AsYa FF -*Here We Go Again!*- Chap 2, pg 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people... Its my first try. I have read some super amazing stories and fanfictions written by extremely talented writers in this forum.There are loads of gems out there. Cannot recall all but yeah, Its a pleasure reading their stuffs... Okkk sooo, the point is : Inspired by them I have tried writing an AsYa FF- not that I stand a chance against them, but Stiilll. Ek try maarne me kya jaata hai, Hai naaa?I have been a silent reader because Ive never been able pluck up the courage to post my work. Hope you like it. Happy reading.

CHAPTER 1 :

"Its going to be a long journey" Asad muttered under his breath as he got into the first class compartment of Delhi Express. It was late evening and the moon cast a pale light over the chaotic station of Bhopal.

"Excuse me" he said as he pushed past people trying to find his compartment and his berth. Once settled, he let out a sigh, of relief, This was followed by another sigh, but this one was of frustration let out by Najma, his bratty yet lovely sister. The train started. She pouted.

"Kya hua Tamatar?"

"Bahijaan, Im sooo bored. This is just the beginning of the journey and Im choking of boredom. How am I going to survive this excrutiatingly long sadistic trip?" She breathed out in one go.

Asad looked at her and playfully pulled her cheeks. "I guess you could spend your time counting the strands of hair that have grown since you last cut your hair. Against my wish." He added and ruffled her hair endearingly.

"Bhaijaan, stop teasing me! You have accepted that I look way smarter in my new hairstyle as compared to my previous 'Rapunzel-ly long- hair- look', haven't you? Those long locks were just too much to handle. Just like the irritation Im feeling now at being stuffed into a sickening train to attend the wedding of my 'so- called' relative cousin whom I hardly even know! And most importantly, without any friends of mine!" True. There wasn't even in their compartment. Just the two of them. Or so it seemed. Najma sighed.

"Oh come on my Tamatar, didn't we just have a Mahabharat at home on precisely the same topic? Ammi would have come with us but you are aware that she is ill, aren't you? She would feel terribly bad if we, her children are not present at Rehaan's wedding to compensate for her absence. Besides you don't remember Rehaan because you were a tiny little 2-yr old lemon then before becoming my tomato! Come on Najma shoo away all your grumpiness. Im sure youll enjoy there. Now don't be so frugal and let out a smile or some tickling wouldn't hurt, would it?" Saying so, Asad gently tickled her and poked her nose. Najma burst into giggles making Asad the happiest person.

Both were unaware of a certain someone watching them from the top berth, eyes glistening with unshed tears. "Love of siblings" she choked. "Oh, How I long for it!" Saying so, she dug her face under the pillow drenching it with her stream of tears.

After having dinner- some rotis and vegetable curry prepared and neatly packed by Dilshaad, Asad meticulously packed the remaining of it and kept it on the side table provided. He threw the used plates and cups in a neat stack, being the OCD that he was. Najma gave her Bhaijaan a Will-you-ever-change-look and retired to sleep. Asad tucked Najma in, locked the suitcases, spread the curtains and slopped off in the middle birth. Asad smiled as he heard a half-asleep Najma mutter an almost inaudible "Goodnight Bhaijaan."

Asad himself closed his eyes and and let sleep engulf his senses when he heard suppressed sobs coming from the berth right above his. His heart clenched at the thought of someone crying. Probably a girl by the sounds of it. He desperately wanted to rob the girl of her misery but his mind stopped him. It wasn't right. He coudnt just invade her privacy by hovering over her bed at night. She would misinterpret. So he did what he could do at the moment. Close his eyes tight shut and wait for sleep to evade him. But damn, the wretched devil of sleep wasn't obliging! He could hear her stuttering things between her sniffles.

" Allah, my family was my strength, my support, my happiness, my everything. All of it got snatched from me. I was so young then that I coudn't even understand the true implication of death. I was hoping against hope that they would someday return and re-illumine my world. I clung, with all my might to the last ray of hope only to fall into snares of delusion again. I miss you Ammi, Abbu, Zaid" She let out a flying kiss towards heaven.

"But I know, You are always with me, watching me, blessing me. I will remain strong and always keep your head help up high. I promise." She shut her eyes tightly letting the last tear cascade down her cheek. She wasn't going to cry anymore. She had endured all of it since she was a toddler and now was no different. She would be strong. She closed her eyes and drifted into sleep.

Asad, who undoubtedly had heard her solemn talk felt his heart shatter into a million pieces. He sent a silent heartfelt prayer to Allah to bless her and hoped that the wretched devil of sleep would finally shower himself upon him.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi dear
awesome part
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loved asad n najma convo😊
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absolutely amazing update..
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do they meet and asad realises she is the same.
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Hi there! Im back after quite some time. After witnessing Guls attempt to degrage such a wonder of a show to complete crap, I simply do not have the thrill to write. I wasnt even sure whether I should continue. Anyways, that you people can decide after reading this. I havnt proofread, any mistakes are unintentional.
Hope it matches your expectations.

Chapter 2:

Zoya woke up to a rumbling noise, abruptly disrupting her peaceful slumber. With a jerk she sat upright, rubbing her eyes as her forehead formed creases. Frowning, she tried to locate the source of the noise. Allah Miya, is it an earthquake? Before she could carry her theory forward, she heard it again, erupting from her... err stomach? Great. Trust her stomach to come up with the choiciest of times to voice its complaints. She did not even have any edibles apart from a packet of chips and a can of diet coke. She regretted dismissing her Appis offer of packing paranthas for the journey. And now she was left with just as much to fill one tenth of her growling stomach.

Nevertheless, she started munching her chips, thoughts wandering off to her Appis conversation with her the previous night.

"Zoya, stop watching that stupid match and treat your eyes with something worthwhile! Look here I have brought some pictures of eligible batchlors of Bhopal. Might interest you." said an ecstatic Zeenat shoving a bundle of photos onto Zoya's lap and snatching the remote from her hand.

"Give me the remote back. It's Dhoni, noo Mahendra Singh Dhoni's match! Zoya Farooqui can not afford to miss it! Do you realise Appi, how bad he will feel when I missed his match?"

"Ya Allah! This girl and her obsession with Dhoni! When are you going to show some signs of growing up? You have come off age for marriage! Here, I'm trying to do some serious talk and you go hopping around singing Dhoni's name!" screamed Appi, infuriated.

"Hmmm... Six! Dhinka chika.." Zoya jumped on the sofa and did her signature victory dance but stopped immediately when Zeenat shot her one of her signature glares. Zoya cowelled under her gaze and risked a meek smile at her. All she got in return was her Appi's back which was now faced towards Zoya exuding anger as if she had eyes behind too.

Zoya got down, knelt down beside Zeenat's knees and began reasoning "Appi, you know my reason of being here. I will not trap myself into a commitment I will not be able to wholeheartedly fulfill when my past constantly distracts and daunts me.I want to finish my quests before I step into something as crucial as marriage." Her eyes were soft and pleading for understanding.
Appi nodded. Ofcourse she understood. zoya was her little baby sister and she wished for nothing but her happiness.

"And Appi, why are you so hellbent on sending me away? Oh, I get it. You want me out so that you can have the TV all to yourself and enjoys your nonsensical serials, don't you?" She asked with a frown.
Zeenat just pulled her cheeks and mumbled, "Precisely that."

Zoya was jolted back to reality when the train jerked a liitle too forcefully and her packet of chips went flying down onto the person sleeping below.
"Now I have lost whatever little I had, to eat too" she muttered, exasperated.

There, Asad felt a shower of something falling on him, bang of his face. He sniffed at it and it smelt salty.. Chips? Now where the hell did that come from? He peeked upward and saw some one holding a packet in hand and muttering.

He got up to give the person a piece of his mind. Exactly at the same time, Zoya hopped down to the floor from her bed to brush off the flakes of chip sprawled across her lap. She stumbled a little as she stepped on her own foot losing her balance. A hand shot up and caught her upper arm to steady her.

She impulsively looked backwards to see who the person was and immediately regretted it. She was looking into the honey brown eyes of a very handsome man who was staring right back at her intently. She couldn't help but run her gaze over his ruffled hair, stubbled cheek and chiseled jaw. A greek God. She mentally exclaimed.

"Excuse me? Did you say something?" Shit. She must have said the last part out loud.

"Err.. no. Actually I was saying that G..god is everywhere. Near the window, beneath the seat, on the ceiling, in the tiffin box..."She tried covering up, racking her brains with some believable excuse but her mind was just too boggled with his delightful cologne. Words just refused to come out of her mouth.

"Could you please shut that gob of yours? I highly doubt whether you put it to some good use apart from munching chips like a goat and blabbering irrelevant nonsense." He looked at her as her expression changed from confusion to a frown and finally rested on anger. He looked at her forehead convolute into creases, her nose scrunched up, her beautiful hazel eyes which were currently shooting daggers at him and her supple pink lips as she opened her mouth to retort. Beautiful.

"Excuse me? Who do you think you are? If you lack the decency to speak, then you should keep your mouth shut. And yeah, neither what I speak, nor what I eat should be any of your business." She gave him back. His good looks were no compensation for his arrogance, she decided.

"Technically, it shouldn't be any of my bussiness unless I wake up to an endless shower of chips falling straight on my face breaking my priceless sleep! Who in the world eats chips at two in the night? Oh yeah, I forgot. Fools like you. Why am I not surprised." he replied smirking as her brows furrrowed at his mention of 'fools'.

He called her a fool. Zoya Farooqui was not a fool. She was going to apologize to him but after his curt words she flushed all her intentions down the gutter. She would not give his already inflated ego a boost.
"Yeah right. I'm a fool to argue with a person who apparently has his brain infected with fungus and who does not know to talk. " She spat back.

"Sounds a wee bit funny coming from your mouth, doesn't it? Agreed on the fool part by the way." he replied with equal spite.

With a glare and a hmph, both retired to bed and hoped to never have to face each other again.
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Phew! Done. Now you can shower your chips, eggs, tomatoes,, whatever on me. But really onions are the best! I deserve it for writing so much you know.. I am the owner of a lazy bum which refuses to work (; Please like and comment. Honestly, they mean a hell lot to me and motivate me to continue. Thanks for reading!

Love,
Starshina.
Edited by Starshina - 12 years ago

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