{Don't Go Away} ||An AsYa Three Shot|| pg 13 updat - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
awesome...hope the same would happen in the show too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
fab TS..
IF ONLY DIS HAPPENED IN THE SHOW..
ANYWAYS MASHALLAH KYA KHOOB LIKHTI HAIN AAP..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awsome updates ...u are such an awful writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
When will we get part 3??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Najma and Dilshad were watching T.V. on the couch. Well Najma was, Dilshad was busy wondering what was taking Asad and Zoya so long to get home. Asad called Dilshad in the morning to tell her that an important thing came up and he and Zoya had to go immediately for a day. He promised her that they would come back by 2. It was after 2 and they weren't home yet. Not only that, Tanveer came back happily and told Dilshad that it might take Asad and Zoya a while to reach back home. Frustrated, Dilshad was about to make a phone call to Asad when the door opened and Asad and Zoya came in. Najma stood from the couch and went to hug Zoya.
"Bhabi, Bhaijaan, I am so happy you guys are back!"
Tanveer came to see who it was and she was shocked to her eye.
Zoya was standing there with Asad and she was alive. She blinked a couple of times to see if it was true and it was not only her who can see Zoya and hoping that it was not Zoya's ghost coming back to haunt her.
"Zoya?" Tanveer said rather shocked than surprised.
Asad looked at Tanveer angrily and went up to her.
"Jamm-"
Before she could finish what she said, Asad slapped Tanveer.
Zoya, Najma, and Dilshad were shocked by the slap.
"Asad?"
Dilshad asked
"No ammi, this woman hurt me, hurt my Zoya and she will pay for it!"
He slapped her again and this time so hard that Tanveer fell and her contact dropped from her eye revealing her stone eye.
Dilshad and Najma were even more shocked by the stone eye
"T-Tanveer? Your eye.."
Najma stammered.
Tanveer stood a little shaky and shocked.
"Asad, I can explain!" said Tanveer
"No! You have explained enough, now its my turn!"
He turned to Dilshad and then spoke a little hurt that Tanveer betrayed him and his family, "Ammi, Tanveer lied to all of us! She lied about her factory, her eye, everything in order to get money! She even lied about our friendship."
Zoya went to Asad's side and put a comforting hand on his shoulder.
After that he continued, holding the tears, "She tried to hurt Zoya so she can get out of her way of getting me."
He looked at Tanveer angrily and said, "She didn't want me, she wanted my wealth, my money! And in order to do that she tried to kill Zoya. She put a live wire in her bath tub, but luckily I saved her. She even tried to kill Zoya with the chandler, but I was such a fool to think that someone tried to kill Tanveer! So in order to do that she set herself on fire and even cut herself!"
"She even took advantage of our friendship and on the nikaah day, she tried to use me she tried to.."
Tears started rolling out of his eye, but Dilshad understood what he meant then asked painfully, "What happened after that beta?"
Zoya then spoke instead of Asad, "I ran away to Ajmer because of what I saw, but I married Asad for you and Najma. Tanveer also reached Ajmer and tried to kill me there. She pushed me off a cliff. Luckily I found a branch and held onto it where I climbed up and Asad was there to save me."
Asad spoke again regretful," I was so stupid! Zoya told me all this and I still didn't believe her."
He then looked at Zoya teary-eyed and said, "I am sorry Zoya."
Zoya looked at him understandingly.
Tanveer then went to Dilshad and said, "Kala! Please believe me I did this for a reason!"
But Dilshad slapped her and said angrily," Baas Tanveer! You broke my trust and used me son! For what? Money! You even tried to kill my bahu and I will never forgive you for that. You are a shame to all woman! You don't even deserve to be called a woman! Allah will never forgive you for this Tanveer!"
Tanveer said crying, "kala-
Dilshad raised her hand to Tanveer's face and almost yelled, "DON'T CALL ME KALA!"
Najma tried to console Dilshad, but looked at Tanveer disgusted.
Tanveer broke down and said, "Yes I did this!"
Then she went up to Asad, "But for you Asad! I love you!"
Zoya angrily, slapped Tanveer and yelled, "SHUT UP TANVEER! YOU DON'T DESERVE ASAD'S LOVE!"
Then there was a knock on the door and the police came in.
Once lady officer came up to Tanveer and said, "You are under arrest for attempt of murder."
They hand-cuffed her and then Tanveer looked at Asad hopefully and begged, "Please Asad! I am your best friend!"
Asad looked at her angrily and said, "You were never my best friend!"
"Take her away officer and make sure to lock her up for at least 10-17 years!"
They took her away with Tanveer yelling, "No! Asad!"
Dilshad went to Asad and hugged him and then Zoya and said, "I am happy that you both are fine."
"Tanveer will get her punishment."
Asad hugged Zoya which surprised her a little and he said, "I am sorry Zoya for not believing you."
"Its ok Asad."
They both kept on hugging when Najma cleared her throat and they broke the hug which lead to embarrassment and blushing.
Dilshad laughed and said, "Don't worry, you both have enough time for this stuff."
Then Najma spoke excitedly and said, "Well lets go in your room bhabi to see what you brought for me!"
Dilshad and Najma went inside. Zoya was about to leave when Asad grabbed her hand and pulled her closer to him.
"Asad. What are you doing? What if ammi sees us?"
"No one will." He said naughtily
He kissed her cheek and when he was about to graze around her neck, Zoya pushed him and blushed
Asad turned around and crossed his arms.
Zoya went up to him and hugged him.
Asad hugged her back
"I love you Asad" said Zoya lovingly
"I love you to." said Asad
The End!
I hope you guys liked this part!!
I am sure Tanveer was punished with enough slaps! :D
Anyways, please comment and like!!
Thanks for reading!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
i love you for this. Kas ye show main v hojaye toh maja aajaye... Amezing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Ufff!!!! Loved those slaps! Lekin phir bhi enough nai the xD LOL Maaan loved this ending! The kiss was just shooo shweet! Perfect! Aik dum chikaas wali story hai :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
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LOVED THIS!!! God. I can only hope that the show does her revelation and punishment justice like you've done. But I have a feeling, that when Zoya finds out she's pregnant, she won't want her to go to jail. Maybe to a nice padded room 😆
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
hey
that was a great ending
perfect
Tanveer got what she deserved
and Asya were just sooo cute😊
great job
thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
i really want this to happen on the show...
Very nice update

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