We Are Finally Together- A poetic Drabble

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Qubool Hai Poem ( on separation of Asad and Zoya ) :

Zoya : When I was with you
My feelings were true
But when I saw her
with you
You left me with many clues
That you were not mine
And I was not yours
I felt I was cheated and I broke into tears
Cuz losing you was my only fear...
And now I'm alone here
Cuz you left me wid nothing more than a broken heart and tears
I was trying to forget you
But it's not easy as I still love you !!

Asad : Baby where are you ??
I know I broke your heart

I see you everywhere
But then I realized, you were not there

Baby I love you,
I want you here...
But do you still care ?

I saw you, But can't believe
Cuz you're not the girl who loved to live
You talk rarely,
But I remember how you used to fight with me darely,
You walk just to reach,
I remember how you used to argue on the streets...
Baby just give me a chance'
I want to bring back the girl in you who loved to sing and dance...

I know I broke your heart,
But that was just our life's worst part,
What you saw was not true,
You know that the only person I love is "YoU"

Just say yes and we will be together and for ever !!

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hope you all would like it
don't copy it it took lots of eforts
Edited by hottytotty - 11 years ago

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ksgluv thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
its so cute u have expressed their feelings so very well👏
may they can say this to each other too in the serial😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww beautifully written

Da way u exprsed asad zoe flings ..are just wao ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just perfect ❤️
It couldn't have been more perfect than the poem is
Totally suiting both of theirs condition
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When I was reading your poem last episode was looming in my memory... guess that was the purpose...
Beautifully written... like a song meant to be sung by broken hearts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksgluv

its so cute u have expressed their feelings so very well👏

may they can say this to each other too in the serial😆

thank you and i don't think it will be in the serial🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you everyone 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww soo cutee !
love the way you express Asad and Zoya feelings Great yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinshukkiaashiq

Awww soo cutee !
love the way you express Asad and Zoya feelings Great yaar

awww thank you so much 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...cute and sweet...
superbly written...👏

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