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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
*Sob Sob
What kind of ending was that? 😭
It was beautiful yet sooo sad
Great OS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
you killed him💔
but beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
loved it pallo... heartbreakingly beautiful...

judging by everyones reactions, you might as well hv been gul khan, who (apparently) made barun sobti quit ipkknd... :)
cmon people...its pallo's story...she can end it the way she wants to...dont get senti...!!

Very excited every time I see a PM from you...your last OS on AsYa was also brilliant...pleasure to read... do keep writing...you stories are absolutely beautiful...

what was that post script tht u deleted??

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
oh...and about the lines of poetry... i knew the moment i read the lines that i hd come across them before...but just couldnt place them...so turned to google...and found the name... "The Highwayman"...class IX english I think? long long ago...

but brilliant lines...and thats why they seemed familiar despite the number of yrs that hv passed since i last read them...

aptly used in ur story...so poignant!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Thanks for the PM dear ... 🤗


As I've come to expect of your writing ... it was stunningly beautiful ... can those words be used to describe a piece of writing ??? 🤔 ... Yes ... it can and it will be ... by me !!! 😆

And ... I cant believe you had the nerve to try and kill Asad off !!!!! 😳

Dont ever do that again ... EVER !!!! 😆

PS: Can we expect another OS ? Please ?



😆😆😆 I have the nerve. The show Asad is annoying. I needed to kill him just once for all the shit he dished out earlier 😉
Hope to write more. If the show picks up it's pace am sure I'll be more inspired...even though I have exams and sooo jobless. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: What_the

oh...and about the lines of poetry... i knew the moment i read the lines that i hd come across them before...but just couldnt place them...so turned to google...and found the name... "The Highwayman"...class IX english I think? long long ago...


but brilliant lines...and thats why they seemed familiar despite the number of yrs that hv passed since i last read them...

aptly used in ur story...so poignant!!



Yes, The Highwayman!
My favorite poem. 😳

All the wrong guys always sound sooo right. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
And thanks people for the kind comments. 🤗
Glad you found it heartbreaking.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
started like dream, ended like nightmare. It was beautifully written! Though am keeping it at that Asad fainted at the end.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Nice piece.
So was it really a one shot or asad will one day wakemup from his slumber party?
Luvd the way u wrote psychotic tanveer scene. It creeped me out.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Nice piece.
So was it really a one shot or asad will one day wakemup from his slumber party?
Luvd the way u wrote psychotic tanveer scene. It creeped me out.



OS sweetheart.
I wish I could write a continuation or something...but I got my exams on.
Am writing OSs outta sheer boredom. U know, outlet and all.
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