Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 15

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dixiej...
Well I won't tell sorry yaa anything else...in defence of my lateness in commenting...but yes...something or the other got me stucked...but will comment on both last two chapts..in a day...
HOpe you had been doing well..

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Chapt : 15

This chapt started off with Asad's crankiness and Zoya's tensions...not much from Zoya's side though but yes Asad was the most crankiest i have seen in days as in like updates...

I mean i was kind of shocked about what Asad was actually thinking ...it was funny in a way but yes i guess weird stuff...

But glad that as always...AsYa😳 , talked it out...that is a wise and beautiful thing in a relationship...if the spouses are ready to share whatever they have been hovering around then the matter could be discussed and solved easily without any glitches and drama...😆

Originally posted by: MayurChan

THE BABY PART :

I am actually enjoying reading baby part in your update now J.D😊

Actually the thing is we have seen i mean i have seen atleast that much babies so i can easily say and gloat that i have a minimum experience of babysitting..

About the names a Baby attracts till he is officially given a name are funny yet adorable at times...i loved the name gilu😆...so in with their activities...😆😆

As i have mentioned before , Zaid is going to be pampered like no one has been pampered ever in anywhere atleast to my knowledge...

And the Daadis' and Naani's are just a start with their duas , kaajal and love...😳

I liked Zaid's first meeting with her Naani zainub...a touching moment where a infant greeted her deceased grandmother...but i was wondering can we really take a baby to a graveyard that early

Zoya's thinking that her son said bye to her mother was Aww..moment...and you mentioning Asad as her only believer was even cuter..😃

Originally posted by: MayurChan

CONTD :

So the next part or the rest of the update comprised of AsYa's😳 more of Asad's wish fullfillment...but yes these are ASYA i mean Asad and Zoya...they didn't had anything that easily yaa in normal circumstances and in a normal way...

Their chase right throughtout the party was funny...and kind of refreshed some good memories of their rutho and manao times...😊

Ayaan kitna bhi bada hoo jaye he will still be a BANDAR😆

I liked this part very much...

Though AsYa managed to sneak out of SM while Asad forced to play A BAD A$$😆...THIS NIGHT IS STILL NOT OVER YET.

Very lovely and well written part...⭐️👏

Originally posted by: MayurChan

CHAPT 116

PART 1

Well after reading the first part , somewhere i also felt pity for Asad that really...the whole universe was conspiring against him...😆...i mean how much he has to bourne alone...like from handling Ayaan in office then manofying Zoya...uske baad he had to be the bad police and has to rescue himself and his SUPERWOMAN wife KUM SUPERmomma now...to have some moments witH Zoya...but again a flat tire , bunch of hooligans and lots off tensions...Abb hamey bolna chahaiyeh BECAHARA ASAD...😆...

He truly is a SUPERMAN...👍🏼

I kind of can relate to what all you showed in that scene...the midnight idiots rides...but you have managed that all well...and Asad also got a chance to vent out his alll fueled up anger..😆

And It also felt funny while reading about Ayaan's monologue and Razia's restlessness.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

PART 2

Rest the baby part of AsYa...was were at ease and wonderful to read...

I mean i can see that how content , blessed and satisfied they are being parents...i know all the other stuff is just the pros and cons you have by being a parent but this .

And finally the alone time they wanted was here and all the hard works and conspiracies were proved wrong...and they were untied again...satisfyingly sated also...for the time being i guess..

Well , the issue at hand...Shireen rejecting the proposal of Nuzzhat and Faiz...after lots of chui mui their...she has to put her foot down at the wrong time...well being a mother i can understand what must be going through her mind...and also Nikhat's plight in all this also...but somewhere every Parent has to let their daughters go someday...how far they may be...😕

Nuzzhat and Faiz's conversation was funny...i mean they really are also very different form of couple from the rest of the couples in the story...they had a diff start , their courtship period was dif...and that is really good and wonderful to read about..