FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July

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starsinmyeyes

@starsinmyeyes

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Aamir is such a..😡...Hook up najma with hamzah please..really loved the update

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

WOW!!! that dirty old man needs to go to a brothel if he wants a girl so badly, dirty perv!!!! And that Aamir 😡 what a disgusting, horrible bas***d, I can't believe poor Najma had to go through that 😭

I'm glad that Asad let it all out to Zoya and that she found her way of soothing him and it worked 😊 I wonder where there soothing, passionate kiss will take them 😉

Amazing update, please update soon

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suruchi rajpal

@luvushivin1

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

omg...zara it was awsum..yaar...thanxx for the pm

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Awesome update!! very beautifully written..Be it Asad-Zoya's romantic moments or Najma's past...

I am looking forward to how Najma puts all of this behind..ofcourse with the help of Zoya and Asad :)

Thanks for the pm..

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

ThankYou so much all u people for ur wonderful comments ! Took me 2 days to write this update perfectly .. And not cliched 😊 glad u all liked it !! M relieved 😃

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Zara_92
ThankYou so much all u people for ur wonderful comments ! Took me 2 days to write this update perfectly .. And not cliched 😊 glad u all liked it !! M relieved 😃

absolutlety it is not cliched that what i admire trully

abut ur writing👏👏

res unresed on 3o