AsYa SS: The Bitter Truth: Epilogue Pg. 33!

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
awesome !!!
please continue soon ...

kiki

Thaaank you 😳 Will doo

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
This is GREAT! JUST GREAT! Her thinking of him 😛, his seeing her everywhere 😃, but the best part him finding out about her! 👏 OMG, aisa agar show mein hota toh? I wish! Gosh dude, this was so good, please continue, and thanks for the PM and do PM me when you update 😛

AWW THANK YOU!! I'm so glad you liked it 😃 Kash, kash show mein aisa ho.. maybe in Ajmer? 😛 Will dooo

Originally posted by: shanshzza
alright...
U write such a wonderful piece and u r asking if u shud continue???😡
Of course u should continue and that too really soon... plzzz 🤗🤗
waiting eagerly

Hahaha I'm a little insecure about my writing 😆 But will dooo so glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: kandygrover
I cried for the most part, but had the biggest smile when asad found out. Pppllleeeaaassseee continue.

AWW I didn't mean to make you cry. But I'm flattered that my words brought you to tears 😳😳😳 AND I'm glad you smiled at him finding out 😃 Will dooo

Originally posted by: awesome
Continue! This is awesome!

Thank youuu!😳 Wil doo

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
wow.i loved it..specially the way asad imagining zoya everywhere...
continue soon

Oishi! Finally I have a comment by KSG's biggest fan 😆 Gonna screencap this and frame it (such a fangirl 😆) Will dooo 😛

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
continue plz

Will dooo 😳

Originally posted by: jazzmyn
the beginning part with Asad was so bittersweet! I knew it was all his imagination and so did Asad but it felt so real the way u described it. and why is it that whenever the villain randomly talks to themself and blurt out their plan, no one's around to listen? oh well indian drama logic wohee jaane 😉
overall loved it! please do continue soon! 😊

Aww you're so sweet! I love how you went through every part in your comment 😳 I know right! It's so unrealistic! But then they wouldn't be able to make the leads suffer 😭 But then that's why we have the forummm, right? To make our versions and our dreams of how things should come alive

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

'Should I continue?'

REALLY?! That's what you're asking? REALLY? Do you know what? I kept scrolling down in desperate hope that there was an extra part and that I'd missed it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAASE continue! 😃

I simply love the way you write. I could actually visualise all that you wrote right in front of my eyes. I could imagine Asad crying for Zoya, Zoya's pain, and Asad's anger ultimately.

Hayye, main marr jaawaannn! I TOTALLY want to see this in the show too! The Tanveer rambling and Asad having heard her. Distant dream hai, but one can hope right?😆

You're a brilliant author! 😳

Kudos!

-Raina

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

That was just beautiful. I'm just so glad you joined this forum and started writing. I remember from your first one shot you wrote to FFs to 2-3 shot to other OS's you have been just amazing and you're just getting better and better with every single one of 'em. This was another beautiful piece of writing by you. So glad Asad got to know wh**e's true intentions. Now just start counting your breaths bitch because I'm dead sure there an't many left! Can't wait to read more. Continue soon and you should never even ask this. You know you have to;)

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs
'Should I continue?'

REALLY?! That's what you're asking? REALLY? Do you know what? I kept scrolling down in desperate hope that there was an extra part and that I'd missed it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAASE continue! 😃

I simply love the way you write. I could actually visualise all that you wrote right in front of my eyes. I could imagine Asad crying for Zoya, Zoya's pain, and Asad's anger ultimately.

Hayye, main marr jaawaannn! I TOTALLY want to see this in the show too! The Tanveer rambling and Asad having heard her. Distant dream hai, but one can hope right?😆

You're a brilliant author! 😳
Kudos!
-Raina

AWWW You're a SWEETHEART! THANK YOU 😃 I shall DEFINITELY PM you 😉

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
That was just beautiful. I'm just so glad you joined this forum and started writing. I remember from your first one shot you wrote to FFs to 2-3 shot to other OS's you have been just amazing and you're just getting better and better with every single one of 'em. This was another beautiful piece of writing by you. So glad Asad got to know wh**e's true intentions. Now just start counting your breaths bitch because I'm dead sure there an't many left! Can't wait to read more. Continue soon and you should never even ask this. You know you have to;)

Kiran I'm seriously gonna cry *sniffs* You're soo sweet! Thank you so much. I still remember you were one of the first people who commented on my work. And I'm so happy you think I'm getting better. Such a huge compliment 😳

I shall continue soon 😃

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princess84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

absolutely amazing do continue soon...can't wait to read more

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malini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

do continue

and pm me

awesome long update

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Maham

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oh how I wish something like this would actually happen in the show! But thank you so much for making this happen for all of use who have been waiting for Tanveer's pardafash for days...and honestly this is the ONLY way I see Asad running after Zoya and confessing to her. He needs to know that he is innocent before he can go win back Zoya, because right now he is drowning in self loathing and guilt. There is no way he'll be able to fight for her if he doesn't know that he has been framed by that witch!

Anyways, it's beautifully written and I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon :)

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Allbut1
Oh how I wish something like this would actually happen in the show! But thank you so much for making this happen for all of use who have been waiting for Tanveer's pardafash for days...and honestly this is the ONLY way I see Asad running after Zoya and confessing to her. He needs to know that he is innocent before he can go win back Zoya, because right now he is drowning in self loathing and guilt. There is no way he'll be able to fight for her if he doesn't know that he has been framed by that witch!

Anyways, it's beautifully written and I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon :)

I agree. But I'm wondering if that's the case in Ajmer. Or if he just decides that he needs to tell her his feelings? And then decide to leave her life? 😭 But thank you soo much I'm really glad you liked it 😃😃