FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 54

Originally posted by: stereohearts200

I loved the update! The hug was so cute! So they ate the apple? Right now, more than wanting to read abt what happens between asya, I wanna know how tanveer reacts. When u get to that make sure u make her angry to a point that her lungs start popping out of her mouth. Plz continue soon!

Tanveer's reaction will be soon too, don't you worry (: For now, enjoy disoriented Asad and Zoya :p

you are a very talented writer...great work

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

Oh my god!! BNHH part 2?? 😆 They're almost drunk right? Amazing update!! 👏👏👏 Loved every bit!! Please continue soonish 😊

Yeah they are kind of drunk-ish I guess, without the alcohol :p Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA

and finally they ate the apple...😆

is the apple poisoned or drugged...?

i wish it to be drugged...then we can see them have a crazy night...😉😆

conti soon

It's drugged!! No poison haha I don't want people dying :p

Originally posted by: braich_gal

nooo...why did you stoppp?!?!?!?!?!! aagey kya hua...are they...will they...😲.."pulling my hair* .OMG!!!!!

Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan shared an apple!!!! wow!!!!! omg omg omg...

Hahaha aagey kya hoga?? Aap hi bataye ab (:

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

HAPPY ...TOP OF D WORLD...YIPEEE...NW JST LET ME KNW..DID ASAD RETURN THESES SOFT KISSES BACK TO ZOYA...😃

PARI

To find out if he returned the kisses, stay tuned (:

Originally posted by: amri123

well that was a sweet update

amazing job btw,

and yaayy they ate the apple👏

you make the simple task of eating an apple so much fun and interesting to say the least

apple eating will no longer be the same for me as i'll always think of this when i see an apple

you've successfully corrupted the process for me

thanks soo much😊😉

and like seriously i need better timing when reading your updates

i read the thing and then here i am commenting and what does my aunt do???

she walks in with a bag of apples and says she bought me these😳

i'm currently red in the face and gaping at the bag and my computer screen

and getting weird looks from my family

embarrassing much😳😳

first falling off the bed and now this

i'm afraid to read your other updates

i'll be brave though😆

can't wait to see what happens next

wonder how Asad will react

he seems a lil tipsy himself😉

continue soon😊

Hahaha oh my goodness!! First your mom, then your aunt! The timing truly is impeccable :p I hope you enjoy eating the apples your aunt bought (:

Finally the apple has been eaten

Wow

Awesome work

👏

Originally posted by: goingreen

Hahaha oh my goodness!! First your mom, then your aunt! The timing truly is impeccable :p I hope you enjoy eating the apples your aunt bought (:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! Thats all i can say!