ASYA FF- SAAIYAAN CH 4 UPDATED

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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO SORRY GUYS MERA LAST FF COMPLETE NAHI HO PAYA...
I WAS JUST NOT IN MOOD TO CONTINUE AS THE ORIGNAL SHOW WAS UPSETTING ME...😲
BUT NOW I'M BACK AND THIS TIME I WILL COMPLETE IT PAKKA PROMISE!!!😉

SO HERE I START------😛 THE TIME IS WHEN ASAD AND ZOYA ARE IN AJMER...ZOYA HAS
REFUSED ASADS PROPOSAL AND TADAP TADAP IS OVER😉...


ASAD MOVED OUT OF THE FORT DEJECTED... HE FELT HE HAD LOST HIS EVERYTHING JUST EVERYTHING... HE HAD JUST LOST HIS ZOYA FOREVER. SHE WOULD NEVER FORGIVE HIM. THATS WHAT HE KNEW... AND THERE SHE WAS THE SAME... SAD THE OLD ZOYA WAS REALLY DEAD THIS WAS JUST A DEAD BODY WITHOUT HEART AND SOUL COZ SHE HAD ALREADY GIVEN IT TO HIM...

I'm sorry zoya mumbled asad as he reached out to hotel to check out. he payed the money and started to leave when he got a call from tanveer but he was too remorsefull that he didnt answered the call...
he left the hotel and went to airport when zoya rushed to hotel to meet him she had got to know everything.but here he was no more there ...

HE JUST LEFT MAM! U R A BIT LATE.
I'M VERY LATE MIMBLED ZOYA AS SHE BROKE DOWN THERE ITSELF...I LOST HIM I LOST HIM B'COZ OF MY FOOLISHNESS...😭😭😭. SHE SOON COMPOSED HERSELF AND CALLED HIM BUT HE JUST DIDNT ANSWER AND THE CALL GOT DIVERTED TO LANDLINE AND OUR DEAR BILLO RANI PICKED UP WHEN SHE HEARD SOBS AND THEN TO GET THE GREATEST SHOCK OF HER LIFE HEARD ZOYS VOICE- IM SORRY MR.KHAN I MISUNDERSTOOD U...IT WAS ALL A TANVEER PLAN LET ME COME BACK AND WE WILL SORT EVERYTHING OUT I PROMISE...MR.KHAN AAP BAAT KYUN NAHI KAR RAHE HAIN...
THATS WHEN SHE STRUCK THAT THE CALL WAS DIVERTED ALREADY AND SHE MIGHT HAVE SPILLED THE BEANS TO TANVEER...😲.SO WHAT I DONT CARE IF SHE COMES TO KNOW IM THERE ALL ALIVE...
TUMHARA KHEL TO AB KHATM HOKE RAHEGA TANNU RANI... SHE PLEDGED TO HERSELF AS SHE WENT TO HER HOTEL... BUT AS ZOYA WAS CHECKING OUT THE NEXT DAY SHE GOT A MESSAGE IT WAS ASAD'S...
"IM WAITING FOR U AT THE MASJID"
IM JUST COMING SAID ZOYA T HERSELF AS SHE RUSHED OUT TO THE MAZAAR...
BUT THERE SHE STOOD SHOCKED TO SEE TAVEER AND ASAD STANDING WITH MAULVI SAAV TALKING ABOUT THEIR NIKAAH...SHE SHATTERED THEN AND THERE...

SHE WAS SHOCKED WAS ASAD BETRAYING HER AGAIN?????
WHEN SHE FELT SOMEONE TAP HER SHOULDERS AND SHE TURNED TO FACE HER!!!!!!!
KYA SOCH RAHI HO ZOYA???? YAHI KII MAIN YAHAN KYA KAR HOON VO BHI TUMHARE MR. NAHI MERE JAMMY KE SAATH?????? SHE TOOK THE HAND AND KEPT IT ON HER STOMACH - U KNW WHAT? HUMARE ANDAR EK NANHI SI JAAN HAI... ASAD AUR HAMARI NANHI SI JAAN...

JUST SHUT UP! YE HO HI NAHI SAKTA MAIN JAANTI HOON KI TUMHARE AUR MR.KHAN KE BEECH KUCH NHI HUA THA US RAAT...

PAR USS RAAT KO BEETE TO EK MAHINA HO GAYA NA ZOYA...AUR EK MAHINA TO BAHUT LAMBA HOTA HAI NAHI????

BAND KARO APNI BAKWAAS TANVEER...MAIN YAHAN TUMSE BAHAS KARNE NAHI AAYI...MUJHE MR.KHAN NE BULAYA HAI AUR MAIN UNSE MILNE AAYI HOON...

OH JAMMY NE MSG KIYA TUMHE! TANVEER SMIRKED SHOWING ASADS PHONE TO ZOYA

KYUN KAR RAHI HO TUM YE???????


DO POST YOUR COMMENTS AND I'LL UPDATE TODAY ITSELF IF POSSIBLE OR THE NEXT WEEK 😃😃😃
PART TWO BELOW...😆
PART 3 PAGE 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome continue soon and if possible plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing plz continue soon do pm me for the next :)
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very nice...hope cvs show like this in our show😭m so disappointed with all this evil always win over good formula😡continue soon n plz pm me😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting...
I want pm for this one...
P.S. I would like to strangle that Tanveer to death!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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o.k guys heres part two and the very same day. u might get lucky to get the third part also today...
enjoy and yes for pms add me to your buddy list otherwise its too tedious job.

CHAPTER TWO


tum kyun kar rahi ho ye????

hum iss baare mein pehle bhi baat kar chuke hain zoya...
tum jaanti ho main ye kyun kar rahi hoon...balki poochna to mujhe tumse chahiye kitni sakht jaan ho tum har baar bach jaati ho...

main to har baar bachungi hi naa tanveer mere saath mera pyaar jo hai...
tumhari tarah mujhe ghatiya ilzaam lagake unhe apnanae ki zarurat nahi hai.

just then the phone rings... asad calls tanveer on his phone... nikaah ki taiyaari chal rahi hai aap bhi taiyaar ho jayein aadhe ghante mein nikaah hai hamara.
zoya felt the earth sliding beneath her...was he really marrying her...????
but why he loves me unhone mujhse kaha au agar nahi bhi kete tab bhi main mehsoos to kar sakti hoon. tanveer kamyab ho gayi... usne mr.khan ko apne jaal mein achhi tarah phasa liya hai...
bechare khud bhi nahi jaante ki unki zindagi mein ho kya raha hai????

nahi main ye nahi hone doongi...thinking and breaking down at the same time zoya moved ahead towards the cliff...tannu smirked

I LOVE U 2 MR.KHAN...I LOVE U ... MUJHE AAPPE PURA YAKEEN HAI... I REALLY REALLY LOVE U...shouted zoya at the top of her voice...she could not think what to do... she just wanted him wanted to hug him tight...

meanwhile asad stood there just occupied with zoya he just could not sense everything right...what the hell is going on... kyun mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha???? kyun aisa lag raha hai jaise tum kisi musibat mein ho zoya kahhaan ho tum????

asad ran out of the mazaar tyo find zoya he coould feel her there...



meanwhile zoya occupied with his thoughts didnt noticed where she was heading... and she stood at the corner of the cliff... she desperately called out MR.KHAN I LOVE U MAIN KUCH BHI KARUNGI AAP KE LIYE. HUM HAR INTEHAAN DEKAR MILENGE MR.KHAN I'LL PROVE THAT MY LOVE IS AS PURE AS YOURS...

tanveer rejoiced as she saw zoya totally preoccupied with asad she knew it was the correct time...

THIS WAS IT GUYS WAIT FOR THE 3RD PART MAYBE TODAY OR THE NEXT WEEK...😃😃😃😃😃😃
AND AGAIN FOR PM ADD ME 2 BUDDY LIST I WONT PM INDIVIDUALLY TRUST ME ITS TOO BORING...🥱🥱🥱🥱

BY THE WAY I HOPE THIS OS IS NOT LAME MISSHUMPTYDUMPTY!!!!
RIGHT ANKIE DI...⭐️⭐️😊
Edited by archiie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow gr8 part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next aswell
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will Asad see everything???
Can't tolerate Tanveer anymore!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3 PART 1

zoya began to turn and go back to mazaar when she just collided with tanveer...
are re itni bhi kya jaldi hai? jammy humara intezaar kar rahe hain tumhara nahi...

apni khushfehmi apne paas rakho tannu rani ( i would have preferred billo rani though) mana ki mr.khan aaj tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain par wo din bhi door nahi jab tum unki wajah se salakhon ke pecche apne wakeel ka intezaar karogi... 😕(REALLY??? SORRY FOR BAKWAS SA DIALOGUE)😆

Tanveer turns her face in anger
haan haan kyun nahi ... ye sab zaroor hoga zoya par tumhare khwabon mein, un khwabon mein jo tum apni maut ke baad dekhogi😈 she smirked her evil smile playing on her lips...

zoya was bewildered she took a second to get to the meaning but that was too late...
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asad ran on the streets his mind and heart totally in search of zoya... she had rejected him now she might not want to see her face but he was still desperate
he let his heart take him and went where his heart led...
to the cliff to his zoya...



what do u think zoya will fall and die????? or will asad save her?????
and billi ka kya hoga?????? this is not whole chapter 3 but aap logo ki excitement thodi to badhani padegi naa...a long waited scene for u ahead

chalo chalo predictions shuru...😃 MYSTIC LOVER AAP THODA THODA SAHI WAY PE HO ;)😉

CHAPTER 3 PART 2

asad ran like a maniac he ran like his life s gonna end he was running on the streets shouting and calling zoyaaa just the mangalpur way but the only difference time had created was that time he knew she was in danger but this time he could feel her in danger his love had made him so serene he could obviously sense something wrong with zOyaa...

kahan ho tum zoya mumbled asad main jaanta hoon u need me i knw tum mujhe dekhna bhi nahi chahti par pata nahi kyon mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tum khud mujhe pukar rahi ho...kahan ho tum
he kept runnin towards the cliff and on reaching there he saw someone...

he couldnt see properly he was still far off the place but he could make out two individuals...
yes someone in pink and other in... green he supposed he ran to them they might know about zoya...
but as he neared he was left dumbstruck they were tannu and zoya fighting with each other

he saw zoya at the edge of he cliff he couldnt see tannu smirk...she wasnt facing him but he could read zoyas face he could understand her HE WENT NEAR them BOTH WERE TOTALLY UNAWARE OF ASADS PRESCENCE...
and then suddenly...


thats it guys chapter 3 completed wait for chapter 4 and yes it might be today

😊 and ab to chapter 3 theek theek lambe hai agla chapter will be lengthy and all in one go

bye till then😊
Edited by archiie - 12 years ago

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