FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Dont kill me for commenting after 14 pages 🤣 its funny honestly but we both the know the reason behind it !

Yes you actually made her sit next to Hamzah bichara Asad jaal bhun ke bharta baan gaya 😆

I am just loving Hamzah more are more I might end up marrying him 😆 he gave the ladki advice !!

Oh God she does have trance moments about him being shirtless Oh lala la ☺️

Ahh so we have a party coming up in the evening nice !! I am expecting another hot update !

SO bang she trips he cant hold and his ego is hurt goes in her room her clothes help and bang he loses it... HOT scene love it !! All the books we read help totally 😆

So I am looking forward to the next update and ofcourse a HOT one where they go to the site (please make Zoya have some say in teh deal as well WOMAN POWER lol)

Love youu ❤️

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I love your story!! Continue soon x

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Congrats dear for second thread of FF 👏

update was superb as usual 😊

like Hamzaah, i like the way u portrayed his character & jealous Asad omg!!!!!! he kissed Zoya finally & with to much passion

looking forward for next update...

Thank u so much for pm 😊

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proshomi

@proshomi

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Amazzzing update as usual...Hayeee how I wish ur ff was a story book so I didnt have to wait sooo desperately for the next chapter...Please update sooon ur immensely skilled writing skills make it impossible to wait,,Please jaldi update karo

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Thats the way i like Asad

all angry and jealous

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

btw forgot something ...

Congo on new thread...😊

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@shahala123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Aawww... OMG... wat a kiss...,,.., loved it... your writings make me feel thaat i am watching it... wooowww... will u pm me frm next update onwards??

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

a veryyy BIG thankYou to everyone !!! Thanks a zillion for ur comments guys ... 🤗

And a special THANKYOU to my 2 most wonderful If-ians Sadia and Nattyyy ❤️ thanks a lot guys for reading and giving me ur long comments . 😃

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Zara_92

And a special THANKYOU to my 2 most wonderful If-ians Sadia and Nattyyy ❤️ thanks a lot guys for reading and giving me ur long comments . 😃

You bribe us and blackmail us so shutup 😆 we want to live longer if dont write long comments you will kill us !!

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago