AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

D'aww!!! Beautiful! I absolutely loved this chapter!!!! No doubt...amazing! I hope we get to see this in the show! But we'll see I guess tomorrow! ahaha for me its tomorrow! As it's still sunday here! -.- damn!

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: irock321
D'aww!!! Beautiful! I absolutely loved this chapter!!!! No doubt...amazing! I hope we get to see this in the show! But we'll see I guess tomorrow! ahaha for me its tomorrow! As it's still sunday here! -.- damn!

hahaha aww I'm glad you liked it

It's still sunday for me too! I'm in canada! you? 😊

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

well...that just stole my heart ❤️

so looking forward to the third part - as usual, fantastic writing 👏

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

OMG! *Le me wipes a tear*

The last line!

"Aapne yeh nahin socha, ki aapke daard se mujhe kitni takleef hogi?" 😳

God! I loved it totally!

Please update soon!

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

A huge round of applause to you for writing this!!! 👏

Brilliant and beautiful!!!

You described their feelings and actions so beautifully...i coould feel everything you wrote! you have a magical talent dear!

i am so sorry i couldnt comment earlier, i didnt log in to the forum in this weekend coz i had an exam today...but thanks a lot for the pm!

cant wait for what you have in store for the last part!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Res? So late I know!

Unres, sorry!

First of my lovely, you are a wonderful writer. The first chapter brought tears to my eyes, I don't think I cried as much watching the episode. My poor Zoya bearing it all for her love Asad, the piercing pain she was going through all gone with Asad's one smile giving her all strength she needed. Beautifully written my love.

Haiii, the second chapter was as beautiful and heart touching. Seriously, their eye lock was so cute, I had butterflies in my stomach, yes despite her going through so much pain, like Zoya, his one look calmed me down. The table scene was so so cute. LOVED IT! I was bursting when she was trying to hide her pain from him and finally not being able to take it she let it out. WONDERFUL JOB lovely! I totally felt her pain and Asad's urge to know what was going on. As much as I wanted her to tell him it was Tanveer, I'm glad she didn't because he's a fart when it comes to that chudail! Arghhh!!!! GOSH I HATE THAT BI****! Sorry, the recent spoilers are pulling on my last nerve!

As always, beautiful! LOVED IT SOO SOO SOO MUCH! You write amazingly my dear, and this just proves how talented you really are, mashAllah!

P.S. Will give feedback on the last chapter seperately. Sorry for a bakwaass comment as usual.

Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

"Aapne yeh nahin socha, ki aapke daard se mujhe kitni takleef hogi?" line was a master stroke

wow wow hope asad says something similar tom

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Loved it looking forward to da next part

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Illow

@Illo

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

You have to continue, NOW!! Just read both part in one go and they're amazing!!😃😃😃 I so love Asad in his romantic mode!!😃

And thank for the PM😃😃

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Omg this was so beautiful! I love your writing, woman! Its like all happening in fromt of my eyes!!! And believe me i havent even seen the epsiode as of yet! Loved loved loved it! This was like picture perfect, so romanti! Zoya's happiness in the littlest of things and thinking her pain is worth of them all! Asad's smile, Asad's happiness ! So so beautiful. CONTINUE ASAP! 😳