FF - Untitled is now The sins of the father (Epilogue Page 112) - Page 7

Wow nic ipdate luvd it...hopr
e sooon zoya gts 2 knw...asad n tanveer r nt married...

Awesome update... Make tanveer curse her fate even more and give us atleast a glimpse of the past...
Continue soon and thanks for the pm...

NICE UPDATE..LITTLE CONFUSED ASAD & ZOYA ARE MARRIED???

WOW...what a confrontation of Zoya and Asad...Yaay...Tanveer and Asad are not married...u just reminded me of Arshi aka Sarun with 'kyun dard hai itna tere ishq mein' but y so short update...Plzz...gives us a lamba wala update soon...thanks 4 pm

u r so evil.😈..that was such a short update and we didn't even got a proper conversation between asya...and that tanveer😡, ise hatao yaar warna mera dimaag phat jageya aur ise curse karte karte that chuki hoon par ye hai ke jati hi nahi..kabhi kabhi lagta hai ye jammy aur jammy ki rani dono ko is duniya se bahar phenk dena chahiye...ab ye tanveer ne phirse ku6 kiya na to i will definately kill her.😡.loved zoya and her attitude towards the so called best frnds...had hai asad as usual zoya pe gussa kiye ja raha hai, agar wo use 6orke gayi to asad bhi koi dudh ka dhula to nahi hai, usne bhi to ku6 kiya hoga na..har insaan ka ek had hoti hai sehan karne ka aur ab zoya won't tolerate his nonsence..pata nahi dimaag hai bhi yaa sirf khali box hai...amazing update dear👏👏⭐️

I am hooked to your story! Its giving me goosebumps! You right too well. :). You could also name your story "Main Jahan Rahoon..." from the song ... As both Asad and Zoya lived apart, yet, with each others' memories and love... Continue writing... :)

f**k off u Tanveer. Cnt soon

great story!!! Asuggestion ... name the story UNDEFINED ...:) take it if you like it :) and plz pm when you update next...!

great update.waiting eagerly to know what happened during zoya's absence.continue soon

This is awesome but a bit short...