FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Oh wow..wat an intense, romantic update...loved it so much. Can't believe hamza is such a good fellow and willing to help zoya despite hating asad.

Congrats for the new thread.👏

Update the next part soon.

Thanks.

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awww I absolutely LOVED this update, it was amazing, I loved how Asad was jealous and how Hamzah was giving Zoya tips on how to get Asad to express his feelings, plus the little stunt with Hamzah catching Zoya, that was good too. Don't get me started about the kiss, that was amazing and I loved how Asad is realising that he is falling for her!

I would love to see more intense scenes like that between Asad and Zoya, please update soon, and I think Karan Wahi would be good for Hamzah's character

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snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

ohhh girl you just kill me with your every update I am just jealous of zoya now man asad is hot property and for hamzah's face I guess samrat of miley jub hum tum would be suitable or viren aka karan tacker he is handsome and suits as a fflirty personality

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Julie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Awesome update. Congo on the new thread.

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teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Holy canolis. I'm sorry I don't comment often, I'm on vacation in Paki and the wifi sucks. Watching the show and reading updates is a hassle enough but today I just HAD to comment. Stop being so brilliant and captivating me. I can't live with the suspense of the next update! The jealousy, intensity and perfection of it all is so perfecto ah! And congrats for the second thread!

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Zara_92

lol i love surprising people 😆
yess dont worry Hamzah is a good guy and he will get good stuff 😛

thankyou so much😊

Yayyy I love you🤗. So Najma and Hamza it is?

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nimi.fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

read all the parts in one goo ...u write soo well...plzzz cont soon

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Awesome update!!!! Absolutely loved it.

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Pori

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

CONGRATULATIONS on the new thread sweety

wow, this was unexpected! Hamzah understanding Asad's feeling and helping zoya out!! NICEE!!!

and omg! the raw kiss almost made me blush!! I could so picture the entire update.. u're a fab writer

As for a suggestion of face for Hamzah, Karan Wahi. Hamzah's friendly nature and attitude goes with Karan Wahi!

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Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Zara_92

Oh God ! M so sooorrryyy .. Actually I used to pm u for rishbala so I always forget ur thr for asya too 😛

I'll pakka rmr next time :D

no problm.. Dear.. I told u i dnt watch dis serial.. Bt luv ur writn nd dats d sole reason m hookd to ur story... Bye eagerly waitn 4next part