{Don't Go Away} ||An AsYa Three Shot|| pg 13 updat

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

awesome...superb...thts love...u trust the person u love..conversation cn solve country problem..why not love...good one...

yes in 3rd part i want a tannu a 10-20 slaps...zoya uske balo ko pakad ke khiche...tht will be funny to watch...

pari

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

even i hope the QH goes the same way

they stil get married and then she runs off to ajmer

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indira

@saijahnavi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Nice Update.Luved It ❤️

Thanks For Pm.

Do Continue Soon.

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Thank you for the pm love it

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

I am smiling through tears! Amazing story! Thank you for this! 😊

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

where is the third part dude...u should have written the third part, the tannu punishment part first...I bet all are eagerly waitig for the punsihment to happen first rather than the lovey dovey sccenes...

do update soooner...

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Wow...u are really really awesome...this is great...asya reunion...u could hav written so more about how Asad punished tannu...about slapping or something...but I wil miss this...coz this is over... :( but I am happy that there is great ending...you are awsome writter... :)

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

It wasn't cheesy, it was amazing and a very happy ending. Great job!!!

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
Res im baaack!!! 😆
oh my god!!!! how can u write sooo well?

did I told u tht u r a FAAAB WRITER...

ur writings olwaaays makes me feel sooo goood... 👏👏👏👏

it ws such a complete part ... 👏👏👏

wid love "zoya's love 4 her phuppi , najma n her ASAD" , "ASAD'S love 4 his ZOYA" ❤️

it ws such an amaaazn updt!!! 👏👏👏

loved d way asad 4 searching 4 her

n moreover hugging d photo of zoya...

d updt ws quite touchy also ...

awww d most beautiful part of d updt ws d last convo of asya...

I ws awe struck...

awww finalllyyy finallly they both confesed it...

fianllly thy r together...

A PERFECT UPDT!!!!!

TNX A TON 4 D PM!!

OHHH WOOOW YIPPPE THANNX 4 CONTNUING IT IMWAIIITN EAGERLYY...

Awww!!! Thanks!!!!! Your comments always make me want to write more so special thanks to you!!!! I am really happy that you like all my stories!!!!!! Thanks again!!!!!! 😊🤗

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika
Wow...u are really really awesome...this is great...asya reunion...u could hav written so more about how Asad punished tannu...about slapping or something...but I wil miss this...coz this is over... :( but I am happy that there is great ending...you are awsome writter... :)

Don't worry there will be a punishment for Tanu! And I can't wait to write it!😈