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Hi guys! I'm back with an os, some of u might know abt the poll i'd posted around a month back, which had 2 plots and the one which got the most votes was gonna be made a ts[now its an ss] and the one which got the lower votes was gonna be made into an os sometime later, when i leave my ff at a good cliff hanger. So I've finally got to that, but i've changed the name of it. I hav not got a clue of what i'm gonna write. The only thing i really know up to know is that the setting is gonna be in ajmer and they are both in the ajmer fort. I dont even know if its gonna be happy one or a sad one, so i'm just gonna go with the flow. I've got a few ideas here and there, based on the ajmer track and all the spoilers abt it. So for a start, the reason zoya has left asad is the same as the reason in the show. Also, the parts i use the word 'I' is not asad, or zoya's pov, that is just me narrating. So this is gonna start of sad, lets see how it ends up. So here it goes:

Unravelled


If anyone gave her a glance, within a second they can guess that she was going through a tough time. At least, that is what they would think, a true heart break is what she had been through, but how can they be blamed? For her face displayed no emotions, just like a rag doll being dragged across the floor. If only anyone could see through those layered eyes of hers, which displayed a myriad of emotions. Well, there was one person, just one person in the whole world who could see right through her - Asad Ahmed Khan.

"Why did he do this to me, why?!", she screamed into thin air. She knew he would recognize the agony her eyes screamed, the lust they held, for he was the reason of those bitter emotions. One moment, she felt like breaking down and crying until there was nothing left in her, until she was just a corpse which once held the soul of a broken woman, while the next second she wanted to scream and yell until she hated him to an extent, that could make her want to kill him, but no. How could she hate him? The very man who she loved, even God couldn't make her hate him, she loved him that much. She fell down to her knees and sobbed, for after all she was a poor broken soul who needed mending, if that was possible. She cried until there were no tears left to flow, she slowly got up to face the bitter world that surrounded her. She slowly walked ahead, trying to keep her head held high. Little did she know, she was being watched by two pairs of eyes, from different ends. One of them held pain, while the other weighed down with hate. Sensing something, she turned around abruptly, only to face the silhouette of a retreating figure. She sighed and turned back around, before making her way forward. She brought her left hand up to her face and looked at the finger which held their engagement ring, proudly. The flashback of the airport proposal rushed in front of her eyes, everything had felt so right. Although Asad had claimed it to be a fake proposal, she had seen the love in his eyes for her. Her heart screamed at her, for the umpteenth time, Are you a fool Zoya? You had seen the evident love in his eyes for you. Do you really think he would stoop so low? Do you really think he was betraying your love for him? She shook her head in disdain, trying to throw those questions out of her head, forever. Once again, as always her mind managed to dominate the screams of the agonized heart, leaving behind the same shattered girl. She gave one last glance at the ring adorning her finger, before removing it and tossing it away, allowing it to choose its destination. She felt like a part of her had been ripped off, she questioned herself if that was right, but she was quick in dominating herself, she eradicated the thought before she could try and amend her mistake. She turned her head and faced the slowly setting sun. She chuckled to herself, as she realized how similar her life was to a sunset. She watched the sun disappearing below the horizon, allowing the rays of darkness to fill the sky, with a few stars twinkling far away. Her life was the same, their was no light left in her, her life was dark and empty. But the stars, I don't know where they fall into. Maybe, I can say that they were the only thing which she lived on. Hope. Just a small light flickering inside her, trying hard to keep alive. She lived on a hope which seemed light years away from her, it was the hope that she could get her love back again. But that small ray of hope was fading away, slowly, ripping a part of her life away by every second.



Asad watched her walk away, his eyes brimming with tears. Just one tear drop slid down his cheek, being the sole reason for his complete break down. He fell to his knees and cried, he cried for the reason that he'd lost the only woman he'd ever loved and always will. He didn't know where the crooked path of his destiny, was leading him to. But he knew one thing, the path he was taking was the darkest he'd ever been through. "I need to to talk to her, I need to bring her back.", he told himself, determinedly. He finally mustered the courage to face her and began taking long strides towards her, to catch up with the distance. He stopped walking when she was just a mere four meters away from him. He took a deep breath, preparing himself to face the biggest test in his life.



Zoya stopped in her tracks, as she felt a warm hand grasping her shoulder tightly, yet gentle. She felt the similarity of the touch to someone else's and her eyes turned wide in shock, as her worst fears came true. She felt the tears the tears threatening to fall, as she spun around, impulsively to face the man who was the reason of her heart break. Her first instinct was to scream at him and tell him to leave her alone, but as soon as she saw those blood-shot eyes gazing at her pleadingly, she decided to let him speak. She inhaled a deep breath to calm herself and spoke, gritting her teeth, "Did you lose your way?" Asad gazed at her, trying to come back to his senses. He took a step forward, to come closer, but Zoya took a step backward instinctively. Asad squeezed his eyes shut, trying to think of something to say. He opened them again and looked at her, she was not reciprocating him. She was staring at everything present in the are, except him. A tear fell from his eye, as he began to speak, "Zoya..." Zoya's head shot up, hearing that. She hadn't heard her name coming from his mouth for more than a month, her emotions overwhelmed her as she broke down again. Asad broke even further seeing that, he wanted to crush her into his arms and hug her until there wasn't a single tear drop left. He wanted to tell her, everything was gonna be fine. But how could he? Both of their lives had been stabbed and nothing was fine. He reached his hand out to her, hesitantly, but she just shrugged it away before he could grip on her and spoke coldly, "Please, just leave me. I want to be alone. I want to be away from everyone, especially you. So please..." Asad knew he'd lost everything, right that moment. That one reaction of hers spoke everything. She felt betrayed to a point, where there was no turning back. She hadn't even acknowledged him by his name, all she remembered was the the betrayal and nothing else. Asad choked in between his tears, as he tried to speak again, "Zoya, I know you think that I betrayed you, I know I broke your heart and I also know that you hate me, but please, just let me speak this once." Zoya stood just stood there, staring at the floor, allowing him to continue, "What yo saw that night...that...that wasn't true. I don't remember anything that happened before I woke up. I don't know how I ended up like that, I know I have no rights to say this, but still I am, please just trust me this time." Zoya chuckled sarcastically as she heard that, she spoke without looking at him, "Trust. Did I hear that right? Can you remind me again, when has 'trust' ever existed between me and you? Because all I remember is getting judged, insulted and slapped for no fault mine, whereas I begged you to trust me. And did you? No, of course not! Why would Asad Ahmed Khan ever trust anyone, let alone a mere guest in his house? Because everyone is just a unfortunate speck of dust on his shoes, from his view. Isn't that right Mr. Khan?" In other situations, he would have went blank hearing that coming from the mouth of someone he loves and cares for deeply, but he had to fight back, fight back for his love. He screamed back at her, "What are you tying to deny?! The fact that you still love me, or the fact that I will always love you?!" Zoya stared back at him, shocked by his outburst, she wanted to scream back at him and tell him he had no right to ask her anything, but instead she whispered, "Both." Asad stared at her, overwhelmed yet confused by her indirect confession. He took a step forward, trying grab her shoulders, but she moved away quickly. Asad moved forward again and cupped her face, she didn't retaliate, so he held on and spoke, "Just this once, Zoya. Please. I know I have hurt you many times and I went too far this time, but I can't live without you. You are the only woman I've ever loved and will ever love. I would rather die than living without you." Zoya averted her gaze, for she knew very well that she'll forgive him, if she looked into his eyes which were pleading for forgiveness. She pushed his hands away form her face and turned back around. She sighed deeply before walking away, leaving a devastated Asad behind. He stood rooted there for a few minutes, before he broke down yet again and cried, he'd let his only chance slip. He threw is head up and screamed facing the sky. His head fell back down, but just as quickly he looked back up, a distant figure was running towards the same direction as which Zoya had gone in a few minutes ago. He quickly got up and composed himself, he murmured to himself, "Tanveer?" He ran behind her, until they were only a few meters away. He slowed down and continued to follow her, without allowing her to acknowledge his presence. He was confused as to what Tanveer was doing there, but he knew one fact for sure, she was going behind Zoya.



Zoya stood there, at the edge of the cliff, sobbing. For the first time, her mind asked her, What if he is innocent? She had seen the innocence his eyes held, she knew his eyes always held the truth. Whether he was lying, or not, his eyes always held the answer. Whether he was pained, or happy, you can see those emotions being portrayed on his face. Being the emotionally reserved person that he was, he hid his feelings deep inside him. But his eyes portrayed every single emotion he was feeling, clearly. That was the one place she see right through him, but she wasn't blind either. What she saw that night, remained untouched in her mind. Her eyes filled with fresh tears, yet again as the scene replayed in her mind. She sobbed harder, for she didn't know what was the truth. She knew Tanveer had wanted to trap Asad all along, but she still couldn't bring herself to believe that what she saw was just a one-sided, dirty trick of Tanveer's. She screamed into thin air, "I love you, Mr. Khan!" Just then, a hand gripped her and hurled her back around. She was caught off guard, she saw Tanveer standing there with an ever evil smirk plastered on to her face, her stone eye exposed, she gave her an expression of fake sympathy and spoke, "Oh Zoya! Of course you love him and your gonna love him ever the more sitting in heaven. You can watch his every move, he will not be out of your sight for even a second. So nice, na? I'm not so lucky, am I? Of course, I'll get to claim my rights as Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan, but still, not as good as you, eh?" Zoya blood boiled hearing that, every cell in her body hated the woman standing in front of her purely. Rage shot up her body, from head to toe. She grabbed her by her shoulders and shook her vigorously, "You trapped Mr. Khan didn't you? You trapped my Asad didn't you? He-" Tanveer brushed Zoya's arms off her shoulders and replied casually, "Correction. Not your Asad, he is mine and yes, I did trap him. Bechara Jammy, believes everything I say. How would he know he's innocent, when he was unconscious the whole time?" Zoya's eyes went wide hearing that, she remembered her conversation with Asad with just a matter of minutes before, she was at the verge of breaking down, but she managed to keep herself composed. Every drop of blood running in her veins, commanded her to push her off the cliff right that second, but she stood there, her fists clenched and listened to her rambling, "Wonder why I just confessed that?" Zoya just continued to stare at her, Tanveer chuckled and replied, "Because you're going to die, right here and no one will ever no this conversation existed. And yes, before you die, I wanna put your confused mind at peace. I was the one who called up that Bhatavdekar guy and told him about your fake engagement. I was the one who mixed the poison in the sweet box you took to Ayaan's engagement. Just when I was so close to removing you from mine and Asad's life, he brought you back. That was when I decided to kill you, if you'd gone then, your life would have been spared, but you signed you death warrant yourself, so there is no one to be blamed." Zoya stood there, shocked, as she connected the dots. She was the only one who'd handled the box apart from her, who else could it have been? She slapped herself mentally for not giving a second thought on the biggest clue she'd over got over Tanveer. She squeezed her eys shut, as she heard Tanveer laughing hysterically. She continued, "That very day, I put that live wire in your bath tub, but then again Asad saved you. I was the one who changed the blood samples during your Jahn-e-Saugaat, but I must admit you do have a brain. Every single one of my plans to create drifts between you and Asad went down the drain, until the day of your nikaah. I'd tried to kill you again during your Jashn-e-Bahaar, but then again, I had to hurt myself to gain Asad's sympathy, because you managed to turn on the lights just when I was so close to finishing you. I watched you and Asad come closer each and every second, every part of me wanted to kill you right there, in front of Asad's eyes, but I couldn't. I'd made a plan to kill you, on the day of your Sangeet, but those wretched women saved you. Maybe I was destined to suffer before I finally eradicated the biggest obstacle of my life, that is you. From today on wards, there will be no barrier between me and Asad, he'll be mine and only mine. The day when I succeed has finally come, because no one can save you today, no matter what. Not even God." Zoya stood there ready to embrace death, without a single expression playing on her face. She was trapped, there was no use of trying to escape, as it would be a failed attempt anyway, for Tanveer was gripping her wrist so tightly, to a point where her fingers became numb. She apologized to Asad, mentally for not believing him. She continued staring at Tanveer, while Tanveer gave her a smug smile before whispering into her ear, "Alvida Zoya." Just when her hand reached to push her down the cliff and out of her life forever, she was greeted by a sharp sting on her cheek. She looked to her side, to see who it was. Her eyes grew wide in shock as she saw the person, "...Jammy?"



She felt another harsh slap fall across her face, Asad roared into her face, "Asad! My name is Asad! Don't you dare call me by that disgusting name from that disgusting mouth of yours!" Tanveer stood there, tongue tied. The best she could do was try and defend herself, "Jammy, its not like what you think. I was just telling Zoya-" She was cut short by Asad, who bellowed back at her, "I told you not to call me by that disgusting name! And ehat were you telling Zoya? You were telling her that you wrecked my brother's engagement, you were telling her that you were trying to ruin her life, you were telling her that you trapped me into your dirty game and you were telling her that you had tried to kill her so many times! You know what was the biggest mistake I've made till date? The blunder of trusting you over Zoya. I put you forth and never gave Zoya's accusations on you a second thought, never in my life did I think that they were actually legitimate. You broke my trust, Tanveer. You tried to take my life away from me, my Zoya. What did she ever do to you to deserve this? Out of pure selfishness and greed, you tried to kill an innocent woman. Are you actually the Tanveer I knew? Because the girl I remembered as my childhood friend was a kind, loving and affectionate girl, who could not harm a fly, but you...you're a betrayer." Tanveer stood there, raged by his insult on her. She knew better than to defend herself, because there was no point in doing so. She let go of the mask of innocence covering her real self, she cast a hateful glance at Zoya and turned back to Asad and screamed at him, "YES!!! You're right! I am a betrayer! I tried to kill that woman so many times, but she kept getting saved! I ruined your brother's engagement, I ruined your life! But why should I care? I am Billo Rani! I'm evil, alright. In fact, you can call me the daughter of Satan. I destroy anyone who comes in my way and that unfortunate being was Zoya, nevertheless she was a tough one. She figured me out in such a short period of time, while you ran behind me, trusting my every word like they were God's. How can I be blamed, if you didn't use your brain?!" Asad stood there blankly, trying to tolerate her meaningless rambling. Tanveer gave another hateful glance at Zoya and turned back to Asad, she grabbed him by his collar and yelled into his face, "Marry me, Asad! Marry me! I'll be a million times better a wife than Zoya! No one can ever come between us! I'll make sure you fall in love with me! We-" Tanveer fell to the floor as an impact of sharp slap she was met with. Her head shot up and she found Asad breathing heavily, his fists clenched, while glaring hatefully at her, "Not another word from you! You are not even worthy to be called a human! No one can ever take Zoya's place in my life, let alone you! Don't you even utter her name from your sinful mouth, you bloody witch of a woman!" Tanveer was still lying on the floor, a foot or so away from Zoya, she gave Asad an evil stare and spoke, "Well, if I can't have you, then nobody can!" She grabbed Zoya by her ankle and pulled her so that she trips and falls down the cliff. Zoya ave out a shrill scream, being took off guard. But before she could fall down, she felt a strong pair of arms wrapped around her, preventing her from falling. She turned around and found Asad holding her, while giving Tanveer a 'you just signed your death warrant' look. Tanveer gritted her teeth and screamed, for she'd lost her last opportunity to take revenge. Asad pulled Zoya back and let go of her. Zoya crashed down to her knees and broke down, Asad gave her a reassuring look and turned back to Tanveer. He grabbed her by her wrists and dragged her to the nearest tree. She screamed and struggled, but she achieved nothing. He pushed her back, into the tree and tied her to it with her dupatta. Tanveer screamed and begged him to let her go, but instead he took out his phone and called the police. Just when the police were dragging her away, Tanveer turned her head and screamed at Zoya, "One day, I will be back! I will make sure I kill you! You bloody b****!"



Asad ran back to Zoya, who was still kneeling on the floor, sobbing hard. He knelt down and pulled her into a bone crushing hug. They stayed like that for several minutes, trying to compensate for all those days that they'd spent away from each other. and he cupped her face. Zoya looked back up at him, while he smiled at her reassuringly. He wiped her tears away with his thumb and asked her, "Are you ok, Zoya?" He fell flat on his back, as Zoya crashed into his chest. She cried harder, while murmuring sorry all the while. Asad stroked her back, trying to comfort her. He pulled her back up and sat up. He leaned forward and planted a kiss on her forehead. He pulled away and found Zoya flashing a weak smile at him, she whispered in between her tears, "I'm sorry for not trusting you, Mr. Khan." Asad sighed frustrated and replied, "Asad, to you." Zoya stared at him, confused by his reply. Asad smiled at her and spoke, "I meant, you have to call me Asad." Zoya smiled at him, while Asad leaned in slowly, until his forehead was resting on hers. Zoya closed her eyes in anticipation, as she felt his breath fanning her face. Asad leaned in further, until their lips were just an inch apart. Suddenly, Zoya pushed him and he ended up falling flat on his back again. Zoya quickly sprang back up to her feet, while Asad stared at her confused by her action. Zoya flashed her million dollar, dimpled smile and spoke, "Not so soon, Mr. Khan." Asad drowned into her, as he saw that killer smile of hers after so long. Every second spent away from her, he'd craved to see that smile, but when he was actually seeing it, he didn't know how to react. He caught her by her wrist and pulled her down, making her land on top of him, her head resting in the crook of his neck. Zoya quickly pulled back a little, when she found herself getting intoxicated by his scent. Asad rolled over, so that he was lying on top of her. He smirked, as he felt her chest heaving up and down against his body. He whispered into her ears huskily, "What did I tell you to call me as?" The proximity was really to getting to her, so she just pretended she didn't care and replied casually, "Jahanpanah Six Packs?" Asad smirked at her again and replied, "You can drool on my six packs later, now just answer my question." Zoya blushed hearing that, while Asad looked at her smugly. Asad adjusted his face into the side of her neck and kissed her there. Zoya gasped, while Asad whispered into her ears, "Now what are you supposed to call me?" Zoya smiled shyly and reluctantly replied, "...umm...Asad..." Asad smiled one of his rare dimpled smiles, as he heard his name coming from her lips, while Zoya started repeating the name, liking the sound of it. Asad gazed at her lovingly, he couldn't help but smile at the childish grin adorning her face. For getting what position they were in, Zoya spoke casually, "Asad. That actually sounds kinda cool, you know." Asad smiled at her innocence, when she didn't have the chance to rebel, he leaned and sealed he lips in a kiss. Zoya looked shocked, for a second but slowly relaxed and complied with him. They stayed like that for what seemed an eternity, for after all they did belong to each other, always and forever.

~The End~

I just went through the whole thing again and i realized what rubbish i'd made u guys read, so i'm extremely sorry. I'm sorry for any typing errors coz i'm not the kind of person who goes through anything properly even once, i'm extremely lazy when it comes to checking. I still can't get over how i wrote such a long os and made it so boring. Feel free to throw ur eggs and tomatoes coz i know how ur feeling right now. Please leave u reviews behind nice, or nasty, they help me improve. I'm not gonna say 'hope u liked it', coz i know myself that it was a whole load of rubbish, i'm really not happy with the way it turned out. But still, thank u for reading it and leave ur comments behind. Au revoir!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was really beautiful...i could feel their pain...a very well written piece of work...what a beautiful interpretation of the cliff scene...if our QH Cvs could have given us a cliff scene even half good as this i would have been so happy...once again great work...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is really great...superb...
asad found out the full truth about tanveer edi n wat zoya told all the while is the truth...
asad n zoya confess their feeling for each other ...
thx fr the pm n it is really superb...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww...wonderful os!
beautifully written...would love to see this on the show!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really amazing os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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too good...loved it...& slap on tanveer..amazing..my most loved scenes...i m waiting 4 tht to come

thnks 4 d pm

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaah..finally Tanveer is exposed and Asad Zoya are together..happy times ahead :)

thanks for the pm..and plz dnt think what you wrote was bad...we all want it to happen in the show soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just loved this OS! it was so beautifully written! ur an awesome writer and please pm me whenever u write something new
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was way better than the cliff scene in the show!!!
An emotional update n you could almost feel Asad n Zoya's pain n void within themselves...
Tanveer's truth is out n Asya reunited... nothing else matters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u evry 1 for ur lovely comments. I seriously dint think u guys wud actually like it. I thought it was a unrealistic, but still u guys liked it so that's great! But I'm very dreamy eyed, u can guess from what I wrote. Thanks again, evry1!😊

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