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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Welcome back! 😛 This was amazing. 😲 Extremely beautiful! 👍🏼 I'm in love with ur writing now! Ur writing style is beautiful and mysterious. 👏 👏 👏 It's really different. 😃 Ur really talented, I wish I could write like u! (I tried, and then miserably failed. 🤣) It's confusing, but in a good way. 😊 I didn't really get it though, is Akram evil or something? I didn't really understand his part in the story. Whatever. 😆 I like this so much that I read it more than once! 😳 Loved ur descriptions with the lake and stuff. 😉 Continue super soon! 😛

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
res :)

unres :)

"pinching myself " i can't believe you updated this big part ! 😲 i'm surprised !!
coming back to the ts;
okay!! to be honest i still have no idea what the story was about!! o_O🤣
is it about zoya being with /marrying someone else?
but i love the writing style ! it's awesome !!👏
i loved it when youy compared asad with a lake & zoya to a river !
now you really have to post the next part !
and that too asap!
love you
kiki

ps: GIRL !!!!WHEN 'll YOU UPDATE "BEAUTIFUL MONSTER ", ?

*pinches herself*

same 'ere. 🤣

i think you'll figure it out in the last part.

see, thats why it took me so long to post this, because you have to read all of it to understand it, but its too long, and if you read the first part, your brain will just be f**ked until the next part 🤣

i cant tell ya that love 🤣

thanks love <3

i loved that part too.

when i figured out the lake an river stuff, i was so damn proud <3 🤣

i will very soon soon love <3

Ps: I dont know, im having major writers block on that, so i may have to take a hiatus on that (not that i havent posted any shit on that for like the past ten years 🤣)

LOVE YAH TOO <33

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Linsie

i will soon love <33

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Dippy am i blind or really did you type more than a 200 words?

You are not blind lovuu <33

I DID!!!

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: awesome
update soon

I WILL LOVE!! <33

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mysticlover
I really didn't understand it... I'm being truthful!!! But I'm trying to... you need to update the next part too... so that I can read both n try to make myself understand...
Whatever I've inferred is this... Asad n Zoya are two entirely different people (just like Asad always says in the show) like lake n river... one is calm n serene while the other is radiating exuberance... Akram was there in Zoya's life... a false presence... Asad loves Zoya... Zoya reciprocates the feeling? But she needs more from her relationship with Asad? But Asad doesn't know whether he can or have anything to give??
K... what I said is total rubbish!! Just update the next part!! I wanna read!!

Yeah, you have to read both to fully understand it love, i think the last part will answer most of your questions <33

yuppity yup...

false presence?? maybe maybe not 🤣 (leading towards the maybe not 🤣)

yeah, youre write a teeny bit.

BUT IMMA LET YOU FIGURE OUT IN THE NEXT PART!! 🤣

i will update soon <33