FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

that was lovely update..

not only zoya, even I was surprised ''asad'' ate the apple like that..😆

and that was after too much of thinking.. hmm.. reasonable.. haha..

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

HAPPY ...TOP OF D WORLD...YIPEEE...NW JST LET ME KNW..DID ASAD RETURN THESES SOFT KISSES BACK TO ZOYA...😃

PARI

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

well that was a sweet update

amazing job btw,

and yaayy they ate the apple👏

you make the simple task of eating an apple so much fun and interesting to say the least

apple eating will no longer be the same for me as i'll always think of this when i see an apple

you've successfully corrupted the process for me

thanks soo much😊😉

and like seriously i need better timing when reading your updates

i read the thing and then here i am commenting and what does my aunt do???

she walks in with a bag of apples and says she bought me these😳

i'm currently red in the face and gaping at the bag and my computer screen

and getting weird looks from my family

embarrassing much😳😳

first falling off the bed and now this

i'm afraid to read your other updates

i'll be brave though😆

can't wait to see what happens next

wonder how Asad will react

he seems a lil tipsy himself😉

continue soon😊

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Wow..awesum...finlyy..nw waitng to knw d aftr effct of apple...

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

awww...the update was so awww 😛 update sooonnn!!!

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Wowww...this was the most awaited update of the millenium...now the aftereffects of the Adam Apple...sorry Tanveer Apple...

Thnx to Tanveer for injecting the apple...

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
What a lovely and sweet sa update...Only you can make as simple a task as eating an apple so interesting and fun...zoya is lying on top of asad and all she thinks about is eating that apple😆
so mr.OCD finally ate the apple by biting into it😆nd zoya hugged awwwand she kissed him all over his face☺️...can't wait to see how asad reacts to this and how embarrassed will zoya feel wen she realizes what she has actually done...and wen will the drug show its affect😉
Continue soon...can't wait for the next part😊

Haha the drug has already shown effect! Slurred speech, heavy head etc. Oops maybe I wasn't clear enough haha. But anyway glad you liked this part (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
they ate the apple 😉..yup very happy for now..but why did u stop there???

Just to keep you at the edge of your seat :p

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: webuser7
You are plain evil! 😡 Why did you stop there? I have to wait a whole day to know what happens next!! Grumble! Grumble! 😆 Kidding!

So, finally the drugged apple has been eaten and showing its effects on our very own Adam and Eve, who are incidentally home alone. Oh boy! Wonder what happens next. Knowing them and you, they will of course stop soon! (change that script now?!) Really looking forward to seeing how they handle their embarrassment when they regain their senses. 😃

👏 👏 👏 👏

And one 🤗 to make up for the 😡!!

Hahaha there are some things I won't change even if you guess it :p Glad you liked this part!! (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Hey...I have just completed reading everything from your index...Simply superb...👏 I love the way you describe all the asad and zoya scenes, It's mindblowing👍🏼 Funny😆Romantic...

Can't wait for your next update...

You read everything?? Hahaha thank you, that's really kind of you to say (: Glad to have provided entertainment haha.