FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW! cant believe ive already got a thread #2 ... a big

to all u guys who have been a religious reader of my FF ... really i wouldnt have written it widout ur support and constant want for new updates 😆 ...thanks a lot everyone for ur motivation... and i really hope i live through it and u guys stick to this till the end 😃🤗

LINK TO THREAD 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3623310/ff-torn-by-hidden-desires-link-to-thread-2

chapter 14 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87728863�

chapter 15 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3664342/ff-torn-by-hidden-desires-2-ch16-pg29-20th-july?pn=17�

chapter 16 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3664342/ff-torn-by-hidden-desires-2-ch16-pg29-20th-july?pn=29�

Edited by Zara_92 - 12 years ago

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Zoya looked at Asad , his face fuming wid anger every growing second...

Then she looked at Hamzah who was flashing his charming grin .. This guy was always sweet to her and mind u never took advantage of her .. Infact surprisingly he even understood Zoya when she refused him..and was more than happy to just be friends ... He deserved a bit of appreciation..

'Sure' came Zoya's smiling reply ..

She was too scared to even look at Asad for now ... 'Just 2hrs Zoya' she calmed herself down..

'Great , come on ! M sure u would like the window side ' Hamzah chuckled

'No doubt' Zoya replied and sat near the window as Hamzah took a seat next to her ...

On the other hand , Asad's anger was growing limitless ..his face looked pale as if someone sucked all his blood .. How could Zoya do that to him? How could she sit wid hamzah when she was supposed to sit wid him? Okay fine not like he asked her or something but wasn't it understood that she was supposed to sit wid him and so NOT wid Hamzah .. Given a last wish , Asad could just kill Hamzah brutally right now ..
He had no idea , from where he suddenly got his jealous streaks , but his jealousy was outpowering all his emotions right now ..

'So what's going on btw u and Asad ?' Hamzah questioned Zoya

'He's my boss .. And apart I live in his house and love his mother and sister' Zoya replies smirking

'And what about him?'

'What about him?'

'Oh come on Zoya ..u think m blind ?' Hamzah sighs

'M sure ur not blind Hamzah' she let's out a small laugh

'No outsmarting me , u clever girl ! Now spill the beans'

Zoya stretches her arms a bit , trying to hide the flush that crossed her face ..

'Ahaan ! So ur blushing .. And then u say 'ohh he's my boss' ' Hamzah mimicked Zoya ...earning a spat from her ..

'Really ! Thrs nothing ' Zoya replies calmly..

'Cool then I'll ask Asad' Hamzah smirks

Zoya's jaw drops ...

'Hey no ! Wait ..okay okay I surrender '

Hamzah gives a victory smile 'so now open tht mouth of urs'

'I like him' Zoya replies shyly

'am I seeing 'THE Miss Zoya farooqui ' turning all shy?' Hamzah elbows her

'I sooo knew something was on between u both ! But I was still trying my luck ! ...u see girls like u are very hard to find these days'

'Thanks for the compliment' Zoya smiled

'so where's the problem ? I hope its not me ' Hamzah raised his brow

'Oh no no ! It aint u ...anymore ' Zoya grins

'Its just ... His walls go up ..creating a shield btw us whenever we get too close .. Umm I understand him though' Zoya replies

'Well ! I won't dwell into the personal stuff .. But trust me that man has some deep feelings for u'

'How can u be so sure ?'

'Really Zoe ? ...oh u mind me calling u zoe?'

'Nope not at all .. My friends back in NY used to call me Zoe .. Ahhh been months I heard that .. So tell me how are u so sure ?'

'Don't doubt my man instincts .. ' Hamzah chuckles

'Look I can read his face .. The 1st time when I asked u out ..I sensed it that very time .. His face changed like fire .. And even today . For a second I was scared he might just knock me off '

Zoya laughed out loud seeing hamzah's scared face..

'Yesss he's aggressive at times' She responded

'Aahhh!! Not bad ... U know that side too?' Hamzah teased Zoya

'Shutup Hamzah !!!' She glared at him

'Sorrry ! But the point is Zoe .. He has pent up feelings for u .. And all u need to do is get those buried feelings out of him'

'What do u think m not trying ?' Zoya replied

'Maybe that try isn't enough ! Look Zoe I know Asad doesn't really like me and the feelings are mutual .. He gets u whereas I'm here giving u advices on how to get him' Hamzah rolls his eyes

And Zoya laughs again

'Asad is a very self protected man .. I can see right through him.. He's deep and intense .. Trying a little won't let u succeed too soon... U have to be intense wid him.. Don't get me wrong by intense I mean ..u really need to push him far so that he comes right back at u'

'Are u gettin me ?' Hamzah asks

Zoya thinks for a while ! And then nods ..

'Thanks Hamzah .. I finally earned a nice good looking friend who has a lot of money' Zoya replied

'Ouch that hurt ! But thanks for the Compliment ... ' Hamzah smiled shyly

'But that doesn't mean I like Asad or anything.. I still hate him , he has u going all insane over him' Hamzah mocks

'Awww don't worry , we'l find u a girl who goes all insane over u too' Zoya pats his arm ..

And they both share a little laugh

Behind them , is sitting a totally dead over head ... Fuming Asad .. Hearing their slow laugh after every few minutes made all the muscles in his body clench .. If the airhostess didn't make the announcement of landing .. He would have got up and punched Hamzah right in the face .. Thrs no way he's getting Zoya ...

'Wow ! I didn't even realize we landed' Zoya exclaimed

'Happens when ur wid Hamzah Haayat' hamzah smirks

'Why not ! Get over urself' zoya replied

Once the plane landed .. They all made their exit widout any words being exchanged ..

The moment they were out .. Zoya spotted a man wid a board in his hand 'Mr Asad A Khan and Mr Hamzah Haayat'

'There' she points to the man and leads the way ..

They talk to the driver ! And the driver along wid another driver takes their luggage to their cars ...

And once again thr is a problem of 2 cars .. And where Zoya should sit .. She curses herself for requesting 2 cars ..

'I have to discuss things wid Bilawal so he's coming wid me ' Hamzah announces

And winks at Zoya who sighs in relief ..

Asad and Zoya take the backseat .. Still no words exchanged .. And Zoya knew exactly why !

'We'l rest for an hour and then leave for the site' Zoya breaks the silence

Asad nods and looks away ..

Zoya frowns .. But can't help noticing how Handsome Asad looked .. 'Allah ! Why did u make such a handsome man?' She wondered .. His light stubble across his perfect jawline was making Zoya drool over him.. Especially , whenever he was dressed in a suit .. It was a pure treat to the eyes to watch him.. Ofcourse when he's shirtless , he's even more delicious ..
And suddenly zoya caught hold of her sinful thoughts and looked out ..

In a few minutes ... The driver pulled the car outside the hotel .. Soon Hamzah's car joined them.. And all four walk into the lobby of Star Inn..

'The hotel is beautiful' Zoya looks at Asad ..

'Thanks' Asad replies dryly ..

For now he just wants to be in his room ... He can't handle a second seeing hamzah wid Zoya anymore .. His senses slowly losing out on him..

'Look whose here ! Asad' Mr sharma shook hands wid Asad ..

'Mr Sharma ! How have u been ? The hotel looks great' Asad replies

'All thanks to you Asad ! And just look .. Ur here today and our hotel is completing 3 full years ' Mr Sharma smiles widely

'Wow ! Congratulations' Asad and others congratulate him..

'I've kept a party in the evening .. And u all are cordially invited ..' Mr Sharma spoke

'Ofcourse we all shall be there' Asad replies ..

'Perfect ! I shall see u then' Mr Sharma shake hands wid Asad , Hamzah and Bilawal and leaves ..

Zoya takes the keys from the receptionist and hands them each ..

They take the elevator .. and reach their floor .. All of their rooms are next to and opposite to each other ..

'See u in an hour' Zoya nods at all of them ..

Once bilawal enters the room.. Zoya walks past asad and hamzah to her room door .. But trips over the carpet .. And just before Asad could catch her , Hamzah catches her in his arms .. Holding her tightly against him..
And that's when Asad loses it .. His eyes travel to Hamzah's hands right over Zoya's waist .. He should be the one holding her .. It didn't take Long before Asad banged the door of his room behind them..

'Thankss ! I owe u one' Zoya smiles ..

'No issues' Hamzah replies and goes to his room..

Zoya showers and changes into a fitted tshirt and pyjamas .. Ready to take a quick nap before the start of the loaded evening .. Site seeing plus the sudden party ..

Just when she's about to crash on the bed .. Thrs a knock at her door ..

'Allah Miyan ! Why now ????' She whines and literally drags herself to the door ..

The moment she opens it .. Her jaw drops seeing Asad standing there .. In his armani tracks and black tshirt .. Her mouth feels dry as her gaze meets his .. And She senses something terribly wrong ..

'Come in Mr Khan'

Asad walks in her room .. And Zoya closes the door behind him.. still leaning next to the door .. She notices Asad's penetrating stare all over her body .. As though he's checking her out ..

Asad had never seen her in pyjamas and that body hugging tshirt .. She clearly never wore them in his house .. It was a treat to watch her in those clothes .. Her hair still damp from shower ... And the room filled wid her vanilla fragrance ..

'Mr Khan are u alright ?' Zoya asked biting her lip nervously ..

and that's exactly what she shouldn't have done ...

Even before she could look up to Asad for an answer .. Zoya found herself jailed in his arms .. Right against the door .. His face just an inch away from her own .. She could smell his dark musk scent .. And her knees were wriggling now .. Her heart thumping out of her chest ..

'Why can't u stay away from Hamzah?' Asad whispered right against her lips .. His tone deep and aggressive ..

'Mr Khan.. ' Zoya found herself at a loss of words .. Asad's stare was making her weak .. Choking the hell out of her ..

And within seconds .. She found his body brushing against her own ..her lips captivated by his .. Into an intense , hungry claiming kiss .. Asad was kissing her .. His mouth claiming every part of her lips .. It wasn't a sweet , tender kiss .. Not even close to it ... He kissed her roughly yet intensely .. In a way she's never been kissed before ... His hands cupping her waist, pulling her body as close as possible to his .. For a second Zoya was ready to push him away .. But that's not something she wanted .. She wanted to touch every part of him.. And her hands automatically entwines in his hair .. Asad invaded her mouth wid his tongue .. Sucking on her lower lip.. 'This man can bloody kiss' Zoya's mind screamed .. As she bit his lower lip .. Earning a groan from Asad .. She tip toed to reach his mouth perfectly ..inprocess her tshirt sliding up a bit .. As Asad's hands came in contact wid her little exposed flesh .. Her body shuddered , hadn't Asad been holding her she would have fallen right there .. But he didn't stop .. He couldn't stop anymore ... She was his .. She belonged him.. And Asad knew he was falling for this stubborn ..delicious woman..

After what seemed like a lifetime .. Asad broke the kiss .. Both of them panting .. Breathlessly .. Asad noticed Zoya's swollen lips .. And all he did was feel satisfied ... He marked her .. She was his from now .. Rest can go to hell .. Asad brushed his thumb over her slightly parted lips .. He needed some air to breathe in for now .. Coz if he inhaled her vanilla scent some more , it would be impossible for him to control ..
Zoya could see raw love in Asad's eyes but thought that she was hallucinating .. No way he could love her .. Or maybe he did .. Right now she just wanted to dance in the rain for being kissed like that ..it was perhaps the best kiss of her life ..
They both stood in the same position for some time .. Then finally Asad spoke ' see u in an hour ' and kissed the corner of her lips ..
Zoya nodded .. Trying to hide the crimson shade of her cheeks .. As Asad exited her door ..

Zoya immediately ran and stood infront of the mirror .. Running her index finger over her lips she admired her swollen red lips in the mirror ..
Her pupils dilating to the thought of Asad kissing her again and again .. And again..

Suddenly, Zoya wasnt Tired anymore .. Infact she could swear on the fact that sleep wouldn't even dare to touch her for days now !

meanwhile Asad sat on the couch ...his eyes constantly flashing Zoya's images after that heart throbbing kiss ... and finally he let out a sigh ..."wow ! i never thought something i considered so wrong would feel so damn right"

p.s - since u all wanted a face for Hamzah's character... im open or suggestions .. please suggest a nice suitable face for his character 😛

Edited by Zara_92 - 12 years ago

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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Zaraa🤗😳

Congratulations for a second thread 😛🤗

the second last update was amazing...Najma's past...I soo wanna knw now wat happened wid her n how is Asad responsible for her condition

n also the bedroom scene was amazing...wen he saw her standing in front of him, n then the kiss on her wounds☺️ "Phir Mohabbat" was an amazing choice of song❤️

I loved these lines...he needs her badly😳

Her hands were still entangled in his hair .. And he felt protected .. As if finally someone was there for him.. Her one simple touch of affection was enough for Asad to keep him energized for the day ..

n this update was just superrr amzinggg!!!😛 Awesomeee!!!

though I didn't like Zoya sitting wid Hamzah...but their conversation was cute😳

I wish Asad caught her wen she tripped 😔😳

but anyway...wat happened after that was the Best-Est Awesome-Est of all☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

OMG the Kiss☺️☺️☺️

I was blushing throughout, while reading that part...u hav described it soo soo beautifully that I cud see the scene playing infront of my eyes😛☺️ Hawwwt, passionate, intense kiss☺️

The swollen Lips part was OMG just sooo☺️☺️☺️😆 he marked her she was hs n she wanted to dance in d rain😳

You've really beautifully described each n every expression sooo soo well Zara😛

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n this last line from Asad makes me feel that he is finally realiing n accepting his feelings 😛

"wow ! i never thought something i considered so wrong would feel so damn right"

n wohooo there's gonna b a party

I am dying to knw wat Zoya wears for the party😛😳😆

n I hope to see a romantic dance between AsYa😳 n sumthin more too☺️

btw...many ppl want KW as Hamzah...so my vote also goes to him, I anyway dun like a 3rd person in any love story, so I dun mind anyone as Hamzah😆

Dying to read the next update...m sure its gonna b suppa hawwwtt ☺️

Since u gave us an amazing kiss scene, this is from me, to u😳

This is a long comment coz I feel really sorry for not unreserving my previous comments 😔, but I promise I wil again b regular like before!!😃

Fantastic Update

Love You!!!❤️🤗

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Razia (i am still sleeping) 😆

Unrazia

First Congrats Zara for the second threat i am proud of you my [I] BACHA! *pranam Emoticon from wutty* 😆 😆 you totally deserve as much as likes and comments as you can because of all the hardwork you for givis us the updates. 🤗 love you.

About the update:

WHOA! What an Update Sir Jee. 👏 I LAOUVED the update as usual. Hamza's is such a sweetiepie He was being so friendly to Zoya and i guess his friendly talk in the plane really helped Zoya as well and Asad would have never realised his feelings if it wasn't for Hamzah. Gotta love the guy. 😆

Coming to the kiss...

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That was HAWWWT! ☺️ You are an amazing writer you seriously bring feelings to each scene with your words. I loved the whole update. I wonder what will happen next now will they be feeling awkward or something? Update soon.

About Hamzah's face well i always imagined him like a "Gora" actor. 🤣

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

unres

Amazing update yet again...Looking forward for the party sequence now :)

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

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Nai

@zoas91

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

they kissed and they like it! this was so good considering humzah being a good guy and asad being his jittery ,insecure self! the spontaneity of the kiss...swept me! loved the update!! as for humzah... i would love karan wahi or karan kundra 😃...i dunno why i have an obsession with karan's 😛

Edited by zoas91 - 12 years ago

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aish-au

@aish-au

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

omg it was awesome plz update soon

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CutiepieHarshad

@CutiepieHarshad

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

congrats for 2nd thread

awesome part

plz cont soon

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

I loved the chapter. Asad and his jealous behavior. I am sure Hamzah would play cupid between the two. And for Hamzah I don't know why but from the beginning I imagined his as Barun Sobti. I think he suits for this role... The kiss was just so umm.. Romantic, passionate,rough and intense.. Wow.. Loved it. And, congrats for the 2nd thread.. I hope it has more threads and I love this story like hell.

Do continue asap.

Dee

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