE CHAR BAJE CAL KARTE AUR JAB MEIN YEH SAVAL AAPSE POOCHA TOH AAP KYA KEHTE HAI 'MUJHE TOH AB SONE KA WAQT HOGAYA TOH MAINE SOCHA AAPKO GUD MRG KEHDO AUR AAP MUJHE GUD NI8' TOH JAB MEIN CL KARO TOH AAPKI NEIND KHARAB HO GAYI
ZOYA: MAIN TOH MAZAK KARI THI MAIN TOH TAB SE AAP KA PHONE KA INTZAAR KAR RAHI HOON...WAISE AAP KA DIN KAISI THI AAJ😉
ASAD: BAHUT ACHI THI
(NOT LETTING ZOYA TO KNW DAT HE'S MISSING HER.BUT ZOYA UNDERSTOOD IT)
ZOYA: HMMM..MEIN EK DO HAFTON MEIN AJAVUNGI 😉
ASAD: EK DO HAFTA..ABHI DO DONKELIYE MEIN AAPKO KITNA MISS KAR RAHA HOON😔
ZOYA: MEIN TOH MAZAK KAR RAHI HOON.I JUST WANTED TO LISTEN FROM U THAT U MISS ME JO AAP MUJHSE CHUPARAHETHE😆
ASAD: AAP BHI NA ZOYA...KITNIBACHPANA HARKHAT KARTE HAI...AAPKI API KAISI HAI AB...MUJHE ABHI BHI TICKETS NAHI MIL RAHA HAI.TOH MEIN KAL PHIR SE TRY KAROONGA
ZOYA: AAPI BILKUL THEEK HAIN AB...ISILIYE MAIN KAL SHAAM KI FLIGHT KA TICKETS BOOK KARDIYA.MEIN PARSAU SHAAM KO BHOPAL AJAVUNGI..APKO YAHA ANEKI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI.YEHI BAAT AAPKO BATANEKELIYE MEIN AAPKI PHONE KA INTZAAR KAR RAHI HOON 😊

ASAD: YEH TOH BAHUT ACHI BAAT HAI KI AAPKI API BILKUL THEK HAI...AND AM VERY HAPPY KI AAP JALDI WAPAS A RAHI HAI...THEEKE PHIR MEIN AAPSE KA SUBAH BAAT KARUNGA ALLAH HAFIZ 😊
ZOYA: JI..ALLAH HAFIZ
ZOYA IS ABOUT TO CUT THE CAL ASAD SAID
ASAD: ZOYA!!!!!
ZOYA: JI KYA HUA ASAD
ASAD: WOH AAP SE KUCH KEHNA BHOOL GAYA
ZOYA: KYA
ASAD: I LOVE U
ZOYA: AAP BHI NA MR.KHAN..I LOVE U TOOO
BOTH ARE BLUSHING...SAYING SO ZOYA HAD CUT THE CAL.ASAD IS VERY HAPPY THAT ZOYA IS COMING BACK.HE WENT TO DINIG ROOM AND SAID TO DILSHAD AND NAJMA HAD HIS DINNER AND CAME BACK TO HIS ROOM.
ASAD NOW WAS REALLY WORRIED AS SHE'S RETURING ALONE ..WHILE GNG SHE WENT WITH SOMEONE WHOM ASAD KNOWS WELL..BUT THEY HAD THEIR OWN PLANS..SO ZOYA HAS TO COME ALONE...HE WAS REALLY TENSED AND THINKING WAT HAPPEND A MONTH BACK...

SRY FOR MY GRAMATICAL MISTAKES...HOWZ D PART PLS DO COMMENT BASED ON THOSE COMMENTS ILL START TH NEXT PART.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwwe, super cute, n a cliffy, please continue soon before i die in anticipation
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nice conceptt
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