ASYA FF- SAAIYAAN CH 4 UPDATED - Page 4

Yeah one doesnt get many likes in the beginning...been there...doesnt mean you should stop writing!

hey tis is superb...

GUYS I KNOW THIS CHAPTER IS A CRAP BUT PLEASE BEAR WITH ME

NEXT CHAPTER AWAITS THE CLIMAX

ch 5

RIGHT NOW NOTHING CAN BE SAID ... SHE IS UNCONSCIOUS AND WE CANNOT TELL HER STATE BUT SHE WILL SUFFER A LOT ON KNOWING SHE HAS LOST HER BABY...

USE KUCH AZEEZ NAHI HAI DOC !!! MURMURED ASAD IN HIS BREATH...
WHAT ????
NOTHING I WAS SYING SHE WILL BE FINE...WHEN CAN SHE BE DISCHARGED

SOON AFTER SHE IS CONSCIOUS

THANX A LOT SAID ASAD AS HE VID ADIEU TO THE DOCTOR AND REACHED ZOYA...

U R FINE RIGHT

YA IM... HOWS SHE???? ZOYA LOOKED AT HIM WITH QUESTIONING EYES AND HE ANSWERED HER THAT SHE IS OK
THERE WAS A PERFECT SILENCE WHICH WAS BROKEN BY ASAD AFTER A WHILE
WHAT HAD HAPPENED?????

MR.KHAN YE BAHUT LAMBI KAHANI HAI AUR ITNI ACHHI NAHI HAI KI AAPKO SUNNE ME ACHHI LAGE...U SHOULD JUST KNOW THAT

THAT
SHE CHEATED ON YOU,,, USNE DHOKA DIYA HAI AAPKO!!!! SHE WAS PREGNANT WITH SOMEONE ELSES CHILD

U WERE BEING INVOLVED BY HER KYUNKI USE AAPKA PAISA CHAHIYE THA MR. KHAN SHE WANTED THAT DAMN MONEY...UTTERED NOW CRYING ZOYA...

YE SAB AAPKO KAISE...ASAD GAE HER A QUESTIONING LOOK

TANVEER NE BATAYA MUJHE MR.KHAN ...SHE HAS TRIED AMPLE OF TIME TO KILL ME PAR DEKHIYE NAA MAIN BHI KITNI SAKHT JAAN HOON HAR BAAR BACH JAATI HOON...


DAYS WENT BY AND TANNU GOT DISCHARGED SHE WAS TAKEN HOME
SHE QUICKLY RETIRED TO HER ROOM AFTER ENTERING TO FIND HER LUGGAGE ALL PACKED

CONFUSED????? SHE TURNED TO SEE ASAD WITH HIS QUESTIONING ANG ANGERED EYES

JAMMY YE SAB KYA HAI????

TO BE CONTINUED

Waiting for that slap to happen...
N yeah you should write... people will start hitting like you just keep writing... :-)