FF - Untitled is now The sins of the father (Epilogue Page 112)

Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

finally we see thoda sa smart wala asad

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amri123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

hey

great update

loved it

jealous Zoya was fun to read about and Asad pacifying her was equally as fun

really enjoyed that

and wow the adopted Aakeer ???

nice

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

loved it, especially the song and Asad teasing Zoya in the kitchen

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cool_sri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

very nice update ..asya so sweet of them they adopted aakeer...

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Regina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Another gr3eat update, i m greedy for morrre

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Hey dear,

Both the 8th & 9th updates were awesome. its soo sweet to see Asad teasing and responding to Zoe. I just wish they stay together happily and dat bitch gets out forever. I can understand how low can a person fall for money, she seriously disgusts me. I am glad Zoe didn't fall for her trap and did wat was completely right.

Asad's way of expressing his love for ppl is something beyond me. like he seriously shows to be emotionally challenged but he is not even a bit of it. I am so proud of de, dey made me smile n warm my heart wid da gesture of adopting Aakeer. u know wen Asad had her sign da papers, dis came into my mind but then I thought no it cudnt be, but I was really happy to find it true.

plz cont soon.

love.

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princessradhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

mindblowing👏👏..just amazing update⭐️⭐️..the way u mend some of the dialoges from the show itself makes it more believeable, i loved the scene where zoya confronted tanveer with so much passion and when she said her name at the end, zoya ahmed khan, made the scene one level up from the real scene that we watched in the show..just wow👏

finally, asad is taking things in his hands, he should have done all this earlier though it was not his fault, he made tanveer sign the adoption papers but this billi😡 keep sticking to him as if he is made of fevicol😆...obviously my best parts were the asya scenes, their cute banters, asad trying to manofy zoya was most adoreable scene😳🤗...and at the end when asad sang for zoya, oh god that song was just perfect, dilshad was ri8 that zoya is the angel in their life, asad conveyed that so beautifully..❤️.

ii also loved asad- zoya's scene with dilshad..she made them realise what the other is feeling, she told asad about zoya's abbu and on the other hand she made zoya know that asad's life is nothing without her, he needs her every single moment of his life

beautiful part written with so much intensity...do update soon and thanx for the pm😃

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Parneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

It was an awesome part:)

Loved it..

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...MonaCo...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Again , a very well written chapter. I will not repeat my previuos thoughts - you should be a professional writer! Well, I just did repeat myself. Keep up the good work.

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