Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
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Amazing part continue soon and thanx for pm and plz pm me for next part
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I loved the update.. The way she developing the bond again. With the same people who were some times back her lives most important part. I thought when she visits Najma's college some people will recognize her coz of the college fest fiasco where zoya protected Najma from the guys and she went to jail and the entire college was gaga over zoya, like what a brilliant girl she is.. But, still I loved it how you described the engagement fiasco through Najma..

Asad has learned to trust her.. and believe her for what she say and dos. That is good.. They are again coming closer to one other.. That is good.. Loved the update..

You are doing it well.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! I like the fact that you show Zoya interacting with other characters besides Asad. Her relationship with Asad is important, but I also like her interactions with the others. Thank you for the PM!
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sooo cute. loved it. update soon
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that was indeed lovelyyy dear :)
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Such a cute n heart warming chapter...plz continue very soon...curious to know what happens next...
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Originally posted by: Enchantress

I loved the update.. The way she developing the bond again. With the same people who were some times back her lives most important part. I thought when she visits Najma's college some people will recognize her coz of the college fest fiasco where zoya protected Najma from the guys and she went to jail and the entire college was gaga over zoya, like what a brilliant girl she is.. But, still I loved it how you described the engagement fiasco through Najma..


Asad has learned to trust her.. and believe her for what she say and dos. That is good.. They are again coming closer to one other.. That is good.. Loved the update..

You are doing it well.

Continue soon!!1

Dee


Thank you for noticing all the things that I have put in. Makes me feel good as a writer. 😊 Scenes/dialogues are there for a reason. Zoya loves Asad, but she also loves Najma and Dilshaad a lot. It is important that not just Asad, she gets her family back.

Oh...Zoya's heroic act, when she visited the college last time - I had it in my mind and was going to include it, then completely forgot it. Thanks for pointing it out. It is important. I just modified the chapter and added about this incident.

Thanks a lot for your comments!

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