AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: abuhurairah
Wow this was so romantic it's sad that its ended but really well written keep up with the good work thanx for the pm 👏 👏

Aw thank youuu 😳

I might do an epilogue.. if enough people want it.. but yeah I thought making it into TS was better than all at once 😆 it was really long as a OS

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hi_its_me

@hi_its_me

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

fabulous update...

geat ending..

luvd it...

pls post ur alternate ending aswell even though it has tanveer in it i can't get enough of ur writing...

post it soon and tnx for the pm..

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

bohat pyaari ending hai. I wish Asad wud put meds on her hands in QH too.

Anyhow da confession was just so heart touching.

really well written. I hope u'll write more on the Nikkah fiasco too.

hope u'll recover soon sweety.

love,

Nimra.

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Wow..awesum part..luvd it..thnks 4 pm..its enf...plz write smthng else too..wil luv 2 read more...

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Aww.. that was a sweet update..
very nice TS.. enjoyed reading it dear ,, well done keep it up...

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Awesome yr..
It was so sweet of Asad..
He confessed ahh yeah!!!
If u don't mind posting the part 4
Then u can
Coz I don't mind reading :p
It was awesome man..

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

You are one terrific writer!

You'd written the last part so brilliantly!

I loved the ending! Hope the same happens in the show! *wishful thinking*

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

This part is definately the best

Loved the way you pointed out the scars thing

Asad's confession was amazing

Zoya's strength made me love her more

P.s. hope in show too Asad applies the mehendi a bit or it falls on him

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

really nice...thnks 4 d pm

pari

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Thank you so much for making my day!!! i loved this last part...i wish you would have written another chapter to this but...anyhow, i loved this!

i so so wish this is what should have been shown in the show too, but that's just wishful thinking...you wrote this so beautifully i could imagine it happening right in front of my eyes...beautiful, simply beautiful! Hats off!