ASYA FF- SAAIYAAN CH 4 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
i just come across this ff
its really nice add me to u buddy list
i snd u a rqust
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is really great...yippie asad saved zoya n on top of all he knows tanveer full truth...
it is really superb...
please continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaar...update toh ek dum phaadu thaa, but itna chotu update kyun...thoda bad hee de detee atleast ek pizza yaa burger ke jitnaa hee sahiii...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is very nice, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wow
thanx for the pm
do pm me for the next aswell plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
GUYS MERE EXAMS PARSO SE START HO RAH EHAIN SO THERE WILL BE NO UPDATE TILL 29TH OF JULY
AUR PLZ DUA KARNA KI ACHHE CHALE JAYEIN

EXAMS KE TURANT BAAD UPDATE KAR DUNGI😊😊


HOPE U ALL UNDERSTAND😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely ff

and all the best for ur exams

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...and all the best for your exams!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5


the journey from ajmer back to home began with asad in the front seat beside the driver and tanveer and zoya at the back seat...

tanveer was extremely happy at realising the her secret is yet not out of the bag (at least she supposed)

whereas asad did not move his eyes off the rear view mirror for once...he knew what condition was zoya in he knew what would have happened if he had not made it on time...he couldnt believe that tanveer his tannu could do this but yet the whole truth ...yes the whole truth was not yet out... he had to find out the truth and who knows it ...zoya
ZOYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! asad came out of his thoughts and suddenly turned to see zoya he had been doing so through the mirror though!!!!!!!!!!!
how lame she looked how weak how broken how shattered and this was because of him


wait it wasnt because of him might be tanveer was behind that...his head felt like bursting but he knew he had to control himself...



bas paanch minute mein pahunch jayeenge sir said the driver to asad who had ended up sleeping after such fights inn his mind... he turned to look for zoya who slept peacefully...was it really peaceful, he wondered how strong this girl was and what a fool he was ---------trusting his friend more than her. trusting someone who even do not deserve his mercy...

tanveer was fast asleep...but he didnt found her pleasing. he felt like killing her then and there but no he had to wait he had to know the truth...


we have reached sir!! exclaimed the driver breaking his chain of thoughts


YES! unload the luggage please and yes ur money.

thanx sir! is there anything else i can do --------for u or for ur wife????


WIFE did he considered tanveer as his wife???

sir i think ur wife is still in the effect of medicine...

haa! he thought zoya as my wife ... no shes not my wife but shes my life ...she matters to me the most and i would never ever hurt her or let anyone hurt her...NEVER!!!!


he came out from his thoughts while tanveer stood at his side and zoya still sedated struggled to stand straight...

she stumbled on moving and fell right into his arms ...his strong arms in which she felt secure,safe and happy...she flashed a faint smile as he picked her up and carried her to the room...he made her lay on the bed and went to make coffe for her signalling tannu to come out with him...but she wouldn't he shot a confused glare at her but she remained there

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she had some other plans in her mind

as soon as asad left, she turned to zoya whom she thought was sedated and still in deep sleep but who actually was awake with just her eyes closed...

tanveer picked up a pillow and covered zoyas mouth to which her immediate reaction was to hit tanveer ...

she kicked tanveer hard at her stomach and at the same time asad got there on hearing the havoc...

tanveer lay there whimping in pain...

we have to take her to the hospital mr.khan

i dont think so he uttered and quickly reached for her and checked if she was ok?

im gud mr.khan but we cannot leave her like this... you know what she can pay for her sins after being hospitalised...its her fault not her child's

plz understand mr.khan

he obliged and they took tannu to hospital...




thats it guys i am updating it at 12 am so thats it for now...

the slap portion will be in the next part and i'll wrap up my ff in the next part...

guys i did not got many likes but i guess its ok for start...

shall i continue with ffs??????

well will post the last part whenever im free and yes Predictions on guys!😉

sorry for any mistake just typed it in half sleep

Edited by archiie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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