| Together | ~ An Asad-Zoya Drabble

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Here it is - Shar, Gie, Rin, Fiz, Suppu - The Forever Velle Res Group :P I LAU you guys. Like we LAU WeChat 🤣 I usually do not dedicate drabbles to anyone. But then, with us, 'usual' is right out of question, now ain't it ? On a serious note, you guys do not know how much you mean to me. I lub ju crrazzy lasses ❤️ 🤗

There. Even the Mehendi ceremony was over. Now they were forbidden from even seeing each other. And here he was, still unable to tell his to-be wife that he had fallen in love with her. Asad Ahmed Khan made his way outside the four walls of his house to get some fresh air and think about something that'll stop his mother's taunts and help him confess his feelings to the love of his life.

Asad.There it was, proudly resting on her hands. Every lady lover's dream - the name of their love on their hands in mehendi, majestically telling the world they officially belonged to him now. Zoya Farooqi felt butterflies in her stomach as she looked at herself in the mirror. Asad Ahmed Khan's to-be wife. She covered her face with her palms shyly and ran outside to get some fresh air and calm her pounding heart.

*crunch* - A leaf trampled.
*tap tap* - Footsteps.

Both of them cautiously lifted the climber plant off the netted wall to find the source of the sound. With double the speed, they let go of it and turned around as they realised it was none other than their to-be spouse. The same person they'd been thinking about.

"Aa-aapne mujhe dekha to nahi?" Zoya spoke awkwardly, to break the ice.

"Ji nahi! Aapne mujhe dekha?" Asad retorted, equally awkwardly.

"Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

They breathed a sigh of relief. Seeing each other after the ceremony and before marriage was considered a bad omen. Silence prevailed as none of them spoke a word. But the same thing was going through their minds. The same feelings.

They closed their eyes and enjoyed each other's presence. On one hand, there was this longing. The feeling of being so close yet so far..physically. While amazingly, even after being so different, so far, they were close, very close emotionally. Still facing the other side, each raised their hand toward the wall, toward their love subconsciously. Suddenly, their fingers touched.

Eyes jerked open.
Hearts beat faster.
Fingers intertwined.
Breaths came shorter.
Soft smiles adorned lips.
And a lone tear escaped as eyes closed in satisfaction.

None knew how long they stood there. Feeling the touch, the love. Neither did they care. Both of them could easily spend the rest of their lives standing like that, with that one feeling. The feeling of being together.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres

I lub ju mooore! Much much moreee, meri Basanti!

Amazing piece btw! And to think that u didnt like it!

Bohot awesome hai! This is how it should play out in the serial!

Ye CVz ko bhej to zara!!

😆

Ab to khush hai na? Tere inne saare drame k baad maine Unres kar hi diya!!

Aur tu hai ki... 🥱 karti hi nai. Hunh.

Anyway, i laued it!

-Navri/Error 😉 😆 👏
Edited by stellababes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First and foremost - I love you more 🤗

"Eyes jerked open.
Hearts beat faster.
Fingers intertwined.
Breaths came shorter.
Soft smiles adorned lips.
And a lone tear escaped as eyes closed in satisfaction.

None knew how long they stood there. Feeling the touch, the love. Neither did they care. Both of them could easily spend the rest of their lives standing like that, with that one feeling. The feeling of being together. "


these lines took my heart away ... babe I dont know if I ve told you this before or not...But lady you are an AMAZING writer 👏
awesome blossom wala drabble!!
I toh louued it ...puchieee 😳
Edited by giee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Meri BHB🤗

Mai first page pe ⭐️

Tu inna aacha kaise likh leti hai? 😕

AsYa akward😆

Innka kuch nai ho sakta🤣

Waise ye inni jaldi khatam kyun ho gaya?

Mai kinna scroll ki par den it clicked ki its over! 🤢

Mera poppat😆

In all jakaas tha😉👏

Thoda aur lamba hota toh aur maza aa jata




Luv Ani❤️
Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved for ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and... you get the point 😆 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome :)
but it was short :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rinnie.

Reserved for ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and... you get the point😆😛



I hate you -_____-

Tu ruk. Jeena haraam karti hoon main ab tera

WhatsApp and WeChat, here I come 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was wonderful !!!

Thanks for the pm ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Allah Miya! You manage to leave us breathless even with such short pieces! You are freaking awesome!

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