qubool hai ff

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ahalya19

@ahalya19

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

hi, my name is ahalya i'm indian but currently living in Nigeria in Africa and this is my first attempt in writing an asya ff, i dont really know hindu well since i've never lived to india so pls forgive my mistakes i'm still learning

pls tell me what u think

here goes

DESTINY?

in U.S.A

zoya woke up really exited as it was her last day as a college student she has finally finished her exams and was very exited to go to india to stay with her phupie.

She still couldnt believe it was her graduation , zoya takes a picture of her phupie and her family and looked at it she will finaly see her phupie after a long time, she starts looking at all the people in the picture and her eyes falls on asad, *sighs* the only bad thing about staying in her phupie house is Asad Ahmed Khan she has never liked him and his know it all attitude but she promises herself she will try her best and not let him get to her.

in India

Asad couldnt help but grin like an idiot when his ammi told him zoya was coming to india in just 3 days, he has been in love wuth zoya for 5 years now ever since he met her. zoya was just 17 then. she used to work in one of charity his mother used to help with ever since then she has been very close to his family especially because she didnt have any family of her own and considered his ammi her phupie untill she got a scholorship and went abroad, asad was completely devasteted and only his ammi knew why now finally zoya was coming back.

how is it should i continue😕

and pls i would appreciate any advise as my writing is not good

thanks😊

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

AHHH yes yes yes yes! Asad in love before Zoya and him trying to woo her!? HELL YES!

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow... cont.

PM me when u update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey gr8 concept asad in love with zoya first pls cont and pm me

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ahalya19

@ahalya19

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Posted: 12 years ago

in my story asad father didnt cheat on his ammi and the siddique family is not part of my story asad, ayan and najma are siblings

hope u guys enjoy

CHAPTER 1

zoya arrives at india after a long trip, she was tired but still couldn't wait to see phoopie and her family. she called a taxi and gave the address before she knew it she was in front of the khan villa she walked to the front door holding back her urge to burst inside and yell phoopie but she knocked instead.

inside the house asad just couldn't wait and was pacing in his room when he heard the knock his heart started pounding he rushed to the living room and got to the door before his ammi. he stood in front of the door and took a deep breath and opened the door to see a very beautiful zoya smiling widely but as soon as she sees him her smile fades. he moves aside and invited her in ''pls come in''

his ammi rushes there seeing the awkardness and engulfes zoya in a bear hug, zoya hugs her back and greets her soon after everybody gives her a hug when it comes to asad's turn red and slowly hugs her a little longer than necessary😳

zoya breaks the hug and they have a short eyelock until najma interrupts and pulls zoya away, they all seat on the couch discussing zoya's time in new york, they all had dinner togther and retreated to their rooms.

the next morning zoya woke up a little late and rushed to get ready, as she was coming out of her room she bumped into something hard and was about to fall when to pairs of hand caught her, zoya looked to see asad holdin her worry etched on his face and pulled out of the embrace.

''zoya are you okay?'' he asked, concerned filled his voice as he looked at her concerned, ''i'm fine, i was just rushing out because i woke up late''

asad looked at her confused then he realised the clock in her room was 3 hours faster than the actual time it was actually just 7 and they had breakfast by 9. ''actually it just 7 a.m the time in your room is a little fast'' he said ''allah miyan so i rushed for noting now what am i going to do in 2 hours'' she said pouting, asad looked at her and smiled admiring how beautiful she looked when she's pouting. ''um... woh actually i will like to talk to you about something if you dont mind'' he said nervously, she hesitated then agreed.

asad and zoya walked out to the garden and sat down, zoya was sitting close to asad and faced him and asked ''what do you want to talk about'' asad was taken aback by her being so close and was just staring at her completely lost in her while zoya was confused looking at him wondering why he's staring at her like that.

when asad finally recovered he was embarassed as he was caught staring, as he was about to say something ayan walked in calling zoya and she excused herself to go and meet him leaving a disappointed asad starring at her back

next update tommorow

sorry for mistakes, i was rushing

Edited by ahalya19 - 12 years ago