Good Bye... Last Part Updated July 25 - Page 12

Awesome! Can't wait for the next part!

Last and final part uploaded... :)

Thank you Thank you, Thank you for all the good feedback. I am lucky to have your encouragement all this while...

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This is for everyone who liked my post, read it, commented on it, and encouraged me to keep going...🤗

wooow happy end love it so much

So good Mona! loved the ending. Actually, i feel like the real story might end something like this? U think the candle scene was planned...did Zoya plan for Asad to catch Tanveer? Something tells me it might go down something like this. I loved your final hug you gave them at the end. It was so real and sweet. I could feel it.

You are on a roll! :D

Beautiful ending ! Beautiful !
I loved how you incorporated the facts from now into your story and made Asad and Zoya stand by together to push Tanveer off.
And I loved how you said "Love makes you rise"; true love that is.
So it all started with a metor shower and another meteor shower brings a new beginning for them. A life full of love and togetherness.
Keep writing more and if possible PM me please?

Originally posted by: priya713

So good Mona! loved the ending. Actually, i feel like the real story might end something like this? U think the candle scene was planned...did Zoya plan for Asad to catch Tanveer? Something tells me it might go down something like this. I loved your final hug you gave them at the end. It was so real and sweet. I could feel it.

Okay, so whens your next one?? hehe.. jk. YOu can take a break but hurry back!

Priya, I am blushing here, because I honestly think I don't write that well.😳

I really feel that the candle scene is planed, though lea has warned me several times not to keep my hopes high. From the very beginning, I dont want Tanveer's pardafash to be where Asad accidentally overhears everything - because no matter how dramatic it loks, it means, he only trusted Tanveer. I always wanted that they show some trust between AsYa. AT this time, in the serial, it is missing from both ends. When Asad did not trust Zoya, things were different. Today he would trust anything he says at the drop of a hat, as their relationship has grown so well. But TODAY, it is not Asad who does not trust Zoya, it is Zoya who does not trust Asad. Because, I would like for her to tell Asad everything, including how Tanu is blackmailing her, and then both of THEM TO FIGHT TOGETHER. I always always always, wanted this. But I understand that in the serial things may not pan out that way, because... of drama/trp etc. So,I will keep my hopes high, but not be disappointed if it does not turn out that way. For me, if it does happen like that, its a big step in AsYa relationship.

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Beautiful ending ! Beautiful !
I loved how you incorporated the facts from now into your story and made Asad and Zoya stand by together to push Tanveer off.
And I loved how you said "Love makes you rise"; true love that is.
So it all started with a metor shower and another meteor shower brings a new beginning for them. A life full of love and togetherness.
Keep writing more and if possible PM me please?

Thanks for the lovely words! I will try to come up with some more stuff, soon.I have ideas. :). I am glad you loved it, because I was very underconfident of my writing when I first started. it was only due to encouragement of readers like yourself that I came this far.