Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yay, finally! I am eagerly waiting to hear your views on the latest update. I was wondering where you were. You must have been busy.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Klondy



Yay, finally! I am eagerly waiting to hear your views on the latest update. I was wondering where you were. You must have been busy.


I was also kind of stucked in my life...but the last part of the last latest update..kept me reminding..ki I have to give my views on this one...so yeah was busy...but will reply this in a day...
because I will read this part again..
And BTW i was following your other thread meanwhile...and was reading few chapts from their itself.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dixiej...😊

Hope you had been fine...😳, I see you had been li'l busy these days on the forum with reposting the whole story here on I.F for us readers...and I seriously seriously applaud👏 and thank you 👍🏼for this...😊
I also apologize for my late comment because of some things in life I just avoided commenting here...so that on a free day I can do this with free mind..
so here I am with my rant...😳




But where is the rest of the rant? I just read the last part.
And please don't apologize for being late. I'm just glad to hear from my favorite readers!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Klondy





But where is the rest of the rant? I just read the last part.
And please don't apologize for being late. I'm just glad to hear from my favorite readers!


Internet and Sisters college problem..so taking time..reading update..everytime i right a rant..so bear with me..only last is left...
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Posted: 10 years ago

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But where is the rest of the rant? I just read the last part.
And please don't apologize for being late. I'm just glad to hear from my favorite readers!

Internet and Sisters college problem..so taking time..reading update..everytime i right a rant..so bear with me..only last is left...

No problem. Hope everything goes well and your sister's college issues work out great. Take your time.

Oh and Ayatollah is the super conservative religious leader of Iran!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello Dixiej...😊
Well here I am a little early than last time..because I just got relieved for today..so thought of completing this before I get busy again...😳
I have missed a spot on last one...will try and fill that.😛
So I would start now..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
First part.. :
So Zaid was born just few days before his father birthday...it reminded me of my own B'day where I am MAR 7 born where as my Father was born on 7 FEB...😊
YESss!!!!!!!! it is the best B'day gift for Asad which he can ever receive after so many years....
Like any other baby ...Our ASYA's super baby also possess some of his both his parents TRAITS...wouldn't that be interesting to see...how the blend of both these beautiful and totally contrasting yet so in love couple's child would grow upto bee...😉😊
I am amused also ki Zaid is as punctual as his father..keeping minutes about his schedule and also a helper like his mother...BRAVO👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Second part :
Dilshaad's POV as always enlightens us with many many things ...and as always here also she was overjoyed that yes finally her son can enjoy his own birth and maybe the scars of one birthday are healing by the birth of her grandson...😊
Again a distant flashback of Asad's childhood was intriguing...I always find that interesting to read,..
And I guess Asad had also realized that he no longer need to hold grudge for anything which was over ...so he is moving on..and the phirni part is the start he needed again..he has started before only..but now he really will change...FATHERHOOD will change him..😉
And yes I didn't see that video if the cast celebrating KSG's b'day before...😕
I am glad you showed us Zaid's POV also...because it is always a mystery what a baby thinks...while everybody are busy hovering over him...😆
THAT WHOLE PART WAS SPECIAL...DESCRPTION OF A BABY HOW HE RECONIZES HIS PARENTS IS A TRULY A DIFFERENT THING TO READ...👏⭐️👏⭐️👏...
And I hope we get more such scenes as in more...in next updates also...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Third part :

So the part of Omar and Najma with the baby was cute and a lighter scene in the update...like this part provided all the comic relief to us..😆...even the part with Ayaan also...😆😆
ZAK..👍🏼..nice initials for the champ here...😊
Then the Dobby and Baby's meeting was kind of intense...like I was imagining this all in slow motion that Dobby is sniffing the baby and his fate was getting decided their...but glad that he passed this stage...👏..aahir training bhi toh sahi mili hai ussey
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fourth part :
Well I am personally also believe as how Asad did about not letting Zoya go to her fathers house for delivery...and that even my family follows..
AsYa's part with baby was sooo soo cute and endearing that it will always be a happy dream for many of us ASYA fans which U have fulfilled J*
And they moments they are enjoying and experiencing of parenthood for the first times is always precious and priceless ...😳
Then the part of HIJRAS was also again a social initiative written by you...applauds for U on that..⭐️👏
I guess Razia's redemption is getting over in a way that even the baby also have accepted her...in a way this is baby's indication and ick that forget what all happened before him...the future is here...😉

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