OS: Private Dance - Page 5

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i know you don't send pms

but you can once in a while

atleast when you write something new

updates are easy to catch up

but new writings aren't

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

that was beautiful

i absolutely loved it

great job

and i love that song

nice choice😊

Originally posted by: mochhug

Res!

On my phone! Will unres once i'm home tomorrow!

Home!

First of all THANK YOU! I was already getting withdrawals from the ending of Mangalpur Madness 😆

On to the OS.

I LOVED how Asad was non chalantly ignoring Zoya. It really showed how they've been together for enough time for him to be used to her tantrums LOL.

I had a feeling he'd do another stunt like the Teri Meri scene (title, go figure right 😆) BUT I had NO IDEA he would SING!? And that too JAANE KYUN!? That just made the whole scene sooo much better. GOD I can't wait until the day we see this Asad on the screen, romancing Zoya, sweeping her off her feet, without having to hide what he feels and no ill feelings. Just pure bliss. You've made me dream 😃

Please please please PM me if you happen to grace us with another OS (not that you don't already 😆)

Originally posted by: kohli4ever

aww. amazing OS! 😳

Asad and Zoya married! 😃 and having private dances... 😳

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha I feel so much pressure after Mangalpur Madness, so I'm really going to plan out my next long story before starting it :p Anyway glad you liked this OS in the meantime hahaha. I think it's really sexy when a hot guy sings, hence my imagination led me to write this :p And yes I will PM you should I come up with something else haha, your comments are always my favourite (: