Good Bye... Last Part Updated July 25

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

aww - so glad
think about it ayaan- why humaira's face?

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I thought you only wrote 1 part, the 11 th part is awesome... Too gud yaar... Love your story :)

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asma

@Asyadeewani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hey that was really awesome please pm me when u update

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Superb! Loved the update a lot...can't wait for u to update further.

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Sorry I have been so slow to update. Will try to be more regular. Thanks for all your wonderful comments. Keep them coming, they encourage me. Also, I welcome your ideas, :) feedback, or criticism also :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85252983�

Part 12, is on the first page itself its titled, The Plan.

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

feel he has 1% reservation. .

but still wants to hold on to zoya..

so will do anything for her..

which is enough for her..

and reading at a stretch. .😆

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: rajnid68
feel he has 1% reservation. .
but still wants to hold on to zoya..
so will do anything for her..
which is enough for her..
and reading at a stretch. .😆

Yeah I tried to make my Asad a little more believable. He has realized his love for Zoya so he agrees to go ahead with her. He also doubts tanu and investigates, but Tanu outsmarts him... So atleast my Asad has a reason to not disbeleive her. I made him go to Kanpur and check her factory, and I made him meet the doctor. I also made him already aware of the pregnancy, AND AND AND I made Ayaan come to the factory to save Billi (as Asad texts him as soon as he reaches the factory to come help) which is why Rasia can not hit Asad, and nothing like disgusting SR happens. Wait for that in the next episode. :). Give me some ideas for their game plan to pardafash billi if you like... :)