AsYa SS: The Bitter Truth: Epilogue Pg. 33! - Page 2

Awesome. Cant wait for Tanveer to get exposed in the show too. In the meantime, your story provided us the much needed relief! You go girl!! Kick Tanveer's ass right out of AsYa's life! Get our bubbly Zoya back!!

Originally posted by: -Jazzy-

"Should I continue?" 😆🤣😆 You crack me up, Monica! I don't mean to be Captain Obvious or anything, but yes please, continue PRONTO!

As for part one, It was beautiful! The first scene with Asad imagining Zoya everywhere... are you a QH writer in disguise? Because that definitely sounded like an episode that was never aired.

Also, kudos to you for exposing the Billi! Asad needs to know the truth but it can't happen soon enough on the show so one of your writing is the next best thing. 😳 The relief the coursed through him after finding out was simply perfect in its description. It was definitely a light at the end of the tunnel for the broken man. Poor guy definitely needs the burden to be lifted off of his shoulders.

And what can I say about the stylistic elements? Sometimes when I am reading your pieces, I don't know whether to focus on the intricately threaded story or the beautiful writing style. I loved how you varied sentence lengths. It really adds a dramatic effect.

As for the last bit, I feel like Mangalpur Part 2 is right around the corner, and I AM THRILLED.

Don't leave us hanging for too long. 😳

Love,

Jazzy

P.S.: I feel like I didn't say this enough times: You are a gifted writer.

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

that was totally amazing👏

you should most definitely continue this

i loved it

glad that Asad now knows Tanveer's true face

i can't wait to see what he does to find Zoya and win her back, and i hope she stays safe until then

loved the little dreams and moments Asad thought up

especially the towel one😳☺️

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: webuser7

Awesome. Cant wait for Tanveer to get exposed in the show too. In the meantime, your story provided us the much needed relief! You go girl!! Kick Tanveer's ass right out of AsYa's life! Get our bubbly Zoya back!!

its so beautiful...you have potrayed emotions so well...falshbacks were heart wrenching..😭..loved it to the core..you write really well..👏continue😃

Originally posted by: sujataraje

its so beautiful...you have potrayed emotions so well...falshbacks were heart wrenching..😭..loved it to the core..you write really well..👏continue😃

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww Jazzy! I'm so happy you commented instead of PMing for once 😆 (But I LOVE your PM's 😊)

You my dear have thoroughly underestimated how much I doubt my own skills. Especially since I'm still learning. But I love you for the boost of confidence you give me with all your mindblowingly flattering words

Haha I'm not a QH writer, I think I'd need help if I was. BUT it was something I wished they'd done JUST SLIGHTLY differently. Just another version. Glad you liked it 😉 Haha I'll try to update sooonish. School's starting tomorrow though, so we shall see. No promises. But I can promise that the next update of this will indeed be Asyalicious and it'll be Zoya's turn to imagine her Mr. Khan. 😳

Originally posted by: -Jazzy-

It was just one of those days where I had a computer handy and school is out so I am a free bird. But don't get too happy, I'll still be sending you the Part 2 of the PM. I am shooting for tonight, so let's see how that turns out.

You shouldn't have any reason to. Well, if learning incorporates you posting many more AsYa fan fictions, short stories, and one shots, then I am all for you learning a LOT more.

That doesn't sound like too much fun. Do it whenever you are free. 😊 AsYalicious sounds perfect!

I'll be waiting for a PM. 😳

pls continue soon and pm me if possible... seems like u r planning to give us our mangalpuri asad in the next update

It's some thing I really wanna watch in show but I know it's not possible
They ' d extend this more n more. For them billi is immortal , victory is
Second name of that vixen. Asad is her prey nd she is not going to
Set him free soon.
Asad nd his helplessness always make me cry but here he has some brain.
His imagination was so pure nd serene that it break my heart nd shattered
Again.
Kudos. Plz continue soon.