AsYa OS: Bharosa ~ Page 11

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Hey guys!

So this is something that popped into my head because of all the JaaNu marriage spoilers. Don't worry I have no plans on getting that cat married to Asad. But this was my take on what could happen.

(This idea came to me before Zoya decided to go back to Bhopal and before I saw the slap, so don't think about that).

More info when I finish it! In true Monica style, I plan on making it quite long 😆. So here's a sneak preview 😉


Bharosa

The words echoed in her head. They stung and rang in her ears like the sound of nails bring scratched on a green chalk board.


Mr. Khan... nikaah... Tanveer...


Zoya's phone slipped from her fingers, falling to the floor. Her heart stopped, her mind went numb. Tears formed in her eyes. She wondered what it was a stroke felt like, because she quite sure she was having one right now. She stared into space, as her legs gave out, causing her to fall on her knees. Her cheeks now had streams of tears on them, refusing to stop.


Why, she wondered. Why would Mr. Khan marry Tanveer? He doesn't love her. He loves... me. He loves ME! Why, Mr. Khan, why are you doing this? Why...


Her mind started racing with all kinds of possibilities. What all Tanveer could've done to make him make such a decision. Why would he agree? Why would he want to marry the woman with whom he had supposedly betrayed her? That was not the Mr. Khan she knew. Marriage was a sacred thing to him, wasn't it?


Her eyes grew wide, as the true reason, the only possible reason, dawned on her. Zoya shot up to her feet and ran. She ran as fast as her legs would take her. The wind hitting her face as she sprinted on the concrete roads, dodging people here and there. No, I can't let this happen, it's not true. I know it's not true. Tanveer you'll never get away with this. If it's the last thing I do, I will stop this. I will stop this nikaah.


She turned around the corner, as she saw her destination come closer to her. She flew through the gates of the villa and made her way hastily to the front door. She stopped in front of the door, taking a deep breath, bracing herself for what would come next. Hoping, praying, that she was in time.


She pushed the door open and stepped inside.


"RUKHO!!!!"


A/N:

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Posted: 12 years ago
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...aur agey?

continue soon pls 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!

FIRST OF ALL, I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A MOMENT TO DO A HAPPY DANCE! My comment is on the same page as your writing and that's no small feat!

And what are you doing stopping there! It was so dramatic so intense and then BAM! No no, that is not okay! Please continue! I loved every word of it and a special shout out to you for making Zoe so brainy! It was great... Her despair, her confusion, her resolve, and then ultimately, her determination! Kudos to you for portraying these emotions so brilliantly!

So, meherbani farmakar, aagey ki kahani...?
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sound interesting
plz plz cont soon
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DAMN! That was amazing. Totally dramatic rukho😆 Super. Continue soon Monica. Im a big fan of your writing:)<3
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Originally posted by: ..Kirann..

DAMN! That was amazing. Totally dramatic rukho😆 Super. Continue soon Monica. Im a big fan of your writing:)<3


AW you're too sweet Thanks! I shall on the weekend 😆 Just had to get this bit on paper, now I know what the rest of it will end up like 😃

P.S. LOVE your Icon 😃
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The sneak preview is absolutely enticing! Can't wait to read the whole thing! Update soon :)
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oye!!! aagey kya hua??!?!! 😆

can't wait!!
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continue soon !!
please. . . . . . . . . .
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Hey itnasa its intresting pls cont soon

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