OS: Private Dance - Page 4

tis is really beautifully...the dance was awesome...

It was superb

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Ohh dis was so sweet! u r sad cox ur ff ended, so am I, y don't u plan on writing another ff AsYa, atleast we'll hav sth to look forward to, until we have AsYa together in QH.

do consider.

Love.

Thank you!! (: I am in the process of planning out the storyline haha let's see if it works out (:

Originally posted by: iaddiction

OMG☺️

loved it to the core!

you're an amazinggg writer! Completely made up for the void mangalpur left us. You need to write more!!!

If only I could spend all of my time writing stuff like this, I totally would :p Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

Hayye main marr jaawan! 😃

This was SO amazing. I absolutely loved the way you incorporated the Zoya talking and Asad ignoring her steadily and then, making up for everything by being so damn passionate. 😳 Aww. And I totally love the song and love the way you've described the dance. Kudos!

-Raina

Hi Raina (: Thank you!! (: Yeah I mean Asad is like that right, kind of clueless at times :p But when he does finally get a clue, boy does he follow through hahaha. Glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: stereohearts200

Ok, I've been surfing the forum all morning and afternoon and I came across this os so many times, but I kept ignoring it. After a while I noticed ur username in the the topic starter column and when I looked at the name of the topic, my eyes nearly popped out of my sockets. I'd been ignoring this os all the while not knowing u were the one who wrote it and then i came running here in usain bolt speed.Needless to say how awesome this os was. I loved it!😃

Hahaha! Hota hai, I also sometimes realize at long last that I should've opened some topics on the forum which I'd been blatantly ignoring before :p Anyway glad you finally opened it and liked it as well!! (:

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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

waoo..when i click on like button ..i become century...so congrats 4 100 likes 4 this OS gud one..really nice...we all r majboor wd adat of asay love..thnks 4 d pm dear

pari

Hello!! Thank you (: So glad to see that the OS is so well-liked (:

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha alright I shall send PMs now then! It hardly ever strikes me to do that :p Glad you liked it!!