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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

hey tis is superb...totally amazimg...luv it...

yippie asad n zoya got married...

tanveer truth is out n she is out of the house...

felt all the emotion display between asad n zoya...

its so beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Awesome !!!! gosh this is how the scene should have had been there in the serial too! loved it !

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

I loved this!!

I wish this had happened in the show but something better may come, right???

Loved how Zoya made the grand entry like a hero!!! ;)

Rashid finally did something good!!! :)

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Awesome!!! Loved the naming at the end.

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Omg I loved it!

I wish it turned out like this in the story!

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Woah!!!!!!

Nice one.

When i was reading it I literally felt that all this things are going to happen in the show.

Superb part.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

👏 Lovely story Monica! Loved the fact that Asad believed Zoya easily. Guess it helped having the report! Wonderful touch to have Rashid help Zoya. Papa Khan finally was of some use to Son Khan! Wish they would do the same on the show. Weak as he seems, I like Rashid. He needs a redemption track too.

One question: I know the story went long, but why didn't Zoya disclose the attempts on her life? Asad saved her at the madrasa, so would believe her. Additionally, I have been wondering if Zoya kept the green chaddar that saved her in Ajmer. Asad would definitely recognize it to be the one that flew from his hands. Can you please write another OS using this as background? All of Tanveer's evil deeds starting from the gas cylinder to cliff pushing need to come out. I know you wrote one with the Madrasa background. One more please?😃

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: webuser7
👏Lovely story Monica! Loved the fact that Asad believed Zoya easily. Guess it helped having the report! Wonderful touch to have Rashid help Zoya. Papa Khan finally was of some use to Son Khan! Wish they would do the same on the show. Weak as he seems, I like Rashid. He needs a redemption track too.

One question: I know the story went long, but why didn't Zoya disclose the attempts on her life? Asad saved her at the madrasa, so would believe her. Additionally, I have been wondering if Zoya kept the green chaddar that saved her in Ajmer. Asad would definitely recognize it to be the one that flew from his hands. Can you please write another OS using this as background? All of Tanveer's evil deeds starting from the gas cylinder to cliff pushing need to come out. I know you wrote one with the Madrasa background. One more please?😃

I was gonna add all that in. But it was already so long lol. Buttt i might do a sequel. With them askinf Zoya how she knew all this, etc, her narrating everything tanveer did and then maybe their SR. Though i don't usually write such mature things, but i could give it a shot. Lol.

Or if you want another one with the Madrasa I could do that :) but it's have to be next week, unless you wanna trade that in for an update on Meri Jasbhaat 😆