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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: TaybaJaffar

u r a grt story writer yr...sch an intrstng story reallly!!!!!!!!!



thankyou madhu 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
loved it..superb..pls continue & if possible pm me

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey tis is really superb...totally luv it...read it all in one go...
everyone must be so shack n the way she spoke to them is same as zoya...
wonder hw will all of them react to tis...
please continue soon n plase pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
sorry for little late

Part 5:-

they all came to ali's home with zarina, zarina told kabir chacha (servent) to show them their room, no one knows about tanveer's presence so najma and tanveer were sharing the room, the four were in asad's room, all were losted in their thoughts and were confused trying to unnderstand that what they just saw, whole day had passed but they did'nt came out from the room, zaara was upset thinking that they must be very angry while ali and zarina were making fun of it.

in ali's room:-
ali and zarina were laughing and zara was sad
zara:-kya abu, ap bhe mera mazak ura raha hun.
ali:-ara beta mai, ali stopped and start taking hard breaths and start searching his pump zara and zarina he was an asthma patient...after taking pump
ali:-han to mein yeh keh raha tha k mai tumhara mazak nahe ura raha, mai to bus ye soch kai has raha hun k jo kuch bhe tumne kaha uska un par inta gehra asar hua hai k wo abhe tak apne room se bahar he nahe aye.
zarina:-han abu, apko to abhe pata he nahe hai k baji kitna ziada hi keh diya tha wo sub has bhe raha tha or shayad gussa bhe, or sab se ziada to asad bhaijan
ali:-aesa kiya keh diya zaara na asad k bara mein???
zarina:-kiya kaha, ye pocha k kiya nahe kaha. uff ALLAH mjhe to yad karke bhe hase ate hai.
zaara(wispered):-zarina agar tumne ek alfaz or kaha to mai tumhare shaadi ek saal pospond kardunge.
zarina making an 'o' shape
zarina:-ye to galat baat hai,woha itne batain apne ki or saza mai bukhtu. zarina start crying like a child while ali and zaara laugh, zaara smile disappeared suddenly and she became serious
zaara:-acha abu kya dilshaad phoppi ko pata hai ek saal pehle wala hadsa k bara mein.
ali(tensdly):-nahe, or huma usse kuch batana bhe nahe hai.
zaara:-par kyun abu?
ali:-dekho zaara delhi mai humare srf ek hi rishtadar hai or wo hai mera chota bhai sattar, srf usse us hadsa k bara mai malom hai, or kise ko nahe, or huma kisi ko batana bhe nahe, to tum dihan rakhna k dilshaad k samna koi aese waise baat na ho.
zaara:-abu mai ye to nahe jante k apki yeh baat chupane ki kya waja hai k ek saal pehle ek accident mai mere yadasht chale gaye the or mjhe apne pichle zindagi k bara mai kuch yad nahe, lakin phir agar ap kehte hain to mai ise ek raaz hi rakhunge.
ali:-ye hue mere beti wale baat.
ali hugged zara, zarina get jealous
zarina:-mjhe abhe se dekh raha hai k mere america jana k bad yahan kise ko mere yaad nahe ayege, mai akele hojaonge.
zaara:-aese bat nahe hai zarina, come let me give you a hug.
the three hugged, after that.
ali to zaara:-acha ab bht dair hochuke hai tum ek kaam karo, jakar unse maafi manglo or unhe khana k liye bula lo.
zara:-mai...nahe agar unke bete nai mjhe punch mara to.
zarina:-kiya api, ap unse dar rahe hain
zaara(confidently):-nahe nahe, zara ali kise se nahe darte.
zarina:-very good, jaldi jaen or unhe bula lain.
zaara nodded and left, ali was depressed
zarina:-kiya soch raha hai abu.
ali:-yahe k jab ise sach ka pata chala ga to kya hoga.
zarina:-aesa kuch nahe hoga, ap befikar raha.

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in asad's room:-
najma starts walking here and there,
najma:-ami mujhe to yakeen hi nahe a raha...kiya humne jo dekha wo sach tha, zoya to zinda hain.
tanveer:-lakin wo to keh rahe the k wo zaara hain.
dilshaad:-han mai bhe yahe soch rahe hun k agar wo zoya the to wo aesa kyun bat kar rhe the jaisa wo humse pehli bar milna wali hai.
asad:-ami mjhe to kuch samajh nahe a raha.
najma:-samajh to kise ko bhe nahe a raha hai bhaijan, kahen aesa to nahe k jo kuch bhe ek saal pehle hua usk bad zoya delhi agaye or ek naye pehchan banali.
dilshaad:-aese kaise hosakta hain najma, mai ali bhaijan ki 2 betiyan hain, bare zaara or chote zarina.
tanveer:-akhir baat kiya hai, ye zoya hai ya uska jaise dikhna wali koi larki.
dilshaad:-dekho mai...she stopped when someone knocked on the door.
dilshaad:-kon hai?
zaara:-phoppi mai hun zaara, kya mai andar a sakte hun.
all hearts beat increases.
dilshaad:-han ajao.
zaara came inside and move towards dilshaad, she was taking small steps and was depressed, she came and stand infront dilshaad, while the other were watching this shockly
zaara:-umm wo, darasal mai...nahe mjhe kuch kehna...matlab apse baat karne the.
dilshaad:-han kaho beta
zaara:-wo mai, mjhe sorry kehna tha.
najma wispered in tanveer ears:-mjhe pora yakeen hai k ye zoya hi hain
dilshaad:-kis lliye.
zaara:-wo aj shop mai maina jo kaha, mai wo kehna nahe chahte the par mjhe pata nahe tha k ap mere piche khara hain. mai apka ana se bht excited the, abu hamesha kehte...she paused
zaara(to herself):-ara nahe agar maine aesa kaha to inhe shak hoga.
zaara:-mera matlab hai k ap bht ache hain, or ye abu bhe kehte hain or mjhe yaad hai k ami ki maut apna na mjhe or zarina ko kitna sambhala tha, or itne saalon bad apse milne wali the mai to bht khush the to bus.
dilshaad(to herself):-nahe ye zoya nahe, kyun k agar hote to ise pata nahe hota k bhabhi ki maut par maine hi inko sambhala, jo bhe hai, lakin abhe mai iske samna ye zahir nahe karsakte k ye mere zoya hai
dilshaad:-koi bat nahe, maina ya inmai se kise na bhe bura nahe mana.
zoya(smiling):-sach, ye to bht ache baat bataye apne, abu or zarina to mjhe aesa he dara raha tha, apto waqai bht ziada he ache hain, waise agar ainda bhe mai apko kuch kahun to mind mat karyega mai to aesa batain roz karte hun, abu or zarina ko to adaat hai. waisa mai apko khana k liye bhe bulana aye the maine apke liye special khana banaya hai waisa to kabir chacha banata hain khana lakin aj maina banaya hai, ap jaldi se ajaen mai khana lagate hun.
zaara left but the four were still confused, dilshaad to asad,najma ad tanveer.
dilshaad:-hum abhe kuch nahe keh sakte k ye zoya hai ya zaara, huma sabar karna hoga, lakin iske baton se to yun lag raha tha k ye zaara he hai.
najma:-matlab ami, hum zoya se is tarah bat karain jaise hum inse abhe he mila hain?
dilshaad:-han, or zoya nahe zaara.
the three nodded.
dilshaad:-ab huma bahar chalna chahie, wo sab humara intezar kar raha hain

precap:-zarina was running after zaara and zaara bumped into asad.

~~finish~~

maybe you will find it little boring but still plz give ur feedback.
😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Wow this is getting interesting... can you add little bit english word more.. coz i cant read hindi that much sorry!!! thanks 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Linsie

Wow this is getting interesting... can you add little bit english word more.. coz i cant read hindi that much sorry!!! thanks 🤗


ya i will, INSHALLAH😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I was thinking about this one n you updated...
Everyone is confused whether it is Zoya or Zara... when will Asad know it's his Zoya???
Precap seems interesting... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice
thanx for pm
do pm me for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
really nice one.. can't wait for next update... thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Wow..amazing story..loved this concept...can't wait to Find out how this story unfolds all the secrets.

Please post soon. 😊

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