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yanka

@yanka

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

As usual impeccably beautiful!!! thanks!!!

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-
Res

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I see that mbbs has messed with you your brain. Badly😆
But because medicine is not the strongest forte of Indian soaps, I am going to believe that Asad lives on because you have not bothered to clear up anything. Lets just say it was a 'miracle'😆

Now to the OS!! Please don't go away ever again!! I have not read such a beautiful OS in ages!
Asad flirting= OMG! And he managed to carry it off!! Till date I have not been able to imagine him flirt because...well...the idea just seems SO impossible! But reading your OS made it look so simple and made me smile from ear to ear.😃

The Highwayman reference- I totally love you for it!! 🤗 It is one of favorite poems along with Lochinvar, Horatius At The Bridge, and so many more!! You won my heart with it(figuratively ofcourse)!

The logic and Asad manning up-I could actually cry for this one(out of happiness)!! He felt the pain and didn't just fall unconscious but actually fought like...like...well, like a MAN should!! He even stopped her from injecting that drug in him!! The essence of logic is what stood out for me in the whole OS

Tanveer the new white witch- you know how to make a perfectly good villain! 😃 And thank you for making Asad fight her!! Jammy pushing Tanu is something that I have yearned for!

The heart wrenching end-I can't hate you even if I want to for it because it was so well written! I loved how he says goodbye to everyone and narrates those lines to Zoya again. It was just...beautiful! No other words can I find right now to describe it! 😳

Welcome back Pallo! 😳

I love Lochinvar, The charge of the Light Brigade, Ode to the west wind and another poem which I can't remember right now. 😆
And yes, you can have you're miracle. I didn't use to word "death" for the very same reason. Depends on how you want it to end. 😳 I
I tried to make it as logical as I could.
How do u drop flat on your face as soon as you get hit on the head? Like, couldn't he have turned around and seen Razia? Apparently not. 😆
Glad you liked this.
I actually teared up while writing the last bit. Such a emo fool I am. 😵

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE
Nooo. I want a happy ending - please continue!

Originally posted by: Arnavarmaan
Did u just kill him off
Plz dont do that
That wud let tanveer win
:(
:(

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs
I can't believe you did that.

I really can't.

*sigh*
-Raina

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
why are you making me cry ?😭
you killed him ?🥺
WHY?????????????

🤗🤗🤗
I tried not to. I really did. But in my head I couldn't help making it that way.
Let's say he fainted away due to the blood loss. That'll be more fitting.

Edited by Lhethal.Me - 12 years ago

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
Good Lord, so sad and beautiful, started off like a fairy tale, ended in reality 😭

Really, really wonderful!

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
still i can't ignore your beautiful writing .
it was sad yet beautifull😭

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
nice os

Thanks dearies 🤗

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Asad just DIED?

Oh Freak! U wanna kill me right? I can sense it. 😳
I'm sooo writing an alternate ending to this. 😵

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MissDiva

@MissDiva

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

OMG! You mentioned aashiqi 2 at the end!!😆 you know what i was listening 'tum hi ho' when i opened your post. And i was like numb. I was emotional at the end. 'tum hi ho' had added immense emotions in your os. It was beautifully written. 👏Seriously i loved it. 👍🏼