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Posted: 12 years ago


Tomorrow ! Pakkaaa Promise 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just came across ur ff..
read it in one go... it was superb...
specially when asad was jealous by hamza...
was really happy that fianally asya kissed.. ;)
n their romantic hot moment in asads room... woww..
u described that very well... :D

plz update soon..cant wait...
n if pms then plz add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

i just came across ur ff..
read it in one go... it was superb...
specially when asad was jealous by hamza...
was really happy that fianally asya kissed.. ;)
n their romantic hot moment in asads room... woww..
u described that very well... :D

plz update soon..cant wait...
n if pms then plz add me to ur pm list..



Awww thankYou sooo very much ya ! So sweet 😊
Will surely pm u ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
the character of humzah is what was needed in the serial rather then tan-witch! you play out the friendship between them perfectly! loved the chapter! thank you for the pm!
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Originally posted by: zoas91

the character of humzah is what was needed in the serial rather then tan-witch! you play out the friendship between them perfectly! loved the chapter! thank you for the pm!



ThankYou sooo much ya 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: torrie1234

You're just amazing!<div></div>


ThankYou !! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will be updating in a few minutes 😊
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The Party kick started ...

Asad looked Hotter than ever wearing a black suit .. And his hair perfectly gelled up and to match his rough sexy look was a light stubble across his face . Making him completely and utterly desirable ..

Zoya's mouth watered everytime she glanced up at him.. Well , Asad was the one to be blamed .. He had given her a hormonal rush back in the room and ever since then her whole body was throbbing with his need ..
And only Asad knew how difficult it was for him not to drag Zoya to a near by wall and kiss the life out of her . She looked smashingly beautiful tonight with a tinch of hotness , blame it on her navel exposed saree .. And her perfect curves plunging through the saree ..

On the other hand Hamzah , who was checking out eye candies . Looked mercilessly Attractive .. Clean shaven with a slight messy hairstyle that could suit only him.. He made a lot of heads turn .. Clad in a navy blue button down shirt and grey trousers .. He could surely get laid tonight wid anyone he wanted ..

'But except me ofcourse' Zoya grinned to herself ..


'Hello Beautiful' an unrecognized voice made Zoya turn around..

'Excuse me ?'

She came face to face wid a middle aged man .. Looking a little tipsy by his appearence she clearly knew , it was time to back off .

She started walking away .. When that Man came right infront of her ..

'Where do u think ur going miss ?' He cocked his brow at her ..

'I have some work' Zoya made sure she was polite enough ..

'The work can hold on .. But I cannot .. I've been noticing u ever since u walked in that door .. And trust me .. My body has been betraying me since then' he came closer to Zoya , she could smell drinks loathed over him..

Forcing a smile , she ran away from there ... Only to be collided against a male hard chest .. Her heartbeat instantly calmed as she inhaled a familiar fragrance ..

'Mr Khan' she breathed out ..

'What happened are u alright ?' Asad asked concerned ..

Zoya took a deep breath and spoke 'yeah yeah m good '

Asad still seemed unconvinced ..
But he let go ..

'I think I might be in Jail by tomorrow morning' Asad whispered across her ear ..

Zoya gave him a confused look..

'Well , I've seen a lot of people checking u out .. And trust me if they go 1 step ahead wid that , itl be end of them'

Zoya couldn't help but blush .. Somehow his possesive side was making her feel loved and satisfied ..

'Ahaan.. M certain I'll be joining u in the prison as well .. Not to forget , I already stepped on a woman's foot as she was drooling all over u ' Zoya gritted her teeth ..

Asad couldn't help but laugh .. A proper laugh .. It was probably the first time Zoya heard him laugh ...it relaxed all the muscles in her body and her heart overwhelming wid emotions ..

'Ya Allah ! Miss Farooqui what m I going to do with u?' He grinned

Turning Crimson , Zoya replied ' anything u like '

But before Asad could say anything further .. Hamzah disturbed them..

'Can I have the pleasure to dance with this gorgeous lady?' He let out his hand to Zoya ..

Zoya looked over at Asad .. And he clearly looked pissed .. His jaw clenching..nahh she didn't wanna play this game anymore with him..

'Why don't u ask that girl , in green' Zoya pointed to a beautiful model-type girl ..

'I saw her stealing glances at u a couple of times' Zoya smirked

'Wow ! Seems like I'm gettin lucky tonight .. Thanks Zoe' Hamzah winked at her and made her way to the girl..

'What was that?' Asad asked confused

'What was what?' Zoya replied

'That?' Asad pointed towards hamzah

'Oh ! Mr Khann ... Hamzah and I are just friends.. Infact he knws we both have a thing' Zoya blushed profusely while sayin that. .

'Don't tell me that . I know how desperately Hamzah wanted to get in bed wid u' Asad spoke wid a stone face ..

zoya grinned ' no Mr Khan .. He never wanted to . Trust me he's not bad .. And we are just friends'

'Yeah yeah whatever ' Asad spoke and Zoya pouted in a cute way ..

'Stop doing that . Otherwise u will be responsible for my next act' this time asad grinned ..

'Asad !! Come over here I need u to meet someone' Mr Sharma shouted from behind..

'I'll see u in a bit' Asad smiled at Zoya while she nodded ..

'Listen' Asad spoke

Zoya turned 'yes' and the next moment Asad pressed a soft teasing kiss on her neck ..

Zoya's eyes went wide in surprise as her face immediately turned crimson

'Stolen kisses are the best ones' Asad smirked and went away..

The party was almost coming to an end .. Great food , lovely people and everything elite was the shimmer of it ! There weren't many people left and Zoya was keen on going back to the room since she wanted to use the restroom pretty bad , but Asad was catching up wid an old acquaintance and he told Zoya to hold on for a few minutes so that they could go back together . Hamzah had already left with the model girl and so did Mr Bilawal alone ..

When Zoya couldn't control anymore she walked up to the restroom ..
While she was washing her hands , she heard a slow laugh .. Horrified she glanced up at the mirror .. And saw that same middle aged drunk man again..
Blood drained out of her face as she grew pale .. Zoya instantly turned around to leave .. But instead she was banged against the wall ..
Caging her , that man pressed his body against her. 'Don't play this hide n seek game wid me anymore love'

Zoya's legs began to tremble .. The more she felt that man against her , the more weak she went in her knees ..
'Help me ' Zoya instantly shouted

But within seconds that man covered her mouth wid his palm.. Tears started trickling down Zoya's eyes .. But she was a strong woman .. Taking up all her courage .. She bit that man's hand .. As he winced in pain . Zoya pushed him awayy and ran to the door .. But that man managed to blow her up and tore her blouse from the back in process .. Zoya froze .. Her legs , hands and her mind everything gave up the minute she felt her blouse tearing up ..
She was strangled by the cubicle , when she tried to kick him and in return got slapped so hard tht the corner of her mouth started bleeding ..

'Mr Khan' she shouted one last time before that man removed the side of her pallu ..

Zoya closed her eyes as she couldn't watch the end of her being .. She could feel nails digging into her arms .. Worse .. She could now smell alcohol .. Shutting her eyes tight , she waited for the most impure thing to happen to her ..
Zoya waited and waited .. But nothing happened ..
Whimpering she opened her eyes , only to find that man lying on the floor in a pool of blood .. And right besides him stood Asad ..kicking him endlessly ..

'Asad' Zoya choked ..

The moment Asad saw Zoya .. His whole world became still .. A stabbing pain ripped his heart out seeing Zoya in that condition.. Widout wasting a minute . Asad removed his coat and wrapped it around her .. Taking her to his room .. He instructed Mr Sharma to take care of the man ..

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Asad didn't a say a word to Zoya through their journey to his room..

Panic started to hit Zoya badly ..

'Mr Khan?' She whispered ..

But widout even looking at her . Asad demanded her to sit on the bed .. Waiting patiently Zoya did so .

Asad took a first aid box from the drawer and sat next to her on the bed .. Silently , he poured some antiseptic on the cotton and patted the side of Zoya's mouth as gently as he could ..
But the moment the antiseptic touched her arms . She winced in pain ..
Asad's features immediately softened .. But he still didn't say a word to Zoya ..
Once he was done taking care of her . He stood up from the bed and started to leave ...

Just then Zoya held his hand .. Asad jerked and turned around .. His heart trashing into pieces seeing tears straining down Zoya's cheeks ..

'Stay' she whispered..

Asad pulled his hand away from her ..

'I can't ' he spoke coldly ...

Zoya went numb .. 'What have I done?' She almost croaked..

'Go to sleep Zoya . '

'No Mr Khan . Tell me?' Zoya almost shouted back ..

She got up and pulled his arms . Now Asad was facing her ..

'What have I done to receive this silent treatment?'

'Go to sleep Zoya . Please . Just go ' Asad shut his eyes tightly.. His shell coming up again..

'MR KHAN TELL ME WHATS MY MISTAKE?' Zoya yelled unable to take his coldness anymore .

'I don't deserve u Zoya ' Asad yelled back ..

'Stay away from me . If u don't want to get hurt . I couldn't even take care of u . All this what happened to u, Its all becoz of me . Becoz I insisted u to stay back . Becoz I wasn't able to take care of u . Its my mistake ur hurt Zoya . '

Zoya saw a tear escaping his eyes ..
And that very moment she knew there was more to it ..

'Tell me about it Mr Khan . Don't keep it in u anymore ' Zoya cupped Asad's face .. Wiping that tear off ..

'What happened ?' She asked softly ..

Asad's face grew pale .. but it was now or never ..
He took a deep breath and started..

'It happened back last year ... One of my friends Aamir came to stay with us .. He was my school friend .. And I was really fond of him. Considering me being Asad ahmed khan there were only a few people whom I genuinely liked and Aamir was one of them .. Not to forget he was very charming and good looks ran in his genes . In school he was like my brother , he even saved me a no . Of times when people bullied me ' Asad gave a painful smile

'Yes people did bully me . I wasn't strong back then . But Aamir always helped me out . He got his job transfer here in Bhopal . And since he needed some time to check out appartments , I offered him to stay with us , ofcourse I could do that much for my brother friend right ? '

Zoya nodded .. Her heart withering with what was going go follow ..

'Ammi was really fond of him.. She treated him just like her own son .. Ammi never differentiated btw me and Aamir , and due to that I grew more fond of him.. It was like I found a brother once again.. We played pool , golf , used to chat up till late nights .. Where I was a complete introvert , he was an absolute extrovert . Many times he helped me with my business as well .. he was blessed wid Smart brains .. Everything was going smooth until that one day .. That one f**king day when all of our lives turned upside down' Asad shivered as he recalled those memories ..

Zoya wrapped her arms around him.. Trying to comfort him..

' That night I had some extra work at office so I got late .. When I got back home ..the lights were off .. Pretty obviously it was 2am .. I headed to my room.. When I heard some whispers .. I tried to hear them again .. And they were coming from Najma's room.. I was surprised . Najma never called her friends for nite stays.. I had clearly instructed her not too ..anger writhered over me , and widout a minute wasted I knocked her door .. And instantly the whispers vanished .. But Najma didn't open the door ..anxiety started taking over me .. I kept on knocking . When after good 10minutes , the door clutched open ..najma sneaked out of the door and asked me what happened .. But by now I had lost all my patience .. I jerked the door open and went inside .. '

'What did u see Asad ?' Zoya asked impatiently ..

'Aamir lying half naked on Najma's bed .. And the next moment I didn't know what got into me , I just punched him hard knocking him down on the floor . When Najma cried out .. And that's when reality hit me .. They both were together in the bed '

Zoya was shocked hearing that . Her stomach started clenching to what was going to follow ..

'Next day we all sat together . After a lot of enquiry .. Finally Najma and Aamir both confessed that they love each other .. Firstly I was really pissed off hearing that .. Probably as an over protective brother .. But then aamir was a great guy and I honestly felt that even I wouldn't have been able to find a guy like him for Najma .. So my brother side had to give in .. And I hugged both of them .. Ammi was more than Happy ... Aamir was loved by all of us .. And within a few days we had guests coming over our decorated house as we decided to get them engaged ... We all were really happy'
a painful sly smile came across Asad's lips ..

Zoya squeezed his arms .. Assuring she was with him through this..

' It was after the engagement ..that Najma completed her graduation.. She was excited to get married to Aamir .. I had never seen her more happy than this .. I was like a proud brother that my little tamatar was soo lucky and it was my friend in whom she found her happiness .. But before the marriage rituals began, Ammi was keen on visiting Ajmer to seek blessings .. Aamir couldn't accompany us as his company wasn't letting him off before he took his marriage leaves .. Najma was disheartened that he wouldn't come , but then Aamir assured her he was alright and we should go ahead .. We were only half way through when Najma began whining over the fact that she left her favourite suit back home , though I knew she was missing Aamir but then I had to give in her request I loved her too much . I got her into a cab and told her to come directly at the station we would wait .. '

Asad sighed .. His whole body shaking like a child .. 'Asad what happened?' Zoya asked concerned ..

'I got a call after half n hour .. Saying Najma was in the hospital'

Zoya was dumbstruck ..

'Did she meet with an accident ?'

'We thought the same until we reached the hospital .. The doctor came out and told us .. ' I'm sorry we couldn't save the child ' .. And that's when my world came crashing down right beneath my foot'

Silent tears escaped Zoya's eyes as she froze against the harsh reality ..

'Najma didn't meet wid any accident . She rolled down our stairs..When she woke up .. She was in shock . She wouldn't speak , wouldn't eat .. She didn't even cry .. I was outraged .. Especially because Aamir was no where to be seen .. It killed my soul seeing my sister like that . And Ammi too .. Ammi was broken .. I didn't know what to do , where to go .. So I finally decided to look for aamir '

asad took a deep breath..

' I ended up in his office . And much to my luck he was there .. I barged into his cabin .. Held his collar and asked him what happened .. And u knw what happened Zoya?' Asad asked hoarsely

'What?' Zoya almost choked

'Najma had found him in her own bed with another woman ... '

Zoya almost gaped ' what the hell ? That bloody sonofa...'

'I punched him and knocked him down hard .. Until he spit out the whole truth .. he gave his evil laugh and I realized he wasn't my frnd Aamir anymore ..he told me he was jealous of me and my success and the fact that back in school his gf left him becoz she liked me .. And trust me Zoya I didn't even know who his gf was .. Since then he decided to hate me .. And well he hated me like no end ..he told me how angry he was when he saw my success in Bhopal .. And he felt that I used to pity on him and let him stay at my place.. He even explained few incidents where he felt I mocked him down .. And that's when he decided to revenge upon my sister .. Becoz he knew nothin else would hurt me more than this . When Najma saw him in bed wid another girl , he told her this bitter truth and my brave sister hit him wid a vase .. And that's when he lost his cool and pushed her down the stairs..and ended a partt of his own life that was seeding in her'

Asad broke down saying the last part . His whole body shivering , his face sweating .. Zoya was too shocked herself to say anything , to do anything ..

'I called the police and handed him over to them.. And after a month I was told that he was killed in a police encounter'

'Najma couldn't believe he's dead . She still feels he'l come out for her and hurt her and us ..' Asad completed and broke into tears ..

Zoya instantly wiped her own tears and hugged him .. Tightly .. Soothingly .. She couldn't even process the whole story .. It was something she never imagined herself to go through .. And Najma tolerated it all ..
Asad's body convulsed as though he was going through some seizure .. A lump formed in Zoya's throat .. For the first time she felt paralysed .. She couldn't do enough to soothe someone ..

'I promised Najma to protect her from the world Zoya . I promised her candies , stars , love , laugh and I ended up giving her only wrath , hurt , anger and never ending pain.. Its becoz of me my sister is suffering .. I couldn't take care of her Zoya . M the worst brother in this world' Asad cried endlessly in Zoya's arms ..
While she continued to caress his back .

Even after minutes .. Asad didn't stop crying , it was after months he poured out his pain infront of someone . It was so thoroughly built up in him , that now his body was reacting fiercely to it .. Zoya felt helpless .. When she finally decided to do something to atleast make him stop crying .. To ease him a little .. She wanted him normal to talk further ..
Zoya broke the hug , as she saw Asad's bloodshot eyes , an ache ran over her whole body . Widout wasting a minute . Zoya cupped Asad's cheeks and placed her lips over his ..into a soft gentle loving kiss ..Asad's lips quivered for a second before his heart found solace in Zoya's compassionate kiss . She could taste his tears .. Her own tears as she continued to kiss him .. Softly and delicately she calmed him down wid her warm kiss .. After a few seconds zoya felt Asad pacifying .. But they didn't stop kissing .. Both Asad and Zoya drenched their heart and soul in that kiss not wanting to leave each other and face the bitter reality.




P.s - Well thats about Najma's past ...i hope u people like it ...and yes KARAN WAHI is the face for Hamzah 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey!! that was a great update..
I really feel bad for zoya, but then najma's story was so heart wrenching..💔
I never thought najma had gone through so much..
hope zoya can help both asad and najma in this matter..
continue soon.. thanks for the pm..😊
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Awww... poor najma and asad.. heart wrenching story. ...hope she can come out her past.. you wrote it beautifully... thanks for pm
Edited by aman93 - 12 years ago

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