||Asya FF|| Bring me back to life - pt 23 -pg151!!

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Fimmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Poor zoya!

Nice part!

Cont soon!

Thanks for the pm! :)

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This is so heart breaking. But beautiful. You have quite the imagination. I was so sad reading about Zoya. Her past, her gruesome, and sordid past. No child deserves to see that kind of cruelty. I hate that she tries to commit suicide everyday. It's sooo sad, and unfair. Poor girl. But I love that Asad is drawn to her sadness, and thinks of her constantly. Anyone would be affected if they took a a few seconds to try understand what she's going through.

Very moving hun. Loved it. Please update soon :)

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

good update😊 poor zoya...

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

LoVE tHe BAnnEr...

awesome piece...loved it..

he loves chatting...lively house..

expecting the unexpected...

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

beautiful update!!! very well described...zoya is going to try suicide...

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Siniya

@Azya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Poor Zoe... do update soon plzz

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I m very touched by this story..the amount of pain zoya carrying since childhood is unbearable..no child deserves that. When I read this chapter, it took me back to all the homeless ppl we see on roads lying without food and roof..I just can't see the sight and want to help each and every one of them...but they say, u can't change the fate...

I m really enjoying Asad's character in this story cuz he was the ne who understood wat was hidden behind those teary eyes of the girl lying on the bench lifeless.

Plz update the next chapter soon...I m in love with this ff..and want constant updates.

Best of luck!

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

It just touches the heart...it is such an emotional n heart-wrenching story...you are a very good writer...a very nice update...plz plz continue soon...keep up your amazing work...kudos to you...